Hanita confession- 3 scenarios- small OS

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello friends

Let me warn you beforehand I am not a writer like you all.. I write everything on my phone never proof read it 😂 so please do excuse my typos but I have come up with 3 scenarios as how the confession might or can take place between Hanuman and Babita.

I would add more scenarios later but for now.. hopefully you all will like if just a little 😂

Scenario 1

Babita stops Khatri from bad mouthing Hanuman Singh in between their confrontation .. like a shield she jumps in between Khatri & HS and says .. “he has done no wrong , he gave refuge to me and Mini when everybody turned their back on us..you’re doubting a person who took care of us as his own family and proved to be a father Mini always deserved and desired ! You’re doubting a man who in-spite of loving me never forced his love and waiting patiently for me to take a stride..Yes I love him but I respect him more as a person” there was a stun silence.. Hanuman was still confused and in trans thinking “ did she just propose “ then he looks towards Mini and a faint smile & drop of a tear fell.. that it just happened! HS thinks..”All the planning and plotting as how I’ll proposes went awry & a person like Khatri made it happen.. I am indebted to him “


Scenario 2

Babita was sitting in the balcony.. thinking about life.. from where she started and have reached..from being a homemaker she has become a businesswoman ..when Mini comes I’m going for a party at Bobby’s house..” ok replies Babita.. even Naem Bi is not here.. I guess am all alone she murmurs to herself.. when she notices HS nudged open the front door.

Seeing her HS ask where is Mini ? Babita doesn’t responds.. and leaves ..”that’s strange” HS thinks to himself and decide to enquire more ..she notices Babita standing in balcony when drizzling starts..come inside he shouts at Babita.. but she has made up her mind with her back at Hanuman Singh she says” how I have struggled against my feelings as Society is uncouth and unacceptable but can no longer suppress her hearts voice..and suffocate herself..yes I love you too maybe far before you even realised your love for me” ..leaves a drenched HS standing there like a statue..moment seized there.

Scenario 3

Lala comes running in the haveli Sir saheb Sir Saheb you’ve to leave now.. HS asks “ ki hoa Lale kyun itna thak rahe ho?” “Woh builder ne gunde bula rakhe hain and took some people as captive as they were asking to return their money ..”yeh bahut don bana phir raha hai.. aaj yeh gaya mere hathon se” he gets up to wear uniform and leave.. Babita comes with tea but notices they have left already .. what must be the issue as he left in such a hurry..builder lived in dark, dingy & filth place..Hanuman Singh jokes “Swach Bharat na pahuncha yahan” when he spotted movement in one of builder’s house windows. he silenced his partner & drew his gun. it was time to spring into action.what are you doing here?" Builder spat angrily reaching for the revolver in his pant pocket but HS was too quick. he fired a single shot at him..but it hit both. As builder shot at HS too leaving stunned Lala behind when he fell backwards ..police force cane just to save all and commissioner ask to take him to hospital asap

In haveli

Babita was panting up and down like something untoward is about to happen when she her phone rings & she runs.

She reaches the hospital where HS was being operated she enquires what happened “ behenji main baad main bataunga abhi nahin” came a reply from nervous lala. Suddenly OT light switches off both run to ask” he’s doing fine and should be awake in couple of hours” doctors retorted . Babita thanked heaven for their mercy.. by this time all reached hospital. After couple of hours nurse comes and informs they can meet the patient. Babita gets up in jiffy to go in.. Mini wanted to join but was stopped by Nanembi. Babita notices frail looking HS looking at her “kaise ho kiryadarni ji” she asks him to keep quiet and says before I start thinking about others let me speak “ I love you I LOVE you!!" With her large doe eyes flooded with tears she confessed. HS quips don't you ever smile? why are you always so sullen? even when you smile, you don't smile properly. HS chided Babita playfully

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Posted: 6 years ago
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These are all very cute!

Btw “Swach Bharat na pahuncha yahan” cracked me up 🤣 Hanuman Singh ji, mother daughter ke aane se pehle aapke barsaati pe bhi kaha pahuncha tha Swach Bharat 😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manasi_MD

These are all very cute!

Btw “Swach Bharat na pahuncha yahan” cracked me up 🤣 Hanuman Singh ji, mother daughter ke aane se pehle aapke barsaati pe bhi kaha pahuncha tha Swach Bharat 😆

I write on phone so they are silly but I shared anyways.. I think after writing this I shouldn’t post anything for couple of days.. that will be my punishment 😂

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hehe nice ..little and cute.. I observed that it is babita only who is proposing here :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: riti4u

Hehe nice ..little and cute.. I observed that it is babita only who is proposing here :)

Yes I wanted to write an elaborate one but rather than OS I wanted to predict the situation so have written this rather.. somehow I don’t see HS confessing it will be Babita .. I think even in the show

And thank you 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Aww its cute one :) Who said you are not a good writer ? You are very good :):) Do write more .Will love to read your stories . So many talented writers we do have .Sucha talented forum :)

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