OS : The Unknown Souls ( updated)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Salam and hi! I just introduced myself in the morning.

I know it's too early to write something on a show which I had not completed as yet but, I am bored and internet provider has not fixed the site yet😭( aesi aesi galiyan nikal rahi uske liye k Kia btaon😅)

Maybe, anyone has write on this before but still a new take from my side.hope the forum likes it.

OS : The Unknown Souls

A teaser

Babita fixed her dupatta and tied a loose knot of her hair.she looked herself in mirror and put on her bindi and turned her gaze towards the clock.it stuck 7:00 am. She looked at the reflection of Minni in mirror and smiled. She was almost out of bed sleeping with mouth open. She had an important exam tomorrow for which she has asked for a night stay which she reluctantly gave her. She was awkward to stay alone with Hanuman after what was happening between them in last few days. So , she thought to silently stay at naeem bi house tonight. She quickly turned towards balcony to start her day with prayers and closed her eyes. She suddenly felt restlessness .she quickly opened her eyes. Something was weird in this morning. It was not soothing as usual. She shrugged her thoughts and started her prayers but, couldn't concentrate.
" Kuch to hai Jo sahi . Kuch bechain krrha hai jese kuch ..ya koi ...pareshan hai." She sent a silent prayer for every loved one and Hanuman, just crawled in her words and prayers!
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Meanwhile, Hanuman tightly shut his eyes to vanish this day from his life.he doesnt want to wakeup ,talk and or even breathe on this day.it was a hard night for him remembering her. How some years back, this night they held each other, talking about their future, about their baby unknowing about how destiny was planning against them. A lone tear drops on his pillow like many others last night and he knows, they will be flowing the whole day. He shut his eyes again and drenched himself in the memories of imarti ,whom he lost on this day!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful and emotional start , Please continue soon :)

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I know this is what teasers are supposed to do, but STOP TEASING US AND POST THE FIC ALREADY!! 😆

It's a really beautiful start, I can't wait to read more! ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I love how you've connected the two restless souls subconsciously.

Waiting!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: riti4u

Beautiful and emotional start , Please continue soon :)

Thank you dear.☺️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manasi_MD

I know this is what teasers are supposed to do, but STOP TEASING US AND POST THE FIC ALREADY!! 😆

It's a really beautiful start, I can't wait to read more! ❤️

😂 I will update in evening. Thanks dear

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

I love how you've connected the two restless souls subconsciously.

Waiting!

Thanks dear for lovely words☺️

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Hi attiya...

Welcome to the forum....

Btw very nice and emotional start...

Continue soon.....

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Teaser is already very exciting

Waiting for update

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Originally posted by: Shona1991

Hi attiya...

Welcome to the forum....

Btw very nice and emotional start...

Continue soon.....

Thank you dear☺️

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