PYAAR KO HO JAANE DO~~AN AKSHAN FF~~( UPDATED chapter3b pg 6)

PROLOGUE:

BOY: Hm dono best friends hn na guddu ?? Tum muje kbi nhi chodogi hna???

GIRL:Haan Aashu mai tumko kbi nhi cholongi

BOY: promise??

GIRL: Haan plomise😊........

Kidz and there cute talks ........were unaware of the cruel plans of destiny.......what was almighty planning to do??😕

The story is about two best friends who got separated in childhood but......destiny has its own plans😉😳.......how they got united ...to know stay tuned.......luv viditian

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Charactersketch:

ACP AKSHAT JINDAL: 28 yrs old mr akdu ....... Most handsome eligible ACP in whole indore.....bhukkad....best in cracking pjs ...never allows anyone to call him by his name😆

ASP GUNISHA GUPTA :aka guddan by her near nd dear ones.....caring...beautifull .....lives in delhi.....24 years old most confident and bravest officer in delhi.....but never forgets her guddanpana 😆

Hamara pyara kaanha g ka doot PERVY

MRS . SANGEETA JINDAL : aj's mother

BHUSHAN GUPTA: guddan's father

DCP SURESH DUTT (to be revealed)

ASP SHIVANI SHARMA (to be revealed)

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CHAPTER 1..

GIRL: Ye lo Ashu maine tumhale gudde ko leady (ready) kr dia

BOY:thanku ..maine bi tumhari doll ko ready kr dia ..

GIRL:ab hum inki shaadi krwaenge...haine Ashu

BOY :haan aur fir bde hokar apni bhi kr lenge ...

GIRL: tum muje kbi nhi chodoge hna Ashu??....

BOY: haan ...mai tumhe kbi nhi chodunga ...............,........................................................peep *peep* peep * ......Akshat opened his eyes with a jerk and found himself sleeping in his car ...putting his head on steering wheel ......but what was that.....no no !!not the sleep....the vision he just got ...was that a dream ...was that real ....peep *peep* honk !!honk!! He again came back on earth and first started his car and made his way to his most fav place....... the cbi bureau.....but ...all the way he kept on reminding the vision .........dream .......hallucination...god knows what ....but all of the above his attraction was stolen by the girl .....who was she?? ...... Moreover calling him 'ASHU' as no one dared to call him even akhat except his mom and here she was referring him ashu......well he never heard anyone calling him ashu ...nor his parents...nor family ....neither any of tge acquaintance ....but still it sounded verryy familiar to him......now coming back to the gurl ....who was she??????.........well in the vison girl had no face....what a comedy ...no what a tragedy ......he should think about the case this time but his thoughts were occupied by the girl ........NO!! He cant dream of a girl ......this was not his personality ......this was not the great AKSHAT JINDAL!!.....whom everyone knew .......and with these thoughts he stopped his car in front of his fav place ...and made his straight way towards the entrance and saw a women standing .........indulged in reading files she didnt noticed him entering ........woah ! He exclaimed she was really busy ......he tip toed and shouted gooooodddd morninnnnggggg MS. ASP the lady turned slowly .......smiled ........kept the file on the table ........and this was the time when she found him running with herself chasing him like tom and jerry and after a small show of running and chasing he found himself on the ground ....with numerous of things on him .......he could see her throwing all the possible things throwing on him ........but after a while she stopped and offered him hand to make him stand but he was he .....he shook her hand away and stood up on his own showing his style and swag...yeah this was he ...MR.RUDE ...MR .AKDU the real AKSHAT JINDAL ...........the lady as usual smiled in sarcasm ..........and went to work .......he also without wasting another moment in this thats occupied his seat to read the case files........well it was 10th time in 15 mins since he started reading files .... When the lady looked at him with a curious face ...well this was enough.....he asked what was it .....only to get a reply that wasnt he forgetting something ??? He thought for a while and replied oh yes!! And saw a bright smile on her face ....and said thnku for reminding that he forget to give pedigree to jimmy this mrng ......and this was the time he felt himself committing the most dangerous crime...if not expressions of her were enough to make him feel that he should run......as any moment time bomb would explode in form of her .......which proved true as he felt a heavy file straight on his face...........goddd!!! What he did now???? And with that the lady bursted that how he could forgot about the first anniversary ...as they completed one year in relationship .........how he could forget this ....was the only thing he kept on thinking while making himself stand ......well this was not the concern for now but rather stopping her ...who was now leaving.....he ran behind her calling out her name .....but after all she was his girlfriend....who could never listen anyone ...but however he stopped her ....apologised....listened her bursting out ...but in the end to stop her he exclaimed ...chipkalii !!....and the lady who could kill anyone by just a glare.was now running ......he got amused but controlled.....did a little hush hush !! To make lizard go away....and turned to her ...and again apologised and finally hugged her....to mend his mistake he offered her a dinner date ...to which she readily agreed......but there trance was broken by the call of SURESH SIR who had called up just to get informed about the new case on which they were working now.......he hung up the call and went inside ....only to find her busy with the case files again......they finished the work by the evening......everything was set .....they were about to leave for their date when his phone rang!!! ......................

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