The Web - Dusted or turn to Dungeon– My Ra4gKor final part Updated - Page 4

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Sumi dear I am barely coming out of this fairyland 👏👏👏❤❤❤ its lovely, amazing, awesome, fiery, sweet, fab....in short too too good❤

Barbie and her Ken are both WOW 🥰🥰🥰 as usual lovedddddd them and the quick bites... tingling... enjoyed it🙈🙈

Caricature theme and the writing....fabulous 👏👏👏

Thank you for giving us an insight into the dark side of this society through your wonderful story.

Waiting for the next😜😜

Thank you Nikki deary dear...🤗🤗

tingle tingle 🙈🙈

And thank you for travelling with me in this journey.

@ Bold Red whaaaat??? Bossy??? who are you?? I have already taken sabbatical.

c ya bye bye 😃

Thanks a lot Smita. That's a lovely comment. Means a lot

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Final part :

At first I want to say about the sadistic fact which made you write this story. I'm anguished about the kid's plight 😢😢. Actually we all are faceing such type of unfortunate events everyday, everywhere, be it on signals, the local transports, but couldn't able to do anything for the helpless children. I must admit that we all are like Aa, always looking forward to Superman that they will come & rescue us from all problems. We say big words, getting angry, saddened to see these harrowing incidents ,but we are so afraid to think of doing something against these heinous people. It is disheartening but the harsh reality & unfortunately their network are so wide ranging that it is difficult to get rid of the deadfall. All these monsters should deserve a severe punishment. Thank you Sumi for writing about such realistic context, shook our minds 👏👏🙏🙏.

Coming to the update, it's nice to see that eventually Laila got out of trauma, breaking the barrier around her, trying to return to normal life 😊😊. Dadda- Roses dance was a pleasurable one😍😍.

Ragkor romance was quite striking. Raghav in the royal attire, Chakor in the pink fairy gown like a Barbie, I just visualized Meejay in these attire 😍😍, made me spellbound. It's her dream come true moment. The green grass floor, the smoke ,the colorful lights, the flowers, the carpet, the moon & stars all were so perfect👌👌, so beautiful like a dream world, made by her Prince Charming💕💕😍😍. Chakor mesmerized roaming around the world,

he's enjoying her joyfulness, her childishness, her teary eyed, he's nodding No, they're drenching in love & passion , the soft gentle kisses, the light music, the romantic fairy dance ,so blissful 😍😍😘😘, You just created magical world for them , like a romantic, dreamy sequence of a film👏👏, I can visualize the entire scene, both were looking stunningly beautiful . I loved the way he described that how he made the dress perfectly fitted for her. He's capturing the beautiful moment to make it a memorable one.Then they're subliming in each other's arms, floated in the love tide, the tent romance gave them divine happiness through it made me blushing🙈🙈. It was so soothing & pure & the sequent part was more igneous & fervid 🔥🔥 . Her offering the thank you demo, made him exultant 😝😝. It's so pleasurable to see that both were drenching in love.

It's great that Aa won the competition, his caricature was selected for the montage of welfare scheme. He's chosen content with the social massage written in Calligraphy was quite spanking 👏👏.

I loved Raghav's word" I can make one for them down but the one above is for my Angel…my birdie…just for you to enjoy the stars, the moon, the sky" while she said roses will be happy seeing the fairyland on the terrace 😊😊. The light & happy family moments on the morning was so delightful. Let them live happily & stay in tranquility for some time until you get connected with another topic. God bless you & your ficfam. Thank you.

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My dearies i have no words to express my feelings and emotions with regards to the love you all have showered me with regards to this story in special. I have been getting lot of DM on my insta and twitter appreciating the same inspite of being very disturbing. Never knew there are many silent readers in the Forum. Thanks all for the views, likes amd taking your time to comment.

Few asked why not all the children are not returning to their home and few asked if the mute boy would talk.

I have mentioned while the thought of relife is there, in practicality there is lot of difficulties and with regards to the mute, unfortunately a tongue is the most sensitive part which has no replacement still medically hence its indeed painful.

Thanks again 🙏🙏🙏for your support.

Thanks so much Sonali for your lovely words dear

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Just read last part it was wonderful 👌👌👌 Raghav dancing with cubes & roses was cute😍😍😍 & laila joining them finally she broke all her walls and her fear slowly go down Then Raghav gave a beautiful surprise to Chakor decorated terrace like a fairyland it was beautiful I can,t come out from this fairyland RagKor moments are on fire as always 🔥🔥🔥 fully enjoyed this story loved the way Raghav said I make another for roses this one is only my princess Thanks dear for such a beautiful story with a social issue ❤❤❤

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I loved it Sumi, it was heart wrenching sometimes but not more than real life. I liked how it was Aayansh who took center stage and not Arjun, being less bold doesn't mean being weak. I think the end was apt, not everything in life has a happy ending.

Loved how you showed how Leila gradually opened up, poor girl she'll be scarred for life.

The Disney princess outfits were so cute and Raghav's surprise to Chakor is the dream of every girl.

Ragkor romance 😍😍, I especially enjoyed the first part it was like a melody.

Keep entertaining us Sumi, it's much needed although I wish you could also write about Sukor along with Ragkor.

Originally posted by: nemo316

I loved it Sumi, it was heart wrenching sometimes but not more than real life. I liked how it was Aayansh who took center stage and not Arjun, being less bold doesn't mean being weak. I think the end was apt, not everything in life has a happy ending.

Loved how you showed how Leila gradually opened up, poor girl she'll be scarred for life.

The Disney princess outfits were so cute and Raghav's surprise to Chakor is the dream of every girl.

Ragkor romance 😍😍, I especially enjoyed the first part it was like a melody.

Keep entertaining us Sumi, it's much needed although I wish you could also write about Sukor along with Ragkor.

Thanks so much Mai. I indeed waited for your comment. True might doesn't matter only mind matters.

Your last line... Writing sukor alongside Ragkor. You know my love for my dude Suraj 😢😢. Though fictional i literally went numb and bit depressed too since nov 19 and took a lot of time to come off till i saw Meejay interview of how happy they were to play Ragkor..

And i am not a good story writer.. As i write when i connect and bring out my emotions twining around the social issue.

I am not sure if i could detach and write Sukor . Hope you understand nevertheless i shall try to weave.

Your words mean a lot to me and you know that.

I wish those writers who have left halfway to continue their stories, the reader in me craving for sukor stories.

Thanks Mai a lot

I understand Sumi, so no worries, but I disagree you're a fantastic writer.

Originally posted by: nemo316

I understand Sumi, so no worries, but I disagree you're a fantastic writer.

Thanks so much Mai for understanding.

And awwhhh i turned into writing because of your motivation always.

@bold 🤗🤗🤗😍😍😍. Feel a feather in my cap 🙏💃💃💃

Sumi dear 🤗

A social tale embedded with the fairytale ragkor moment, cute family moments and thriller action moments,emotional moments, with all doing well is a good combo to read.. enoyed reading it. the bitter truth about that network and poor kids is hard to digest.