Love flourished in college{Akshan FF- Chapter 17 Pg 35 01/07/2019) - Page 25

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Hash maan gayi....

Finally....

Ab update Kar Dena jaldi....

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

I said I will try

Ha but you can pm me...

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Ha but you can pm me...

Chapter 1: A nice start & intriguing one😛👍🏼

Chapter 2: Liked Guddan slapped Perv. I liked Durga here.

Nice update👍🏼

Chapter 3: Loved how Prof. Akshat was mesmerized by her beauty, heard her murmering talks😆, reply of Guddan to Prof. Akshat. Liked Akshat & Durga as colleagues

Very good😛

Chapter 4: Loved it totally whether Durga's teasing to Akshan being sleep deprived & name calling e/o as Adiyaal & Khadoos😛

Awesome update👏⭐️

Chapter 5: Loved her 3 Baatein especially the way she showed tashan while rubbing the wrong word & telling the 3 one. Liked AJ was in guilt & wanted to apologize.

Superb Update👏

Chapter 6: Loved their Sar-Takrana & their bickering and that Pagal word for Guddan from Akshat with sweet smile

Short, Lovely & Excellent👏⭐️

Chapter 7(a): Loved Guddan & Saru's bond❤️So, Prof. Akshat is khadoos & Saru is Drama Queen😆

Short & Sweet Update❤️😘

Continuation 7b: Loved Akshat getting impressed by Guddan's dance & words like amazing & impressive coming from his mouth. Also Akshat-Pervy's face-off😎

Fantastic Update👍🏼😛

Chapter 8: Loved Akshat getting stuck in the library, their hug, Akshat consoling her, him getting know about her fear, their chocolate moment & Akshat's apology. Actually loved it whole & Akshat admiring her beauty

Brilliant update👏⭐️😛❤️

Chapter 9: Liked how Guddan poked his elbow & forced him to lie😆 & Prof Akshat being Harishchandra🤣

Good Update👍🏼🤗

Chapter 10: Liked Guddan & Shiv's gang face-off& Guddan giving back to them😎, Akshat's doubt on her getting lost to Shiv.

Very good update👍🏼👏

Chapter 11: Liked Akshat stammering , saying lie before Durga & holding the book wrong😆akshan convo & loved Guddan being affected with Akshat & Durga's closeness.

Amazing update👏

Chapter 12: Liked Guidance getting affected & avoiding him & Akshat way of making her to agree to go on expedition. Saru was good.

Very Good Update👍🏼👏

Chapter 13: Loved excited Saru,Akshan's restlessness, how Durga's misunderstanding helped Akshat getting closer to Guddan, & him removing strands of her hair from face

Awesome update👏⭐️

Chapter 14: Loved Akshat controlling his anger, him calling her as arrogant & tauntram queen.

Beautiful update😳

Chapter 15: 🏇 scene, guddan taking photos of him secretly , their 🏇 together, & last scene their singing together.Song was perfect👍🏼

Marvellous update⭐️👏

Chapter 16: Loved how Guddan loved strawberry flavored chocolate made by Akshat & wanted to kiss his hands😉 Akshat Durga bond was good to read, I liked it😳

Lovely update😛

The story has a very unique plot, loved it⭐️The pace is good👍🏼liked the set up,bondings & dialogues of each update❤️everyone seems organic😳

Want some chocolate romance of Akshan😉 where Guddan tries hand in baking & Akshat helping her

Mil Sakta Jai Kya???

Waiting for next update...

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Chapter 1: A nice start & intriguing one😛👍🏼

Thanks!

Glad to know that you liked it.

Chapter 2: Liked Guddan slapped Perv. I liked Durga here.

haa toh humari guddu aise hi thodi na sahegi.Why?

Nice update👍🏼

Shukriya

Chapter 3: Loved how Prof. Akshat was mesmerized by her beauty, heard her murmering talks😆, reply of Guddan to Prof. Akshat. Liked Akshat & Durga as colleagues

Lagta hai iss chapter main sabhi pasand aaya?

Very good😛

Thankyou this reminded me of school days as school ke baad kabhi very good suna nahi

Chapter 4: Loved it totally whether Durga's teasing to Akshan being sleep deprived & name calling e/o as Adiyaal & Khadoos😛

He he sabko wahi achha laga.

Awesome update👏⭐️

Shukriya

Chapter 5: Loved her 3 Baatein especially the way she showed tashan while rubbing the wrong word & telling the 3 one. Liked AJ was in guilt & wanted to apologize.

Haan toh uss khadus ko jhukane main alag hi maza aata hai

Superb Update👏

Thanks!

Chapter 6: Loved their Sar-Takrana & their bickering and that Pagal word for Guddan from Akshat with sweet smile

But it's too common na,lagbhag har kisi ke saath hota hai.

Short, Lovely & Excellent👏⭐️

Yaa earlier my updates were too short as I used to describe only a single scene.

Thankyou!

Chapter 7(a): Loved Guddan & Saru's bond❤️So, Prof. Akshat is khadoos & Saru is Drama Queen😆

Yes but serial waali guddu se kam hai

Short & Sweet Update❤️😘

Short samajh sakti hu but sweet?

Thanks!

Continuation 7b: Loved Akshat getting impressed by Guddan's dance & words like amazing & impressive coming from his mouth. Also Akshat-Pervy's face-off😎

Haa unhe impress karna wakai mushkil hai but fislaana toh unhe tha hi guddu pe and face-off hai who lina ki wish thi jo yeh trip ke end main puri hogi

Fantastic Update👍🏼😛

Thankyou!

Chapter 8: Loved Akshat getting stuck in the library, their hug, Akshat consoling her, him getting know about her fear, their chocolate moment & Akshat's apology. Actually loved it whole & Akshat admiring her beauty

But bohot sarron ko yeh bohot common and predicted laga.

Brilliant update👏⭐️😛❤️

Thankyou! glad atleast you liked it.

Chapter 9: Liked how Guddan poked his elbow & forced him to lie😆 & Prof Akshat being Harishchandra🤣

Aur nahi toh kya bilkul bhole Bhandari hai itna bhi nahi samajhte ki who 2 on akele hi raat bhar locked the who bhi andhere me.

Good Update👍🏼🤗

Thankyou but yeh itni bhi khass nahi thi

Chapter 10: Liked Guddan & Shiv's gang face-off& Guddan giving back to them😎, Akshat's doubt on her getting lost to Shiv.

This mystery is soon to be revealed

Very good update👍🏼👏

Shukriya!

Chapter 11: Liked Akshat stammering , saying lie before Durga & holding the book wrong😆akshan convo & loved Guddan being affected with Akshat & Durga's closeness.

Chori chori kuch toh ho raha hai but 2on dumbos ko pata hi nahi

Amazing update👏

Thankyou!

Chapter 12: Liked Guidance getting affected & avoiding him & Akshat way of making her to agree to go on expedition. Saru was good.

Guidance?

haan toh Jindal saab nahi toh aur kon manayega?

Saru toh humari cupid hai

Very Good Update👍🏼👏

Thankyou!

Chapter 13: Loved excited Saru,Akshan's restlessness, how Durga's misunderstanding helped Akshat getting closer to Guddan, & him removing strands of her hair from face

Agar kisi ko sachhe dil se chaho toh puri kaynaat use tumse milane ki saazish karti hai- baba Shahrukh khan

Yahaan bhi kuch aisa hi hai

Awesome update👏⭐️

Thankyou!

Chapter 14: Loved Akshat controlling his anger, him calling her as arrogant & tauntram queen.

Ladna jhgadna,jhgad ke akadna

Beautiful update😳

Thankyou!

Chapter 15: 🏇 scene, guddan taking photos of him secretly , their 🏇 together, & last scene their singing together.Song was perfect👍🏼

Tablepoint pe horseriding ke alawa scope nahi tha,and camera second update se hi guddu ka friend hai

Marvellous update⭐️👏

Ohh thaankyou!

Chapter 16: Loved how Guddan loved strawberry flavored chocolate made by Akshat & wanted to kiss his hands😉 Akshat Durga bond was good to read, I liked it😳

Haa but Akshan ke scenes jyaada nahi the toh jyaada kisiko achha nahi laga

Lovely update😛

thankyou!

The story has a very unique plot, loved it⭐️The pace is good👍🏼liked the set up,bondings & dialogues of each update❤️everyone seems organic😳

Thankyou! maybe because iss story ke kaafi parts fixed hai

I mean atleast I have an 1 or 2 % of layout in my mind toh story thodi waise hi progress hogi

Want some chocolate romance of Akshan😉 where Guddan tries hand in baking & Akshat helping her

Mil Sakta Jai Kya???

Zaroor but bohot baad main maybe if not possible here toh will make it in any another Os as I have received many requests on the same. but yahaan kaafi der indirect hi hoga as both are still unaware of the feeling called love

Waiting for next update...

Will try to update soon

3) Yeah!! that very good in school days. I always used to check for it or very very good or excellent in the last page of assignment copy whenever submitted copies came to class after checking😆

7a) Sweet bcoz of Guddu & Saru's bond.

7b) I will wait to read that face-off.

8) It was common but you have written it Beautifully, so I liked it.

12) Sorry , Guddan type kar rahi thi main toh

Will wait for their chocolate romance & OS

And about commenting on your other stories, I will once I get free time.

Originally posted by: kavya1994

3) Yeah!! that very good in school days. I always used to check for it or very very good or excellent in the last page of assignment copy whenever submitted copies came to class after checking😆

Main bhi but school ke baad this word got missing from my life. School waali feeling

7a) Sweet bcoz of Guddu & Saru's bond.

Haay

7b) I will wait to read that face-off.

Jaldi hi milega trip ka end episode

8) It was common but you have written it Beautifully, so I liked it.

Ab itna bhi kuch khaas nahi tha

12) Sorry , Guddan type kar rahi thi main toh

Mujhe laga hi isiliye toh wahi pe bol diya

Will wait for their chocolate romance & OS

Matlab abb Os likhna padega mujhe?

And about commenting on your other stories, I will once I get free time.

It's OK! koi jaldi nahi hai hume nahi reply kiya toh bhi chalega bass kaisi lagi yeh batana who aap ek saath bhi bata sakte ho..........

About OS, It's upon you dear, I only want romantic chocolate romance between Akshan wherever you give either in further updates or as a different OS. If possible make it little hot update too😉

I can wait for it. Take your own sweet time😊

Originally posted by: kavya1994

About OS, It's upon you dear, I only want romantic chocolate romance between Akshan wherever you give either in further updates or as a different OS. If possible make it little hot update too😉

I can wait for it. Take your own sweet time😊

As aapko aur mujhe hum 2 on ko pata hai itni jaldi toh 2 on stories main aisa koi scene aane se raha toh Os is far an better option.

Hey bhagwaan who night in Uncle's house se man nahi bhara kyaa apka?

Zyaada nahi karwaungi.

Will try asap

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Tu bhi naa🤣🤣