PreRish Fictions | Pg19 (To Win and To Lose) - Page 6

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

awwh!💕 This is real romance. Where man understands whats troubling wife while wife knows what her man values. Though troubled she took care of Bua maa. And when he came to know she was trouble he sent his Bua maa off. Aww! These two! I am so glad we have such awesomely talented writers among us who will give us what CVs won't. Thank you so much for this. MATURE LOVE OVER TEENAGE LOVE ANYDAY ANYTIME. 😎

Thanks a Lot Ankie!!!

Yes mature love

Thanks for the constant support <3

Originally posted by: mitras

Very well knitted story gives exactly what we prerish fans want to see. Awesome

Thank you so much! :)

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

#couple goals❤️

Well... yeah! 😳

I loved your updated update on Page 5. Liked this one too. But the pregnancy bit was amazing. Wish you'd continue that sometime. Like your idea of random rambles. ;)

Aww This is so sweet.. Husband doesn’t want work to be compromised and asked the wife to deal both the work and home and being balance but silently make the wife comfortable by easing her troubles. And the wife replied truthfully the reason for the delay in work but want to take that responsibility willingly. This is Marriage it teaches the man to understand the wife and the woman learns to take the responsibility of her husband’s home and everything and everyone related with it ..😊..

Thank you for writing.. I really loved reading it ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

First of all let me talk about the second drabble's second half which I missed...So Rishabh left though he wanted to stay behind and Prerna let him go even if she wanted him to stay back..Both needed the very same thing but they just did not know how to spell it out...But as they day hearts desire always finds a way to happen...And when Prerna needed Rishabh the most he was there right by her side...How sweet...With welcoming a new life, it seemed like Prerna has opened the doors of her life to Rishabh too completely...The PreRish moments were delicate, subtle and a delight to read about...Rishabh's reaction to the bleach smell made me ROFL...Protective much already...I like it...Simply awesome! 😃

P.S. Comments On Drabble 3 Coming Up In The Next Post!

Thank you soooo much! It was such a wonderful read from your side. Thank you for writing this beautiful post!

I'm ecstatic that you got all the underlying meanings, reaffirms my faith in my writing!

Thanks again!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

So now in drabble 3, we get an insight about a demanding Rishabh Bajaj..Demanding for sure, but not unfair...As the drabble began it seemed like that the situation for Prerna got tough and Rishabh had turned a blind eye towards her plight...But then I thought this is Rishabh Bajaj you are talking about and how can he be inconsiderate towards Prerna...He wanted her to create a balance between work and his close relative and she did just that tiring herself out...Though it was she who was tiring herself out, it was he who kept a close watch of care over her...If not that how would he know of her struggles and just the way he is, if first he tried to be a good nephew, by the end of the drabble Rishabh went out of his way to smooth things out for Prerna and turned out to be the attentive, perspective and protective husband...His actions spoke volumes of the concern for her and her parting shot of being Mrs. Bajaj asking him to deal with it, seemed like the tables have turns and we have a new bossy Bajaj on the block, Prerna Rishabh Bajaj...It was a very sweet drabble, that showcased progress in the tale of PreRish, felt in silence, spoken with words and expressed through actions..Brilliant work..Loved it!!!! ❤️

OMG THANKS A LOT!

Bold - yes certainly!

I don't have words to thank you enough for these.🤗

Originally posted by: najma123

I loved your updated update on Page 5. Liked this one too. But the pregnancy bit was amazing. Wish you'd continue that sometime. Like your idea of random rambles. ;)

Thanks Naj!

Glad you liked it. Pregnancy bit is over, maybe them parenting the kid can come sometime later :)

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Advaymerijaan

Aww This is so sweet.. Husband doesn’t want work to be compromised and asked the wife to deal both the work and home and being balance but silently make the wife comfortable by easing her troubles. And the wife replied truthfully the reason for the delay in work but want to take that responsibility willingly. This is Marriage it teaches the man to understand the wife and the woman learns to take the responsibility of her husband’s home and everything and everyone related with it ..😊..

Thank you for writing.. I really loved reading it ❤️❤️

Thanks a lot!

Glad you liked it!

Reserving! Will be back after reading em all.😲

Edited:

Okay WOAAAH! These are legit such drops of mishti, so sweet and warm and so so addictive, please write more.

The first one was so beautifully penned. The aggravation, the complication of all those feelings and then the guilt on Prerna's side. You showed the warmth and care so well. And how they're both aware of each other but there's also this sense of awkwardness, this layer between them. And the permissible by clause line had me! SO GOOD.😆 Total favorite. Typical Bajaj. ME LOVES.

But LET ME BE HONEST, the second one is my favorite. I just love it. I can picture it so well. Him leaving and her not wanting him to go. That radio bit was so good, so much 90s wala nostalgia too. And I love this cocunut wala RB. Oopar se sakht, andar se naram. And then he came back and she felt she was safe. Shit that bit totally had me. Overall, I absolutely love love this one. It's so warm it melts my heart.

The bua maa one is so cute. Like these choti choti baatein really make or break relationships. And the fact that he was so perceptive about this whole thing and eased his wife's tensions. ALSO THAT LAST BIT SO SO CUTE! Ah I can totally imagine it in my head.

You have to keep writing. These give me such a warm warm feeling andar. JALDI LIKHO AUR.😭