Originally posted by: renee.bee
Hi N
I think this is the 1st story where I am actually reading the comments and your replies in peace.
I think I told you before I like how you interact with the readers and let them express what they think about the story and the characters
My confidence in expressing has taken a beating because I always worry if my opinion may offend the writer.
Secondly I may not be on par with the rest who can get to the depth of the characters and can articulate things much better.
Like see in this comment. I expressed two different things together in a sentence.
I meant is his purpose to join politics to bring Manohar down?
Isn't he already making him pay feel guilty but why sign something with Shyam which would destroy him? It seems he may be digging for something which he can do only after he gets some power.
I wonder Has it got something to do with Khushi's father's death? did her father have some proofs against this party? Does the death warrant mean literally they kill him or he loses Khushi. Whatever he has signed will most likely to cause him Khushi or create some misunderstanding.
Arnav was thinking of doing something because Shashi helped his mother. Could it be he is risking himself for do that. Marrying Khushi isn't a help it's for his own good or was it to kill the speculations of any foul play in Shashi's death by the party. Arnav being married to Khushi gives them a clean chit brings Arnav in their good books only Arnav is going to expose them.
Arnav can be a Casanova or anything else but Arnavs in N stories always have something up their sleeve and are very sharp. He is taking money as payback he can't be naive or stupid to join something without a purpose. The Villain underestimates him and that's when he attacks back.
Regarding the money what is he doing with the money he is taking from his step father regularly and not a small amount by any means. He can use that to do something with his life. Like building something in his mom's name like NGO for kids. I want to know what he does with all the money? We don't know is it a possibility that he is using the money for some cause and Khushi saw that side of his and she is willing to give it a chance disregarding all the doubts she has.
I am not sure about her and Akash being in a relationship or in love. I do believe Khushi was affected by Arnav but she doesn't like him as a person while she likes Akash as a person for his work etc.
That quote be with someone who loves you and not someone who makes your heart race.
In the present it seems like Akash is that guy good guy who loves her back but in the future it might turn out Arnav is guy who would love her and Akash was the one bad one after all.
Payal adores Arnav clearly they both have more in common than she has with her real brother. If Akash is the good son and a good lawyer. He may not necessarily be a good brother. A good son may most likely to be pretending to be an Heir.
Manohar went back to Priya but she accepted him now so why didn't she want him back in first place. Arnav was telling her about the money. She put the condition to not let Arnav stay there so she was the one who was in a position to dictate terms to Manohar. She gives the money or knows about it.
You mentioned that both Arnav and Khushi's bubble will break.
Khushi was somehow convincing herself by assuming only bad things about Arnav and Arnav might realize Khushi doesn't love him back. She married him because she was compelled to. Just when Khushi considers giving him a chance he figures she doesn't want him.
Please I hope I haven't gone too far ahead. I read the different things and I wrote what came to my mind.
I could be completely wrong but I like to think Arnav isn't in vain.
I appreciate you and P always being so kind and supportive.
Thank you.
Radz.
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