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Posted: 6 years ago
#21

loved it, and the way he gave her attitude was awesome ...continue soon buddy! =)

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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

I like the update. I like how shaping the characters. They could have shoe prerish in this way in the show but the CVS r so uncreative šŸ˜.

Plz update next part soon .Thanks.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

PART 3

So, from this chapter i am turning this 'SS' into 'FF'..

some more points...

1. My characters are different from serial...

2. You will see different Prerna here and so as Mr. Bajaj

3. I cannot promise sanity of them... They can turn grey whenever they like, for each other or for others

4. Everything is not just black and white here..

5 . The story will progress slowly..

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Life is unpredictable, it never give you what you asked for but it’s own surprises which you feel like shock when you got them…

Prerna start believing this line , 3 months ago if anybody told her that she will not marry Anurag but another man and live with him … she will laugh on their faces … and now she is living this life.. which come as a shock at first , but now it is not same as before.. yes everything is changing in her life , and she have no more control over it… she don’t know what she feel for this man.. no she is sure she is not in love with him , but this is something else which she never read in her books ..

Whenever , she saw him .. her eyes move on their own on his body , she start breathing heavily and heart rate rises.. she likes when he talk to her, she like when he argue with her and if she admit to herself then she secretly loving the power and possession she got after being Mrs. Bajaj..

But her morals and ethics dejects her whenever she start enjoying her life , she sighed when she will be able to happy in her life with her will..

He want to make his distance from her but , now things went out of his control he always have be there for her , whenever she needs him , in last two months he don’t know how many of his meetings either canceled or rescheduled because of her..

And on the top of it , the way she effected by his presence he is sure she is fascinated with him.. like a teenage attraction.. she really behave weird around him now-a-days , her eyes and body movements while she stare at him, thought he don’t know… make him loose his control.. and he have to leave that place..

He can tell, she is liking her life ,this power .. whenever she order the staff for work and scolded them , the look on her face is priceless like a queen of Bajaj kingdom.. so, a part of her actually enjoys power but her upbringing and ethics pulls her down..

Her life is scheduled now, she getup and prepare for breakfast , make Sneha ready , do all his work and make them go to their places , then rest for some time and then decide menu for lunch… then she studies for exams, he insist her to complete her education and she pleased with his idea and so she continues her studies from home..

In evening she wait for him with evening snacks and they have small family time , three of them.. he talks to Sneha about her day ..and she just stare at him.. this is her new interest , she want to know all about him.. everything..

Then she prepare for the dinner and then comes her favorite part of day , conversation in balcony past dinner.. he asked her about her day and discuss some of the things with her , and yes after this he solve her doubts in her studies… and she impressed with his ways of making her understand things..

By the way, they are sharing room and bed as well… but not like normal couples,...

Both were lying on both of their sides...

She don't know that he make a web around her, to make her busy so she is cutoff from external world.. He suggest her to complete her studies , it will help her to stand on her feet and he want her to accompany him in his business, not such a attitude and sharp mind should waste away...

He do everything to keep her mind busy, and he is getting positive results, but he knows she keep check on Busus via shivani time to time ..

And he decided to play safe with Mr. Basu, because now Mr . Basu have nothing to loose but he have...

And at this thought, he again feel that his deal with her gave him extra benifit ... 'Fear'

Fear of loosing what you have , he never have this emotion but or it is hidden somewhere, but Alas! She find it for him and present him as a wedding gift...

He knows they are progressing in their relation, and she did have grey shade who like him and his methods , and he is happy that he is the only one who discover that side of her..

At least he share something with her, which Mr. Basu doesn't..

But it doesn't mean that he will let her take her liberty with him, at least not in near future, until he is not sure of her loyalties..

He did trust her, but his luck is very bad with women and with this love and trust... His insecurities will never fade away...

Both turn towards each other simultaneously... And looking in each other eyes..

" why i always feel like drugged, whenever i look into his eyes..."

And her hand slowly reach for his face, as she touch him he closed his eyes...

" i know your intension, don't behave like my husband..

You have no right to touch me, only Anurag have this right...

Everything is deal for you , just give and take.."

He opens his eyes in rage and jerked her hand away..and left the room..

She left sitting there in shock and... She feel rejected.. After how many efforts and courage she took this step towards him.. But failed..

She closed her eyes and put her head on headboard... Did she ruin everything build up between them in these two months..

How will she face him in the morning..? And most importantly herself, she don't know what she was doing and why.. But she always lost control on herself in front of him..

But she knows she hurt him , and he will not forget things this soon..

So, it means she forget Anurag...

No , but she don't remember when she last cried for him..

This man... He also take over her tears for Anurag...

Because today this water running from her eyes is for him, not for...

Edited by 123g - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Story is forwarding in a natural way no over dramatic things.i liked the pace .It's beautiful. Thanks for the update.plz continue soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

wonderful update. the story just got so interesting. so, Rishab understands Prerna's new obsession but he's still not ready to completely trust her which is so relatable . Keep going please. waiting for next update.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: MOnamy11

wonderful update. the story just got so interesting. so, Rishab understands Prerna's new obsession but he's still not ready to completely trust her which is so relatable . Keep going please. waiting for next update.

I will, just encourage me like this.. It really work

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Posted: 6 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Moushumi

Story is forwarding in a natural way no over dramatic things.i liked the pace .It's beautiful. Thanks for the update.plz continue soon.

Thank you, you like it.. And yes you reply what you feel like..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Really! You had to end it there. continue soon. I want an update.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Waiting for the next update😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

Continue soon

I understand why he jerked her hand off and left he does not know how she feels and if had responded what if she got back to my body my soul dialogue he feared rejection.

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