PreRish OS- The Fast of Love - Page 2

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

This is such a simple and sweet story. ❤️

Everything from RB's initial reaction to the anger and misunderstanding is well-written. Kudos!

Shukriya ☺️❤️

Originally posted by: shin-chan

Just loved it😳

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

First page na mila mereko 😠

Mila re😆

Originally posted by: .amigos.

Last line ko elaborate kaun karega?😳🤣

OMG I LOVED STEWING, ANGRY RISHAB SO MUCH!🤣 poora din office mein yahi sochraha tha bethke that she was fasting for her ex. 😆 And also their back and forth was so good and when he realized she was fasting for him, aww that smile on his face, so so cute. Him breaking her fast like a giddy baby and his own, involuntary one at that, ah WRITE MORE!

Don't ask me anything about the last line, I'm going to change it soon😫

Achi lagi na? *Phew* ❤️❤️

I'll write more when you write more (I hope you know what I mean 😎)

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But I love it... U know I love this cheesy romantic type stories.....

Write more.... Cheesy... We don't mind it..

Wow very beautiful story of prerish looking forward to start their love stories on show haye kash humein show mein bhi aisa hi karwa chauth dekhne ko mile

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Don't ask me anything about the last line, I'm going to change it soon😫

Achi lagi na? *Phew* ❤️❤️

I'll write more when you write more (I hope you know what I mean 😎)

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Aisi dhamkian nahi chalti.🤣 Part two mein kamse kam 2 mahine lagenge.🤣

Originally posted by: .amigos.

I DEMAND ELABORATION! You also have the option to PM me the elaboration I don't mind.😛

Aisi dhamkian nahi chalti.🤣 Part two mein kamse kam 2 mahine lagenge.🤣

2 mahine ko 2 din mein convert karo

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

2 mahine ko 2 din mein convert karo

Wow.. This was beautifully written..