Hello all.
This is Neera. 😛
Guys I wanna ask you all that, kya mera ff acha tha ya nahi. My ff name is -A promise to keep you with me till my death overcome my love for you.
Guys actually response on my ff is thanda thanda. I am not blaming my dear friends who already given their views or those which are busy in their life.
My ff is somewhat romantic, emotional and a bit tragedy.
I don't know ki it is good or not.
Plz give me honest review about ff on the following criteria.
1 . Title
2 . Plot
3 . Kalma Romantic scenes. ( they are not much but part 3 me thoda tha)
4 . Emotional scenes of kalma . ( part 3 )
5 . Kalma moment ( part 3)
6 . Anusar pain. ( part 3 )
7 . Anupriya feelings ( part 3 )
8 Sarthak feeling ( part 3 )
9 . Malhar feelings ( part 2 )
10 Malhar entry and fighting with goons ( part 3 )
11 . Kalyani feeling ( part 1 )
12 . Writing skills
13 . Poetic effect
14 . Kalma magic
15 . A suggestion on how should story unfolds.
16 . Complains about the characters or lost their originality.
17 . Flaws and loop Holes in the story.
18 . My response to comments.
19 . should I continue writing.
Plz give honest answer and you don't need to consider every point but try the necessary ones.
And don't worry I am not going to leave my ff incomplete it is just I am asking what you want from me. I already think about ending which is of 1-2 chapter which is of more or less for both kalma and anusar. Plz also tell me do you want new ff from me ( I didn't write single line of it but full story Al ready cooked up in mind. I will post another post about the plot .if a get a warm respond then I will write.)
Guys I don't want to disrespect any one . It is just I want to know can my writing do justice to kalma .
Baht lamba hogaya. Plz write your views.
Love you all
( This is for the one who didn't read my ff. Here is the link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150803319?tid=5097778
This link is of some random page. For index go on page no1 and first post is index))))
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