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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello all, it's Aaliya here and me presenting a Two shot story which has its plot as of the La La La song's Lyrics. I hope u people would like it

Chapter 1:

RAKSHIT:

I had been working on a presentation from morning till evening and I got immensely tried. But she, Mrs.Shergill does no work and even being my wife she is not worried about me. "Hey, Rakshit! What are u saying? U want that Mrs Shergill to be worried for u?! Really! How stupid!!"I confronted me after getting into my Sher wala gill mood. Soon,my eyes fell on my beautiful wife who was wearing a black saree. She looked like a queen came from far lands for me. But I had to control myself. She noticed me ignoring her. She came near me and said "How am I looking mr Shergill. I hope u won't say that u don't have time to speak with me!" She was going on a such speed and I wasn't able to say anything to her. I couldn't control myself. I pinned her to the wall nearby to the bed and said "đŸ€«.. listen to me.. when I know what will be my answer then why are you asking?". She looked jumbled up😳. She softly said "mr Shergill... U are very cute!😊.. I felt so proud when I heard from Vinay that you do charity 😊. " I knew she would run away if I start speaking. And so did she. I got angry and murmured myself "This girl!! Is so impatient 😠... Before I could say thing she ran away... Always, she betrays me but still I trust her. Wait Mrs.shergill one day u have to listen me😏"

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sorry it's a two shot but typo mistake OS😭

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Im afraid i didn't get the context when u said La la la lyrics but your work looks promising.

So keep posting

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing OS <3

Waiting for the next part

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome

Update soon

Plz update a longer part next time

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome updt

Lol Drishti ran before he could say anything😆

Cont soon nd plz give big updt😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Draconian

Hello all, it's Aaliya here and me presenting a Two shot story which has its plot as of the La La La song's Lyrics. I hope u people would like it

Chapter 1:

RAKSHIT:

I had been working on a presentation from morning till evening and I got immensely tried. But she, Mrs.Shergill does no work and even being my wife she is not worried about me. "Hey, Rakshit! What are u saying? U want that Mrs Shergill to be worried for u?! Really! How stupid!!"I confronted me after getting into my Sher wala gill mood. Soon,my eyes fell on my beautiful wife who was wearing a black saree. She looked like a queen came from far lands for me. But I had to control myself. She noticed me ignoring her. She came near me and said "How am I looking mr Shergill. I hope u won't say that u don't have time to speak with me!" She was going on a such speed and I wasn't able to say anything to her. I couldn't control myself. I pinned her to the wall nearby to the bed and said "đŸ€«.. listen to me.. when I know what will be my answer then why are you asking?". She looked jumbled up😳. She softly said "mr Shergill... U are very cute!😊.. I felt so proud when I heard from Vinay that you do charity 😊. " I knew she would run away if I start speaking. And so did she. I got angry and murmured myself "This girl!! Is so impatient 😠... Before I could say thing she ran away... Always, she betrays me but still I trust her. Wait Mrs.shergill one day u have to listen me😏"

This one seems something different. Continue soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome poor rakku đŸ€Ł

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This looks different... And amazing toođŸ‘â­ïž

He's looking more impatient than her..... 😆

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