Mrs. Shergill - DriKshit TS

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Posted: 6 years ago
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| Mrs. Shergill |


|Part 1.1|


"Where is Di, Shikhar?" Divya paced restlessly in her room, repeating her question for the time that herself lost count of and Shikhar held his hands up, shaking his head like he did for all the past times. Before any of them could say anything further, a loud scream of Mahima Shergill for Shikhar, had him rush to the hall to see what the matter was.


"Shikhar, Shikhar... Rakshit kaha hai? Kal raat se ghar nahi aaya hai. Mujhe laga, shayad koi late night meeting hogi but dekho na, ab tak nahi aaya." Mahima Shergill anxiously dashed towards Shikhar on spotting him approaching her.


"Ho sakta hai, apni nayi biwi se itna frustrate ho gaya ke kahi bhag gaya ho. Mai use nahi jhel paya. Pata nahi bhai ka kya hi haal karti hogi," Shikhar muttered, rolling his eyes, recalling the crazy ye raat aur ye doori dance.


"What?"


"Nothing, Badi Maa." He was glad that his Badi Maa didn't hear the comment he just made for his Badi Maa was way too fond of Lavanya to entertain even a single word without her.


"She is not at home since last night." Divya sighed but made sure that her expression did not give away her concern.


"What?" The news certainly didn't please Mahima Shergill.


"Oh matlab Rakshit Bhaiyaa and Drishti Bhabhi have gone on a trip together? Ye to galat hai. Mujhe bhi jana hai. Mujhe bhi jana hai. Badi Maa." Simran ran up to her Badi Maa who seemed absolutely annoyed with what she said.


"What the hell are you saying?"


"Lavanya." Divya stepped in almost immediately after Lavanya who had just come down stairs, yelled at Simran after her words fell in her ears, infuriating her to a different extent altogether. "Behave, okay?"


"Didn't you hear what she said?' Lavanya advanced her steps towards Simran who instantly hid behind Divya.


" Yes, so? She isn't well. Don't you know that?" Divya securely held Simran who firmly gripped her arm, occasionally peaking at Lavanya over Divya's shoulder.


"Stop it." Mahima Shergill silenced everyone. Her son hadn't come home since so long and everyone was busy in silly arguments. Could he really be with Drishti? No, why would he be? He was married to Lavanya and he married her on his own. She saw absolutely no reason for him to leave his wife and be with his ex. She hated to admit that the minor possibility of him being with her was bothering her on a crazy level.

*

It has been quite long, no?

Nevertheless, this is something that I wrote today. Do let me know how you find this if you happen to read!

Cheers

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I think we do think on same lines sometimes.I had this scenario in my mind since last Sunday of Rakshit leaving his house and going to meet Drishti at her new house.

I would like to read this further.I really liked the end wherein Mahima had to think.

Do continue soon.Waiting for this one.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I was actually waiting and wondering that when another awesome story you were going to write and I liked this new one so lot.😀 Please continue soon. I hope you are doing well and your health is good. Take care dear 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

| Mrs. Shergill |


|Part 1.1|


"Where is Di, Shikhar?" Divya paced restlessly in her room, repeating her question for the time that herself lost count of and Shikhar held his hands up, shaking his head like he did for all the past times. Before any of them could say anything further, a loud scream of Mahima Shergill for Shikhar, had him rush to the hall to see what the matter was.


"Shikhar, Shikhar... Rakshit kaha hai? Kal raat se ghar nahi aaya hai. Mujhe laga, shayad koi late night meeting hogi but dekho na, ab tak nahi aaya." Mahima Shergill anxiously dashed towards Shikhar on spotting him approaching her.


"Ho sakta hai, apni nayi biwi se itna frustrate ho gaya ke kahi bhag gaya ho. Mai use nahi jhel paya. Pata nahi bhai ka kya hi haal karti hogi," Shikhar muttered, rolling his eyes, recalling the crazy ye raat aur ye doori dance.


"What?"


"Nothing, Badi Maa." He was glad that his Badi Maa didn't hear the comment he just made for his Badi Maa was way too fond of Lavanya to entertain even a single word without her.


"She is not at home since last night." Divya sighed but made sure that her expression did not give away her concern.


"What?" The news certainly didn't please Mahima Shergill.


"Oh matlab Rakshit Bhaiyaa and Drishti Bhabhi have gone on a trip together? Ye to galat hai. Mujhe bhi jana hai. Mujhe bhi jana hai. Badi Maa." Simran ran up to her Badi Maa who seemed absolutely annoyed with what she said.


"What the hell are you saying?"


"Lavanya." Divya stepped in almost immediately after Lavanya who had just come down stairs, yelled at Simran after her words fell in her ears, infuriating her to a different extent altogether. "Behave, okay?"


"Didn't you hear what she said?' Lavanya advanced her steps towards Simran who instantly hid behind Divya.


" Yes, so? She isn't well. Don't you know that?" Divya securely held Simran who firmly gripped her arm, occasionally peaking at Lavanya over Divya's shoulder.


"Stop it." Mahima Shergill silenced everyone. Her son hadn't come home since so long and everyone was busy in silly arguments. Could he really be with Drishti? No, why would he be? He was married to Lavanya and he married her on his own. She saw absolutely no reason for him to leave his wife and be with his ex. She hated to admit that the minor possibility of him being with her was bothering her on a crazy level.

*

It has been quite long, no?

Nevertheless, this is something that I wrote today. Do let me know how you find this if you happen to read!

Cheers

Yees ! Mahima NEEDS a reality check !

She’s always been harping on bete ki khushi all that bullshit without really asking the son what he wants 🙄

And Lavanya ? Same as Mahima. Both selfish. Simmi ki tabiat theek nahi hai, pata hai usko. But still, she’s being her rude selfish self 🙄🙄

Great writing ! Just like your pen name, I Adore Your stories ♥️🥰

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Heloo dear 🤗

Good start

Rakshit disappeared nd i m sure he is with dri ( waiting for that part )

Lavanya nd mahima both r same 😵

Looking faward to see..

Love ur writing stuff soo happy to c u again ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Rakshit is definitely with his Mrs Shergil. No matter how much anyone tries, he’ll always end up back with her 😂

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved it

Eagerly waitng to know what hapoens next

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome start

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice one..

Mahima and Lavanya both are selfish souls..😔

Waiting to read further.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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RESSSS

...

First of all I love the title 😆

Divya, Shikhar are winning my hearts everyday. Not in the show but in the stories ❤️

Build up hogaya now tell us soon what are Mr and Mrs upto? Is it that they're in their own bathroom and termed missing?😆

Note - VERY VERY SOON.

Edited by Morning.Flower - 6 years ago

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