KalMa FF - ‘ Zindagi,Ab Tum Hi Ho ‘ Part 5A page 36 (5/26) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Dk26

Awesome update di

Loved it

I like AS here

Hope mallu find kallu and also realize his feelings for her

Continue soon

Waiting

Thank you so much Simran for loving it.😊

AS is pyaari dadi here just like everyone’s dadi n nani strict but loving. 🥰

@ bold for that you have to wait that how the story unfolds..😂

Update will be there soon I am writing it.😊

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

aapne hume appu ka teaser diya🤣

koyi nahi i will wait

aur yeh AS asking him abt kallu, uski patni hai inhe kya

waise toh pyaar bhi nahi karthi

waiting....

Part 2 is updated dear.

AS idhar meri story mein pyaari dadi amma hai not the aghori amma.😂

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Hi Lina..

Thank you so much for loving it.

Yup AS acchhi hai yahaan par total positive n pyaari dadi not like serial ki aghori amma or naagin types..😂

@ bold for that you have to wait until the next part..all the story will be unfolded soon.😁

Update will be there soon I am working on it.😊😁

iam really excited di

wah apneh acha kiya aghari mata ko pyaari dadi maa banadiyaa

waiting for ur update

awesome update

i knw i shdnt but poor malharji 😆

i swear its epi ka handover

am glad kallu called aai

hope mallu kallu meet soon

ok now u knw am not good at writing reviews biut i loved ur story

update soon

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

awesome update

i knw i shdnt but poor malharji 😆

i swear its epi ka handover

am glad kallu called aai

hope mallu kallu meet soon

ok now u knw am not good at writing reviews biut i loved ur story

update soon

Thank you Nishu for loving it..😊😁

Kallu can go anywhere but she always loves her aai n Pillu more than anything.. ACP ka number sabse last mein aata hai poor mallu..😂🤣

Update will be there soon I am working on it..😁

Beautiful update 😊

But poor mallu ..

But di is kallu is not gone anywhere .?

I will love to read your more stories 🤗🤗

beautiful part

Good this confrontation was much-needed

Malhar need to see where he should draw the line..with his anger he was just going to destroy things

M glad that AS show aparna her place, this woman is not less venomous

so Kalyani called anu guess

waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Pearls123

Beautiful update 😊

But poor mallu ..

But di is kallu is not gone anywhere .?

I will love to read your more stories 🤗🤗

Hi Chinu.

Thank you so much for loving it..😊🤗

Kallu is teaching a lesson to mallu..😂🤣

Kallu has left the house as mallu told her in his anger to go away from their lives( him and Moksh.) So kallu ki bhi khopdi satak gayi..😂🤣

Keep showering your love. I will finish this ff first n then if any other idea pops up in mind will definitely write more.😁

Thank you 😊🤗

Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav

beautiful part

Good this confrontation was much-needed

Malhar need to see where he should draw the line..with his anger he was just going to destroy things

M glad that AS show aparna her place, this woman is not less venomous

so Kalyani called anu guess

waiting for next part

Thank you so much Rakhi for loving it.😊

Not only mallu’s anger but you know when one is angry then words are mightier than sword so definitely the words you say when angry can destroy anything. It hurts the people we love and costs us relationships n much more.

AS’s character was sane,strong and always loves to do justice for all though she was cunning but not insane n lost her brains which she has now..

Appu needs to shown the mirror ,for her the apt words are ‘ you reap what you sow.’

Next part will be there soon working on it.😊

Part 1

Darshi first of all sorry for commenting late i was busy🤓 n u know that😆

Now coming to the update....what a beautifully written part especially kallu - pillu scene n the letter👌

Ur update reminded me the initial episodes of THR where mallu used to hurt n doubt kallu n she used to cry😭....poor girl that time everyone was against her except her aai n her little munchkin (just the way u described in ur story)😳

Aatya is a witch...ghatiy aurat (plz excuse my language)...she was ready to harm her own naati just to prove kallu an irresponsible mother🤬...mallu was right she is indeed sampu's mother

Now the scolding part....mallu was so rude to kallu but we all know one thing about him...he is like that only or used to behave like that only but still kallu got hurt coz of his harsh words...he called her and irresponsible mother😭

Her letter was so heart wrenching...she was so hurt n she called herself his life's biggest mistake but chalo our stupid ACP got his brains back (shayad vacations khatam ho gyi isliye ACP ka dimaag wapas a gaya...ouch bad joke na😂) n he sunaofied atya n now Appu is his atya...no more aai...now plzz Mr Rane go n search ur pagli😍

All in all i loved the update👌

N yeah my comment is longer than ur update so plz don't mind🙈