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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update....

Sooo Maaneet & baby finally celebrate their 1st Holi...

Geet & Piya baby gone with geet parents to spend some time with them...

Loved d way they accepted her their grand daughter..

Piya baby to gelled up with them tooo.....

Maan is missing them....

Even piya baby also missing her dad...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Superb update....

Piya baby got fever due to her growing teeth...

Finally Maan came to meet them specially his Piya baby...

Loved d way Maan understand Geet nd. Didn't shout on her ...

Loved their beautiful family time...

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Posted: 6 years ago

PART - 24



She said coldly. Her eyes looking out of the window. Maan looked at her in shock. Though she said in a tone less voice but the words she threw at him carrying a grief,might be.



Maan not able to decide what she wants. She told him how easily her parents accepted him into their lives. He is the one who wasn't ready. But what was his fault in this. His lost soul live a dead life. He wasn't in a set of mind to mingle with people. When your heart dies no relationship matters and they are new to him. New relationships needs extra attention and Maan wasn't ready for this effort.



Piya was his Tia's last symbol and that made him possessive for her. But all other? Whatever he done till date only for Piya's sake then why he didn't accepted Mrs. Handa's proposal. After all Piya's happiness connected with it. He thought and reached to HM in evening. Piya hear his foot steps and grinned a wide. She made a joyful sounds even before he entered into the main hall where she was playing with her grand mother.



"Uuuuu" she signals and alerts all.



"Shona Papa is not there. So today only Mumma and Piyu okay." Geet telling her because she didn't want to give any false hopes to her baby.



But Piya was confirmed and clapping in happiness. Before Geet objects again Maan entered inside and shut her mouth with his presence. Geet not able to believe on her eyes. Avantika too turned happy as Maan obeyed to her wish. "I am so happy dear that you accepted my request." Avantika was happy and Maan welcomed her gesture with smile. "Now you relax I will arrange coffee for you." Avantika left and Piya raised her arms towards Maan.



He too picked her up and kissed her. Piya to imitate and kiss him back. "My baby. See papa come for you darling."



"Mum, ni, uuu..." Piya told something with signals.



Maan was confused but Geet cleared it. "She is telling us that her uuu is come but I denied as I am not expecting you,but glad you come at least for her sake. Ni means nani. Mumma ko or mujhe bata rahi hai that she was right. Her uuu is come. Maan she learned nani." Geet was so happy with his arrival and keep explaining him about Piya's progress.



"So ab nani bolna b seekh liya? Baby then why you call me uuu? Say Papa." He was dead. No Interest in any thing but suddenly a new urge strike into his dead heart. Seeing Piya calling others correctly he also wants to hear papa from her mouth. He wants to hear her calling him Papa in her sweet voice.



Geet noticed the desperation in his voice. Craving of a father. First time Maan showed sign of life. Geet not expected any thing from him for her as he already told her that he only love Tia which is a biggest truth of their life.



Though its a very small sign but a new hope popped in her heart.



"Geet ye ab tume decide karna hai what you want from this relationship. Coz Maan se kisi b tarah ki pehal ya effort ki ummed mat rakhna. Now you decide tume Piya k maa or baap bane rehna hai ya uska maa-baap banna hai. Choice is yours Geet." Suddenly Pinky's words striked Into her mind.



"Maan don't loose heart. Dekhna she will call you correctly and very soon." RP to arrived and assure his son in law. "You know what when Geet start talking what she called me? She called me" RP was sharing his memories with Maan but Geet interrupt.



"Dad aap kya leke baith gaye. Chaliye pehle fresh ho jaiye." Geet tried to distracted him.



"I will sweetheart. Ha to main kya keh raha tha..." RP again tried to continue,but Geet not allowed him to complete.



"Dad I said go." Geet stare him furiously and forcing him to leave. RP don't want to upset her daughter so he start walking from there.



"Mr. Handa wait. Aap bata rahe the what she called you." Maan stopped and asked him to complete his words. Geet's eyes widened on his eagerness. In past 4 months he hardly show any interest in her words and suddenly he act completely strange. First he came last night,not scold her. Then he accept her mother's proposal and came for them and now he showing interest, other than Piya.



Though his center of interest is still only a Piya. Some where he wants to analyses what a little girl called to her father.



"Ya I was telling what she called me..." RP to stopped.



"Dad please no. You embarrassing me." Geet whispered to her father.



"It's ok Geet. He is your husband." RP ignored her warnings and told Maan. "She calling me Dudtaap." Maan was confused what kind of word is this. "Don't get confuse. Dudtaap mean Rudr Pratap." RP explains and Maan was now in more confusion, while Geet was annoyed.



"Then why she calling me uuu?"



"Uski marzi. Bachhe marzi k malik hote hai" Avantika clears his doubts.



After dinner Maan moved into Geet's room with his small family. All the time he was only thinking when and what Piya called him. He was laying, keeping Piya on his chiseled chest. Geet was in washroom. She come out and joined both on a bed. "So you called your dad Dudtaap? So funny na?" He said in a flow without restricting himself. A many new changes he showed and gave shock to her.



"Maan don't tease me. I was only 9 months old that time okay. Upar se dad ka naam b kitna bada hai." She defends rapidly in a harsh way.



"I am sorry." Maan apologised and switched to silent mode. He closed his eyes,moved away from her in a way.



Geet saw him and cursed herself. "Damn it Geet. How stupid you are. For the first time he initiate talk and in a normal way and you interrupted." Geet glance at him but now he was loathed.



She wants to talk but not an easy task. Maan talk only when most needed. Geet twitching her lips and laid on her side as there is no use to hope. Her eyes were lingering on him only. Sleep was far away from her eyes.



Piya wriggles in sleep and gradually slipping on other side. She was about to fall but Geet act fast and wrapped her arm around them. Maan was also aware and hold Piya but mother inside don't want to take risk so she too act fast. Both glance in each other's eyes. Geet snatched back her arm. "I am sorry. I thought you slept." Geet stole her eyes and dragged herself away.



Maan was silent not reacting for few minutes. "She is my baby and I am aware of her safety first." He told that Piya's safety is more important for him then his sleep. He was only laying not sleeping.



"I am sorry." She apologized once again.



There was a killing silence between both. Geet turned and tried to sleep,when Maan again initiate talk. "Geet can I ask something from you?" He was mild in tone but serious on the same time. Geet swift and nodded. Maan inhale sharp. He was not sure whether its right or not but he wants to. "Geet don't take me wrong but I don't understand your behaviour." Geet's brows knotted on his strange comment. He turned his face to looked at her. "Geet you love Piya so much. Cares for her every need like a true mother. I have no doubt on your love for her. But..." He take a pause and that few seconds killing Geet. She was scared of his words. Because she not able to figure out his agenda. What actually he wants to ask.



"Geet you told me that you wanted to abort your child." Geet sat back hearing him. Her body shakes violently. Maan to slipped and half laid. Geet was staring into his eyes. "You love child of someone else but hate your own offspring. Why? If the reason is Vikram then Piya is also his blood then why this partial behavior?" Maan threw his query which quirks her. She never ever imagined that Maan could ask this ever. He talk less but observed. Her words was struck in his mind. Before answering its very necessary for her to know why he wants to know.



"I will give you the reason but can I ask why you want to know please." Geet question back instead of giving answer to him.



"Don't take me wrong Geet. If you don't want to reply then I won't ask again." Maan said softly.



Geet looked at him with a sad face. "No I want you to know. First time you tried to know about my feelings. My thoughts. Or else," she paused. "I don't know exactly,but I think you still not trusted me or having good opinion about me. Some where you considered me a reason of Tia's misfortune." Geet stare at his dead eyes. Neither he showed his feelings on this nor he tried to clear the air. He was all quite. He had looked at her with confusion and what seemed close to panic before anger once more filled those lovely eyes.



"You want to know the reason behind my partial behaviour then listen. Piya is our daughter. I don't know any Vikram." She said straight forward. Maan open his mouth to interrupt but she not allowed. "Let me finish Maan. May be you forgot what Tia asked us the moment she come out of comma. She took promise from us that we never let Piya know about her and Vikram. So this is the last time we are talking about him. Aaj k bad us aadmi ka naam nahi liya jayega. Kuchh nahi lagta wo Piya ka. She is our daughter. And now about your question then Piya and I share a heart connection which is pure and divine. You know what I was hating you that time for kidnapping me but when I saw her my heart goes for a kid who was alone like me,motherless, helpless. I saw myself in her. Which connected me with her. When I took her in my arms for the first time she was crying badly but when I cocooned her she turned calm. That moment I can't explain. Meri life us time hopeless or darkness se filled thi. But she gave me reason to live. I thought no matter what you did with me but I help this little soul who had no fault. But in my case. Vikram used my body for his lust. I loved him and gave myself but he was using my body to fulfill his lust. My feelings not matters for him. The offsprings you are talking about was a result of his lust and my stupidity. If that baby comes to the world I would never live in peace. That child of his keep reminding me of him and his cheatings. After knowing about his sins you tell me how can I love that symbol of him? In a way he raped me. And that kid keep reminding me that whole life,which I don't wants.



Now you said that Piya was also a result of his lust. But I wasn't aware of this. For me she is your daughter. Or jab tak sach pata chala tab tak to ye mere dil se jud chuki thi. Bhale maine ise janam nahi diya par ye mera hissa hai. We both share same pain,which connected us. Main Vikram k fareb ko janam nahi dena chahti thi. Piya b hai uske dhokhe ki nishani but I wasn't aware on that time. Maan she was two month old when I got her and since that day we share a bond. She accepted me as her mother and my heart too goes for her. Piya meri friend Tia ki akhri nishani hai. Iska us ghatia admi se koi rishta nahi hai. Or na ye kabhi janegi uske bare me. Maan mujhe or kuchh nahi kehna. Apko agar lagta hai ki main selfish hu ya partial hu then it's fine. But I can't explain myself then this. " Geet said in a flow. Even Maan don't interrupt and keep listening to her silently. Geet poured out her heart before him and now seeking for his reply. She wants to know what he was thinking now but Maan was still. His eyes were empty and face stern. Her heart ached but she didn't asked and stirred to other side. Maan turned off the lights and both laid not sleep,only laid....



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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing update

Maan accept Avantika request and comes to HM . Piya is happy after seeing him and Geet was shocked as she was not expecting him . Geet's father revealed what Geet used to call him in her childhood . Dudtaap 🤣 now even I am also curious to know why Piya called uu to Maan .

Maan wants to know about the reason why she loves Piya this much and want to abort her baby . But the reason Geet explain him shut his mouth as the connection between Geet and Piya doesn't need any blood relation , they are connected with their heart .

Waiting for next

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update . maan accepted geet's mom's request and came back to hm in evening . piya was very happy after seening her uuu and geet was surprised . maan was eager to hear papa from piya but his little baby was not ready to call him papa 😉 RP called what geet called him when she was small and that embarrassed geet . geet cleared her side when maan asked her why she wanted to abort her own baby . indeed piya is an angel in maaneet life .

waiting for next .

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Posted: 6 years ago

like geet I too thought maybe maan might misunderstand geet ..

but I'm pleased that he didn't..he understood that geet won't cut her call.how much piya is used to her parents. one day without them made her sad and ill..

I feel bad for geet.. poor girl so want maan love and care that even small things make her so happy ..

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Posted: 6 years ago

A beautiful and emotional update sweetie:):):) I loved the way Maan went back to HM even though its for Piyu baby...No doubt that he feels he is a dead soul & doen't want any form of relationships...But for Piyu baby's happiness, for Geet's words and for the way Geet's parents unconditionally accepted him & Piyu...the soul is coming back to life. Piyu baby is so adorable....How she detected her U's arrival and told her mumma & nani that they were wrong:):):) Shoooooooo cute:):):) The whole scene where Geet was telling Maan about Piya's progress, his eagerness to hear Papa from her mouth & Geet's father talking about Geet's childhood was such a beautiful family scene for me...A sweet loving family scene, hain na sweetie. I am sure with Pinky's advise now Geet will try to take all the first steps into developing their relationship as Piyu baby's parents first and then delve into their own personal one...

I am very happy that Maan is trying to understand Geet's point of view and feelings. When Geet shared what she feels for Piyu baby and her dead child I could feel her emotions very strongly. Beautiful the way wrote and expressed their emotions. Superb & awesome update sweetie:):):)

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awsm

He came for his baby,all r happy to see him

He is showing a little bit interest

,he asks her father wt she called him

He is wondering why piyu calls him uuu,he wants to hear her calling him papa,his interaction with her dad is also a improvement in him,

Then their conversation,she answers him

Theirs bond with baby is so pure

😍😍

Edited by NeenaDd - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice part ... Piya name calling is really confusing... Why he calls him uuuu.... Clear this mystery soon .... Maan finally asked the reason for her behaviour but in love the answer she gave.... Its true that when we started loving someone than their past or something like this doesn't matter... Loved her reply

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

Maan came for Piya and making Geet parents happy

Piya is happy for uuu what it means

Maan is trying to mingle with geet talks

Nice one

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