Guddan FF - What I Deserve (Part-12 UPDATED on Pg-20) - Page 11

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Sorry yaar, yeh sab meri college hein... Aaram se ek pal bhi mujhe nahi chodthi! I'll try to update soon

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Originally posted by: PrincessPooh

Sorry yaar, yeh sab meri college hein... Aaram se ek pal bhi mujhe nahi chodthi! I'll try to update soon

Dont be sorry bs aise hi jaldi jaldi update krte rhna😛

Bahut acha tha.....cont soon......i thunk sge should have a separate room and tadpao jindal saab more😃

Nice update..

I guess both should stay in different rooms..

she should trouble him a lil more😜

Plzz continue soon

Hey guys, Hope you are ready for Part - 9!

Guddan decide to stay in the guest room as she didn't want to go to their room as it brought back memories. Dadi, Durga and Lakshmi tried to explain but she was adamant on staying at the guest room.

The Jindal family was having dinner with Guddan after a long time. Akshat made sure to cook food that are liked by Guddan. Guddan too noticed this but she didn't say anything. She knows that this is his way of repenting. And she is not ready for another patch up now.

D: Tonight, after a long time, we all are having dinner together. Thank you Guddan beta, wapas aane keliye.....

Guddan just smiled but it didn't reach her eyes, Akshat noticed. Durga and Lakshmi smiled while Saru just waved it off. (So in my story, Saraswathi didn't change and still only wants the Jindal's money. Nobody knows her except Guddan but she is quiet on this, for now).

Akshat looked at Guddan who was quietly eating. She was not talking to anybody. He so wanted to hear her talk. Dadi noticed his tension.

D: Khaana kaise hein beta?

Guddan looked at her.

G: Ji...... acha hein!

D: Tuje pasand aaya? Pata hein Lalla ne sab apne haaton se banaya.... sirf tumhare liye.....

Guddan looked at Akshat and Akshat gulped his saliva. Was she mad?

G: Yeh sab acha hein Dadi par yeh khaana banana se meri decision nahi badlegi.....

D: B-beta....

G: Humne khaana khaliya! Hum ja rahe hein, room mein!

With that, without looking at anyone else, she just left to the guest room. Everyone was silent. Guddan came to their house, but she was still acting like a stranger for them. Akshat was frustrated. He knows he is wrong, but she didn't had to hurt his mother like that. He saw his mother's sad face. She was so happy when she heard that Guddan is coming to her house but now...

Guddan was in her room sorting her clothes in the cupboard when Akshat came inside the room without knocking. He held her hand.

G: Kya kar rahe aap? Chodiye hume!

A: Tum maa se aise kaise baat kar sakti ho?

Guddan looked at him for a minute and struggled to get her hand out of his grip.His grip became a bit tighter.

G: Chodiye hume! Aur aapko aise humara kamre mein aane keliye permission nahi hein.

Akshat had enough.He pinned her to the cupboard which was closed and locked both of her hands above her head with his one hand. Guddan was starled with his move.

A: Oh.... so now I want to seek permission to come to my wife?

Guddan tried to stop him but he continued.

A: Haan,I know you are going to divorce me, but we are not divorced now!! You are still my wife! And you decided to divorce me, I didn't! And You are the one who wanted to be in this room. It was your decision. But you don't have any right to hurt my Family's feelings!

G: D-dekhiye..... chodiye hume....! Dard ho raha hein.......

Seeing her eyes moist, Akshat felt his anger slipping out. He loosened his grip and let go of her. Guddan pushed him and tried to leave but he caught her hand again.

A: Guddan....

G: Kya? You want to scold again! then scold me, beat me, kill me!

A: Guddan!!!

Akshat was shocked. Never in his mind, he thought that!

G: Shouting won't make our past change, AJ! Yes, you are right! Its all my decision. Because now this is the only way. Let me tell you that, you were the one who was going to marry that Antara when I was still alive. And weren't you the one who told me that loving me was a mistake?

A: G-guddan....

G: And now suddenly, I'm your wife again, after you all got to know the truth. What if you all didn't get to know it? Would I be still your wife? No, You will also decide to divorce me!

A: Guddan mein----

Guddan stopped him.

G: Bas! I don't want to hear anything, Aur haan, mein yahan sirf Chutki aur angad-ji ki shaadi keliye aagayi hu! Aur kisi keliye bhi nahi!

Akshat stood silent. What had he done?

G: If you have a problem of my behaviour, let me tell you that I was feeling the exact same for the last couple of weeks. Every single one of you whom I considered my family, whom I believed they'll trust me, left me. And you expect me to smile and act like nothing happened.

Guddan folded her hands infront of him.

G: Maaf karna lekin yeh Guddan se na ho payega!

Akshat was rooted in his place. Guddan realised that she had gone a bit overboard.

G: Dekhiye.... Now we should only need to think of one thing, and that is our siblings wedding! After that we will go on our own ways!

Guddan then proceeded to leave the room,when she heard his question.

A: Will you ever forgive me?

Guddan stopped then without turning back,she said,

G: I've already forgiven you because as a human being, we should forgive one another. But let me tell you something AJ, Trust takes years to build but seconds to break!

Akshat closed his eyes. Yes, And she is right but now he will rebuild that trust.Even if it takes his whole life.

Guddan knocked on Dadi's room.

D: Haan kaun hain?

G:...... Hum hein, Dadi!

Dadi opened the door in a flash.

G: B-beta... tu iss waqt---

Guddan just hugged Dadi and cried. Dadi was shocked. She made her come inside and made her sit on her bed. She gave a glass of water to Guddan which she accepted it wholeheartly.

D: Guddan Beta-----

G: Humein Maaf karana, Dadi! Humse phirse galati hogayi!

D: Beta, what are you saying?And why are you apologising?

G: Kyunki hum bahot buri hein, Dadi! Humne aapko aur iss parivaar ko bahot dukh dediya!

D: Beta aisa kuch.....

G: A-aisa he h-hein, Dadi! J-jindal-sahab ne kahan ki aap.... humare aane se bahot khush the.... aur hum hi aapko dikh de rahe hein! Hum bahot bure hein!

Dadi wiped her tears and kissed her forehead.

D: Beta.... I'm still happy that you are here with me! And I am the bad one here!

G: N-nahi Dadi----

D: Beta, mujhe maaf karna.... The things we done to you could not be erased! We have all done wrong to you and you have all the rights to be mad at us! Just don't leave us!

Guddan hugged her.

G: I don't want to leave anyone Dadi! I love you and everyone here!

D: Lalla se bhi?

G: Humein ab kehna toh nahi chahiye, lekin agar Guddan par kisi ka haq hein, toh woh sirf Jindal-sahab hi hein! Hum unse bahot pyaar karthe hein.... khud se bhi zyaada.....

D: Mujhe bahot khushi ho rahi beta, ki tum aisa mahsoos kar rahi ho......

G: But I'm scared Dadi! I'm scared that he and you all will leave me again! I don't want that! That's why I was ignoring all of you! If anything bad happens again, I don't think I will live!

D: Sssh.... Don't say that beta! Mujhe mere kana pe bahot bharosa hein! He would be with you!

G: I wish he would solve all our problems, Dadi!

D: He will, beta... He will...

And so, both decide to sleep together as they felt they should atleast be happy and together now! What they didn't know that Akshat was standing and listened to all their conversations. Akshat's happiness knew no bounds. His Guddan loves him! But is scared that he'll leave her again! Well, he should clear her,right?

A: Guddan..... Mein maanta hu ki mujhse bahot badi galati hogayi..... I promise that I'll fix everything between us. I won't let you divorce me.... and You will be with me for eternity.... That's your Jindal-sahab's promise!

And finally done with Part - 9! Hope you guys liked it! Be sure to like and comment!

So now, What is Akshat going to do now? To make his Gudiya realise that he loves her way too much!

Stay tuned for more updates! Till then this is Pooh, signing off! Toodles!🤗

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Amazing part

Nice conversation between dadi and guddu

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Awesome update!.. 👌 Well whatever Akshat is planning, it better be something good because guddan seems adamant with her decision even though she still loves her Jindal family..