SAMAINA TS – LAHU MUNH LAG GAYA Part 2 Updated at Pg 9 ❤❤ - Page 7

Sorry guys mujhe pata hai some of you were waiting for update yesterday but I am a bit sick . 😷😷🤒

So update nahi de paayi and i am still working on it . I want it perfect as its the last update . Pls gussa mat hona. I will try to give it within this week . I think you all will forgive me for this 🙁🙁

WITH LOADS OF LOVE AND WELL WISHES

KRISTY

Guys giving the update in a few minutes.... 😆

To aapne aankhein aur IF ke darwaaze khule rakhna 😆

AANG LAGA DE RE..... MOHE RANG LAGA DE RE - [HOLI SPECIAL] (PART 2)

Hello Dearies!!! I know I am quite damn late but kya kar sakte hai... I was just having some problems and even my exams were going on, so couldn't update. SORRY FOR THAT... I don't know how many of you'll will like it but I have put in all my efforts for this part especially. I think I have done justice with the story. I have also given a small PreeDit part (ab hamari itni acchi kismet kaha ki hume serial me PreeDit mile but this is for all #PreeDit fans.) So here it goes!!! Enough of bak-bak... ENJOY READING!!!

After the Puja, all the male members were dispersed in the lawn area of the white mansion. The elderly ones were busy giving their point of views for or against on how the current generation was changing technologically and the age old pre dominant convectional thoughts were now more practically handled than before. It was indeed a good debatable topic.... The younger ones were busy discussing about their Pichkaris , recent and upcoming cricket matches, colours and ect, ect. Naina , Chaciji , Preeti , Swati And Kamya were helping each others with the food preparations that was needed to be laid after they play Holi. They knew the males will be utterly hungry after the battle of colours and the food must be prepared before-hand so that they don't need to hold their stomachs and sulk around for food. Whereas Mamiji was cursing Naina and Kanji in her mind as how the big palace was not cleaned properly and soon it would turn into a dump ward. Ponnam tried to help her Devrani with some work but Naina refused her sweetly and told her to have some rest.

Soon all the ladies approached the lawn. The Stereo was blazing loudly with Holi songs like 'Rang Barse' and 'Holi ke din me'. Sameer allotted for a place where the Maharaj was busy in preparing bhang with all his secret ingredients. (Okay I am not a 90's kid, so I really don't have any idea that Bhaang was allowed in Ahmadabad or that was known to them or not. So bear with me. Mujhe laga Holi me Bhang to hona hi chahiye... issiliye dal dia... ) The colours were kept on the table near the pool with buckets complimenting them ready to be smeared and thrown at each other's white pristine clothes.

Sameer was searching for his lady love but found her nowhere near his eyesight. The kiss left him yearning for her more and in utter shock too. The feeling was quite magical for them to cherish and Sameer could taste those sweet lips for the rest of his life. It took a lot of self – control for him to not grab his better half then and there, when they were sitting for the puja. After showing a lot of patience, he lost his control and went to his Saaliji.

S – Preeti Naina kaha hai ?? Ab tak nahi aayi ??

Preeti (P) – Areey Jijaji ab aap se do minute ki duri seh nahi jaa rahi hai meri behen se !! Har din, har waqt to apke saath hi to rehti hai ....

Aa jayegi, Vo upar change karne gayi hai .. Tab tak thoda sabar kar ligiye !!

Sameer blushed at his Saali's address and muttered a small 'Ok' and left from there. Ahaan .. He didn't left to join his friends but to give some private attention to his wife in their room.

Sameer ran towards their room and saw the door was left ajar .He entered their room as if he was a thief who was ready to loot all the treasures present inside the room.

Sameer hardly took two to three steps; the air from his lungs was pulled out seeing the sight in front of his eyes. He was both regretting and elated at his decision when he thought to give his wife few private moments.

There his temptress was standing, facing her back to him and giving him ample view to ogle at her back. Her hair was kept at one side of her shoulder and she was trying hard to tie the dori at the upper end of her blouse. If her previous sari had a deep cut blouse, then this white chiffon sari had a deeper cut than that almost showing her full back. It hung deep on her back and his fingers were itching to touch her exposed hot skin.

The white sari hugged her perfectly just like a second skin, Sameer thought how would his seductress look if he drench her with colouring water, Ummm... her sari would hug her more tightly than before highlighting her curves, but it would be too transparent. He needs to work it out when they are totally isolated. And Sameer made a mental note to conduct it soon.

Naina was still struggling with her dori when Sameer came out of his chain of thoughts.

N – Uff... Yeh blouse bhi na ... Preeti ki to ajj khair nahi , maar – maar ke ganja kar dungi ise. Itna deep cut karne ko kisne bola tha ise. Kya bol rahi thi "Sameer ki aankhein phati – ki – phati reh jaayegi tera blouse dekh kar " (Said Naina imitating Preeti) Sameer ka to pata nahi, lekin mai zarur musibaat me phas gayi... Vo bhi iss blouse ki vajah se... Lagta hai ab blouse change hi karna padega, mai aise thodihi bahar jaa sakti hu.

Sameer who was till now hearing his wife's banter and chuckling till all his teeth's were shown, came to halt and reached her. He went and gently placed a gentle kiss near her nape. Naina was just about to open her wardrobe when a featherlike sensation touched her. It sent shivers down her spine. Just one touch from him and it was enough to hitch her breath away.

Sameer gently came and pulled her wife's dori so that she directly crashed against his chest. Both of them shivered after the collision of each other's body radiating heat which was enough to ignite their raging emotions.

S (huskily) – Naina, Preeti ne itna achha gift dia hai tumhe aur tum ise change karne ko keh rahi ho ??? Nahi... Tum ise change nahi karogi.

N – Tu... Tumne saari baatein sun li ???

S – Aur nahi to kya madam...

N – Lekin mai aise kaise bahar jaungi ??

S – Aree.. tumhara eklauta pati kab kaam aayega ?? Aur waise bhi jab Navaratri ke pehle maine tumhari dori bandhithi tab tumhare upar mera koi haq nahi banta tha, Tumhaara shayad mujhpe gussa hona bhi laazmi tha par ab... Ab to saare haq hai na??? Sameer said these line huskily leaving a minimalistic gap between her and him, where his breath was fanning her neck (I was reminded of the dori scene of the navaratri track when I was penning it down and thought of including it)

Sameer said leaving wet kisses on her neck – Bolo na Naina... Haq hai na ??

Naina was feeling breathless and said – Ha... haan... hai...

Naina knew she will soon surrender herself to him if he kept on showering love to her like this.

N – Sameer hum...hume bahar bhi... jaana hai.... Please meri dori bandh do na...

S – Aur badle me mujhe kya milega?? (Banda pakka Marwari hai)

N – Ab tumhe kya chahiye???

S – Acchaa... Tumhe nahi pata mujhe kya chahiye ?? Tumhe sachme nahi pata mujhe kis chiz ki bhook hai ??? Said Sameer eyeing her lips hungrily and a mischievous grin adoring his face.

Naina gulped hard seeing him like this.

N – Sameer abhi hame niche bhi jaana hai... Sab wait kar rahe hai... Please dori baandh do... Tumhe jo bhi chahiye vo mai tumhe baad me de dungi.... Abhi dori baandh do please...

Sameer lifted his right eyebrow and frowned at her statement.

Sameer's Voice Over

Kya baat hai meri biwi mujhe vo degi jo mai chahata hu ??? Not bad...not bad... Ab to mai demanding banuga...

Sameer turned her around and she was looking towards the floor... He held her chin and made her look at him. Sameer just kissed her forehead; turned her back to him and tied the dori.

Naina just left her breath which she was holding for so long.

Sameer was just about to leave the room but whispered some sweet talks in her ear.

S – Naina apna promise yaad rakhna... Varna mujhe aapne tareeke se yaad dilana ata hai...

Sameer left the room leaving a flushed Naina behind.

Naina knew Sameer would not cross the line if she was not comfortable with him and he knew Naina had that same fire in herself in which he was burning. But nervousness had gripped her heart. He knew Naina trusted him more than herself and he had to take baby steps in their relationship to not scare her with the newfound intimacy between them. He loved her too much to hurt her with his desires. The love is not just for fulfilling each other's desires but to respect and care for each other's decisions too.

Soon both of them made their way towards the lawn. Sameer reached first and then Naina.

Naina reached her girl gang and Preeti enquired her

P – Behen tu Sari pehen rahi thi ya bun (sewing) rahi thi ?? Itina waqt kyu laga tujhe ??

N – Vo... vo dori nahi bandh rahi thi issiiye... Naina was now reminded of her blouse and was hitting Preeti...

N – Preeti ki bacchii... Tujhe to mai aaj chorungi nahi... Pata hai tujhe , mujhe kitni problem hui iss blouse ki vajah se...

P – Areey behen maar kyu rahi hai ?? Dori na bandhne ki vajah se itna koun marta hai ??

N – Dori ki vajah se nahi ... Saameeee....

Naina stopped between her tracks as Preeti got the cue and nudged her sister

P – Kya kaha tune?? Saameeee... Uske aage bol!! Aab samjhi tujhe itni deri kyu lagi... Matlab jijaji tujhe company de rahe the...Saahi hai behen...

N – Kuch bhi.... Ho gaya tera... Ab jaldi chal...

P – Mera ho gaya?? Sahi hai... romance kare mia – biwi aur ilzam de rahe hai behen par...

N – Ab tu chalegi ya tujhe lagau ek...

P – Haa.. haa.. Ab to tujhe jijaji hi gullal lagayenge na!!

Preeti said and ran away from there leving Naina in an embarresed state.

Till Preeti and Naina arrived there, others started playing holi (The gang was waitng for the love birds) but our kud-kud Kumar was waiting for Naina as he wanted her to apply colour to him first.

As Naina came closer to him, he noticed her face had a beautiful shade of scarlet. He could see the colour travelling down her elegant swan like neck highlighting the sharp angle of her collarbone and vanishing down her blouse...

Sameer held the plate which contained red gulaal, he dabbed some in his hands and applied it gently on both her cheek along with wishing her a happy holi. Naina even applied some colour on his cheeks and wished him back with a tender smile blooming on her face.

Sameer noticed Naina's empty maang. Maybe she forgot to apply it and while taking bath it had washed away. Naina was about to leave to join their gang when she felt a small tug around her wrist. Naina turned back and asked through her eyes what happed to him. Sameer went closer to her, took a pinch of the red colour and applied on the part of her hair. Naina on an impulse closed her eyes and got a sweet yet loving kiss back from him on her forehead. Sameer whispered in her ear...

S – Ab aap ja sakti hai Mrs Maheshwari...

(Thoda filmy hogaya na.... Lekin hamare samaina ki life kisi film se kam to nahi hai... Atleast mujhe to nahi lagti )

Naina opened her eyes and a lone tear escaped her eye. She took him by her arms and hugged him tightly while Sameer reciprocated the hug as he is always ready for hugs if he gets one. He can always remain cocoon in her warmth. The safest and soothing place for him in this world was only her small arms which fitted like the clues of the same puzzle.

How simply a simple gesture can make her fall in love with the same person more than what she did four years before? She yearned for him more than what she did before their marriage, she adorned him more what she did a minute back and she loved him more and more with each passing seconds for not his charming face but the pure soul he had in himself. She obviously loved his face but his inner self is the most beautiful thing she always cherished about him.

After a while, Sameer nudged her...

S – Madam kya aab hum hamare dostoon ke paas chal sakte hai, ya phir aapka yahi pura din rehne ka plan hai?? (After a pause) Vaiseyyy... Agar kaho to hum aisa kar sakte hai...

Sameer felt her lips curl forming a bright smile on his kurta and she looked up and gave a smack on his chest...

Naina held his wrist and rushed with him telling "Challooooo...."

Finally they reached their friends and they were hell angry on them

Pandit (P) – Lo... humne pura mohallah chan maara aur hamare hero heroine yaaha ishq lada rahe hai. Kaha reh gaye the tum log??? Aree thodi aur deri karte naa to kisi gange ki sir me baal ugg jaatey....

Munna (M) – Ae.. Ponga Pandit... Kar din na vahi vaali baat... Ab Bhaiyaa – Bhabhi thoda romance nahi karenge to kya mandir me jaake mangirey bajayenge???... Baat krta hai...

P – Agar tum dono ka Romance khatam ho gaya ho to ab hum thoda Holi kel le...

Samaina blushed at Pandu's remark and headed towards the colours...

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The mood and the weather were set. The air was dry of the heat and the blazing sun. Our super six was busy playing holi with each other. When they are together, they are their own world. Soon all of them were huffed and puffed of the continuous play of colours. They decided to take some rest and after some time start playing again. The couple also shared some lovely and romantic moments when they were requested to dance on "Mere Rang me" and "Saathiya... Tune Kya Kiya". The day was magical for them.

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Preeti reached the table to drink some water; meanwhile our Ponga too reached the food area to stuff some samosas inside his mouth to shush his grumbling stomach.

Pandit(Pt) was busy selecting samosas. Which one was bigger and which one he should eat first. (Uff... such complications in life of our dear Ponga ....)

Preeti fetched a glass of water and saw Pandit busy examining the Samosas.

P – Aise kya dekh rahe ho Samose ko... Ab uspe Thesis likhoge kya???

Pt – Areey yaar Preeti main na samajh nahi paa raha kaunsa vala pehe khau... Tu hi bata de

Said Pandit showing the two Samosas in his hands to Preeti. He was expecting an answer from her so that he didn't need to give such stress to his brains to make a choice between his two loves. P said getting quite irritated – Pandit tu na pura pagal hai... Khane se pehle itna kaun sochta hai??? Bas khana hi to hai...Itna man agar padhayi me laga leta na to pakka paas ho jaata... Tu na ek kaam kar... Tu Samose se hi shaadi kar le... Usse zyzda to tujhe aur kuch pasand hi nahi hai iss duniya me...

Pt – Areey kyu nahi.... Pasand hai na mujhe... ek ladki... lekin samajhti hi nahi...

Preeti didn't know but a pang of jealousy hit her. She wanted an answer from him.

P – Aur kaun hai vo??? Vo Canteen ki Samose waali na??? Said Preeti placing her hands on her hips, she was demanding an answer from him.

Pandit got quite shocked seeing her reaction.

Pt – Tu itni bharak kyu rahi hai??? Tujhe itni jalan kyu ho rahi hai???Tujhe jaanna hai ki mujhe kaun pasand hai ???

Now it was Pandit's time to get an answer from her.

P – Mai... mai kaha jal rahi hu... Mujhe to bas jaan na tha ki kaun hai vo ladki jisse tum itna pasand karte ho... Vo bhi Samose se zyada... Preeti said this but it was quite damn lame excuse to escape from his doubtful eyes...

Pandit grinned seeing THE PREETI AGGARWAL fumbling. The lady don, the talkative, chirpy Preeti of his school and college was stammering!!! Wow this was new. Why was she so nervous and blabbering???

Pt – Pata hai mujhe us samose waali se bhi zyada ek ladki pasand hai... Bilkul bindaas, jo dil me hai wahi zubaan par. Mufat bhi bol sakti hai. Dil ki bohot acchi hai vo. Aur dikhne me to ekdam bomb hai... Jab vo hasti hai to lagta hai jaise subah ki khilti kali bhi use dekh kar has de... Agar vo roye to maano ye mere dil aur aasmaan bhi roone lagta hai. Usi se hi meri khushi aur gham juda huya hai... Shayad mai use pasand karne laga hu...

Preeti heard all of him. Shock would be an understatement for her. She never knew Pandit could talk so elaborately on something, especially when the topic was about 'love'. She felt a pain inside her heart as if someone had inserted a dagger in her it. The reality sank her. He loved someone.

P – Bohot khush hu tumhaare liye... Dua karungi ki tum aur vo hamesha khush rahe. Preeti felt a burden in her. She just wanted to isolate herself and be distant from the world, from him... She didn't know why she felt so bad... So left out... She hardly took two steps when she felt a tug in her hand. She knew it was him.

Pt – Naam bhi nahi jaan ke jaogi???

P – Mai naam jaan ke kya karungi...

Pt – Areey sun to lo pehle... shayad tum use pehchanti ho

Preeti felt even more in pain. The pain she had been unaware of.

Pt – Uska naam hai... He came near her ear and whispered something she could never imagined in her wildest dreams....

Pt – Uska naam hai Preeti Aggarwal...

Preeti turned towards him when she heard her name mentioning. Has she gone deaf or was it just one of her hallucinations???

Pt – Yaahi sun na chahti thi na??? Lo to mai phir ek baar kehta hu. Mujhe tum pasand ho. Tumhari har harkat mujhe pasand hai. Chahe vo tumhari zyzda baat karne ki aadat ho yaa phir tumhari behen ki madat karne ke liye thappad khana ho, tum bhi hum Munna Pandit ki tarah Yaaro ki yaar ho aur Sameer aur hamarey sab ki jaan ho.

To Miss Preeti ji kya aap is Samose aashique ki samosewali banengi??? Promise mai aapko Samose se zyada attention dunga...

Preeti never would have felt such gush of emotions inside her before. She was shocked beyond anything. She didn't know that she had a secret admirer but now the complications were solved.

Preeti blushed deepest root of scarlet, smiled at him and ran away from there.

Pandit saw her retreating figure and muttered – Ladki hasi to matlab phasi.

Pandit ruffled his hair and ran towards her direction – Areey Preeti mujhe mere jawab to de do...

The Samosas were laid forgotten there as a new journey started, which would surely include fighting, pacifying, blushing, sharing memories and a new chapter was waiting to be unfolded.

The day was over as the sky was witnessing its dusk with red and yellow bands forming on it. The newlywed couple witnessed their first holi together and the night time was overpowering the sun to bid a goodbye and come the next day to start everything anew.

The family had departed half an hour ago...Now Naina and Sameer were alone in their house. Naina was cleaning the drawing room after which she would go and take bath. She was about to go when she noticed him.

Sameer was standing there with a bucket in his hand and a naughty smile lingering on his lips.

As soon as Naina saw the bucket full of red coloured water, mixed with golden-silver sparkles, she knew she was in danger.

N – Sam...eer... Tum ye balti kyu... kyu leke aye ho. Dur rakho ise...

S – Ahaaannn...

And then it was just in a fraction of second....

SPLAAAASSSHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sameer had drenched Naina with water till top to bottom and there she was standing wet and dripping. Now Sameer need to pay for this. Naina would not leave him like that so easily.

N – Sameer... Tum pagal ho kya... Pura bhiga diya mujhe. Ab to tum ajj mujhse bachne nahi vale.

She started chasing him all around the house; at last Sameer entered their unlit room. She invaded their room half panting and anger shown on her face. She thought in her mind ' Aaj to Sameer gaya, aaj na mai use chorungi nahi. Bohot pareshan karta hai mujhe.'

She entered inside but found no one there. Strange!!!

As she was thinking about her missing husband, she heard the sound of the door closing.

There her Man was standing against the door occupying it. Hands crossing against his chest and a big smile yet more notorious grin displayed on his face.

Naina came near him with fire blazing in her eyes...

N – Tumne yeh kyu kia???

S (Innocently) – Maine... Maine kya kiya???

N – Tumhe nahi pata tumne thodi der pehle kya kiya???

S – Tum hi bata do maine kya kiya hai???

N – Tumne mujhe pura bhiga diya hai... Upar se niche tak... Aur tum puch rahe ho ki tumne kya kiya hai???

S – To kya hua??? Holi mai ye sab chalta hai...

N – Sameer maine tumhe mana kiya tha na paani dalne ko. Ab mujhe phir se kapde badalne padenge. Tumhari vajah se mai ek din pagal ho jaungi.......

And she was going on and on......

Sameer held her and clasped her mouth with his hand.

S – Chup... Bilkul chup... Kitna bolti ho tum??? Do minute shant nahi reh sakti???

Naina was just staring in his eyes... A deep eyelock prevailed between them.

As the flowing curtain disturbed them, Naina came back to her senses.

N – Tum shant rehne wale koi kaam kabhi karte ho ki shant rahu??? Pura bhiga diya mujhe.

S – Are Mrs Maheshwari... Bura na maano holi hai. Sabne aapni aapni holi khel li ab mujhe bhi to aapni holi khelni hai... Vaiseee aap kuch bhul rahi hai...

N – Mai kya bhul rahi hu???

Sameer came closer to her and held her by waist. He made her turn to his side with a jerk and her hand found their place on his chest...

S – Aap apna promise bhul rahi hai... Tum mujhe kuch dene vaali thi...

Naina looked here and there to avoid his passionate gaze. Naina could only blush deep roots of scarlet as she knew there was no escape from him today...

This proximity was sending electric pulses in his entire body. His mind was jammed with this sudden influx of sensations which was quite damn hard to bear. All he could do was to stare into Naina's beautiful almond shaped eyes, which he was doing so pretty happily. His lips were stretched into a wide smile as he adored her pretty face which was wet with water drops, making her lips look more pink and tempting at the very same time. How flushed and fresh she looked!!! Just like a blooming sunflower on a sunny daylight!!!!

N – Sam...eer... Dekho mai puri bhik gayi hu... vo bhi tunhari vajahse. Mujhe change karne do.

S – To karo na maine kab mana kiya hai???

N – Agar tum mujhe chodoge nahi to mai washroom me kaise jaungi???

S – Washroom jaane ki kya zarurat hai... Tum mere samne hi change karlo...

N – Tum bhi kya keh rahe ho??? Sharam nahi aati???

S – Ab biwi se kya sharmana??? Biwi se koi raaz chupa rehta hai kya??? Aur agar mai tum se yeh sab nahi kahunga to kya dusro ki biwio se kahunga??? Sameer said as a matter of fact.

N – Tum na zyada bano mat. Khabardaar... Agar kisi pe nazar padi to. Tum sirf mere ho.

S – Accha... To phir to mujhe bhi tumpe haq jaatana chahiye... Hai na???

N – Kai...kaisa haq???

S – Tumhe puri tarah apna banane ka haq...

Naina went numb after his demand.

Both of their eyes met and their eyes only expressed desires and longing for each other. Her eyes had a different force in them. A pull that was so strong that held him hypnotized. They were so close to each other that his breath fell over her face that caused a tingling sensation to move down her spine.

Sameer tried to kiss her on her lips but she moved her face the other side out of nervousness. Sameer thought this to be a denial from her side and left her waist. He thought Naina still needed time to accept this growing intimacy. She still needs time. Maybe he could not make her trust him. Feeling dejected he was going out of the room.

Naina understood his behaviour and tightly ran and hugged him from behind.

N – I love you.... I love you Sameer...

Her one confession and he knew she also craved for him as much as he craves for her. Breaking the hug, Sameer turned around and saw Naina all blushing...

S – I love you too...

Sameer hugged her and placed his face in the crook of her neck. Now her fragrance was battling his senses. He skimmed his nose at the base of her neck. Naina tried to escape but found Sameer back hugging her. The closeness was making her ache inside as her wet sari was of no use now. Her insides were burning with the fire ignited by her husband.

Sameer made her hairs aside n got a view of her beautiful neck... He started giving small wet kisses there... Naina hands held him tight... Her knees weaken due to pleasure... He gave a bite on her shoulder... Naina winced in pain and pleasure... He got hold of her dori of the blouse n opened it... Her heartbeat stopped. Sameer's hands were roaming around her back feeling her body. Taking advantage of situation he advanced to her jaw line, chin, and neck giving sloppy wet kisses to her. Naina arched her neck giving him more space, her senses came back when he bit her sensitive part of neck as she moaned his name in pleasure...

As he turned her around, her eyes spoke of yearning, of passion, of longing for that seal of true love. And Sameer obliged enthusiastically. Their lips met. Thousands of fire crackers erupted in a flash of second. Their lips started to caress each other and what ensued was an enthralling melody of desire, passion and submission to each other. Sameer thrust her against his body and his hands roamed all over her back, her neck and her hair, while his lips did their task of kissing Naina relentlessly. Naina's left hand was clutching his hair, right hand cupping his face feeling his light stubble and pushing him closer to her, wanting to get the most of him. His lips turned fierce in response, while his fingers deftly stroked her tummy, massaging the points which she liked best. He kissed her passionately. Naina too was lost in his kisses. He kissed every corner of her lips. It started slow but soon turned wild, just like a forest fire, uncontrollable and hot. He invaded her mouth and rejoiced all that she offered to him. They kissed, kissed and kissed. The pleasure was becoming unbearable...

Sameer carried her towards their bed in his arms without breaking the kiss. Naina's heartbeat was running faster as if it will blast any second. There was no looking back, no stopping. The world didn't matter, what mattered was the comfort, the pleasurably ache inside, the soulful moans and the strong urging desire.

Naina moaned as Sameer pleasured her, taking her to the bliss of moon and journey of stars. Crossing the bounds they were limiting themselves for so many months and the dam was broken. As they made love, they blended like two colours mixed with each other or the waves at the sea blending with each other to become one. It was hard to separate them as now they were connected through one soul and body..... They were one flesh now... No power in this world can separate them till eternity....

So at last I'm done with the last update and seriously it was quite damn hard to write the second part than what I thought... something like more than 5k words.... But at the end of the day, your compliments are all the worth of my hard work... I was a bit disappointed with previous reaction but I have tried harder this time to make it perfect.

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Fiza

I am just shocked by your writing!!! You are too good at it.... behen... khub valo...!!! I want to read more stuffs from you... just write and flourish yourself,behen❤❤!!!

Mujhe agar ab kisine dekh liya na to bolenge ki ladki pagla gayi hai!! I blushed .... phaad diya tune...!!!

Samaina ko leke mundit ki baatein,preeti ki khichai to naina.... I thoroughly enjoyed yaar!!! I always want preedit ( after that padosi and dil le lo scene...!! Koi nahi ab to shubham bhi cute lagta hai.... pyaar ki economics samajhta hai.. shubhpree is cute) .... to I loved that scene.... dil le le tu bhi... ❤❤!!!

Holi... aha itna kuch to dikhayenge nahi... lekin hum imagine kar lenge!!! Too good fiza

Eager to read more such stuffs from you!!

With love,Suparna

Wonderful update Fiza☺️ The way you described each and every emotion is incredible..at hi Holi thi and aj hi ye update padhke🤪Loved the way you have described preedit..would love to read your next update🤗

loved the update

it was sensual yet had the samaina charm

I totally loved it

they consummated on holi

what better day to mingle with each other when colors mingle

Kristy Dii It was Superb. Aur beautiful bhi .....👍🏼👍🏼 I have no words to define...Already Laal hogayi ho...☺️☺️☺️ Sameer the teasing Maheshwari was worth watching...Such a passionate scene it was.... Thanx for the PM And Do write More...🤗😊

Fiza title edit kar.... abhi bhi part 1 updated hi dikha raha hai...

Originally posted by: Suparna13

Fiza

I am just shocked by your writing!!! You are too good at it.... behen... khub valo...!!! I want to read more stuffs from you... just write and flourish yourself,behen❤❤!!!

Mujhe agar ab kisine dekh liya na to bolenge ki ladki pagla gayi hai!! I blushed .... phaad diya tune...!!!

Samaina ko leke mundit ki baatein,preeti ki khichai to naina.... I thoroughly enjoyed yaar!!! I always want preedit ( after that padosi and dil le lo scene...!! Koi nahi ab to shubham bhi cute lagta hai.... pyaar ki economics samajhta hai.. shubhpree is cute) .... to I loved that scene.... dil le le tu bhi... ❤❤!!!

Holi... aha itna kuch to dikhayenge nahi... lekin hum imagine kar lenge!!! Too good fiza

Eager to read more such stuffs from you!!

With love,Suparna

I would surely write more di ☺☺

Hayeee.. aapka itna detailed description pad ke dil khush ho gaya. 💓💓

Aap dil le lo 😍😍😍

Love u loads

Kristy ❤❤

Originally posted by: Suparna13

Fiza title edit kar.... abhi bhi part 1 updated hi dikha raha hai...

Thank u for reminding me di ❤❤❤🤗🤗