SamAina OS: How I Met Your Mother

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Hi guys,

This was my OS Contest 2 entry. I know it is late but better late than never. This got some votes, all in Top3 category which was unexpected for me. This is my 4th OS and it was longest OS penned down by me, this is imp thing because I am lazy when it comes to typing, that too on mobile. 😆.... Sharing it here as standalone piece to know your thoughts on it.

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How I Met Your Mother


Bell Rung.
Naina put her book aside thinking the family might have forgotten something and came back for it. Bell rung again as if someone forgot to remove hand on the bell.
" Kya hai Preeti, thoda sabr nahi hota kya?" asked Naina in irritating tone and shocked to see a stranger standing there.
" Is it Agrawal house?" he asked in English tone.
" Haan par abhi ghar pe koi nahi hai baad mein aana" saying this she tried to close the door.
He stopped it by his leg, " I am Sameer Maheshwari from London" he saw in her eyes to have some 'Ohh my mistake,please come in' feeling but she remained 'so what get lost'.
" bada aaya angrez" she thought " dekhiye abhi ghar pe koi nahi hai, main akeli hun aap baad mein aana" by saying this she again tried to close the door which irritated him and he opened the door with his strength. It alarmed Naina and she tried to slap him but he held her hand and a little struggle and in no time she was in his grip. He was very close to her. She could feel his breadth on her face. He moved forward to kiss and just when she thought he will liplock,he loosened the grip and said " mere Nanu ne mujhe sikhaya hai kisi bhi aire ghaire ko munh nahi lagaate.Just then Taiji arrived "O Bai, Sameer babu aap aa gaye, yahaan kya kar rahe hain, chaliye mere saath". Naina gave confused expressions, Taiji addressed her" Naina yeh Sameer Maheshwari hai Jayprakash Maheshwariji ke naati, tere Tauji ke bahot achchhe sambandh hain, ek hafte hamare saath hi rahenge"
Naina remained silent, Taiji saw some scratches on his neck" O Bai, yeh kya hua aap ko" kuchh nahi, ek jungli billi ne swagat kiya hai Ahmedabad mein" He looked at Naina with meaningful smirk.
" jungli billi? Yahaan toh koi jungli billi nahi hai" Taiji was confused" hai Auntyji, shayad aap ko pata nahi, khair chhodiye chaliye chalte hain"

Tauji was taking care of Maheshwari Industries as a legal advisor, when Nanu had decided to expand the bussiness in foreign countries. It required lot of hard work on ground hence he had shifted to London long ago and Sameer was born and brought up in London with Nanu's Indian sanskaars and here in Ahmedabad loyal workers and legal advocate Tauji was his right hand. When Nanu was feeling his age, he thought to handover business to Sameer and for that matter, to fullfill some legalities and to see work culture he was in Ahmedabad for a week. Tauji has wholeheartedly invited him at his home to stay and Nanu couldn't deny it as he thought it will be better for Sameer to be at home than at a hotel.

" Welcome to Ahmedabad" greeted Tauji. Sameer bowed down to take his blessings," Arrey bhai Beena kuchh chai naashte ka intezam karo aur aap bhi fresh hojayiye"
" uncle, aap mujhe aap mat kahiye, tum kahiye ekdum formal lagta hai."
" toh tum bhi mujhe Tauji kehna, mujhe achcha lagega""aur mujhe Taiji" she was quick.


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"Naina, tujhe pata hai Taiji ke ghar pe London se ek guest aaya hua ha? " Preeti was very excited to announce it and got lukewarm response." her addressee was engrossed in a book" Pata hai." said she without looking at her.

" tujhe kaise pata, tu gayi thi kya Taiji ki taraf"

" Nahi, woh aaya tha pehle galti se hamare ghar ko Taiji ka ghar samajh ke"
" matlab tu already dekh chuki hai, kitna handsome hai na" Preeti was still excited to talk about him which made Naina angry" soorat se kuchh nahi hota Preeti, insaan ki seerat achchai honi chahiye"
" Haaye! aise kyun bol rahi hai, aisa kya kar diya usne tere saath ki tujhe uski seerat ka pata chal gaya"
" usne mere saath" she blurted and then stopped for a while" kuchh nahi kiya woh toh London se aaya hai na aur angrez hai poora isliye" Naina tried to cover it upw hich irriatated Preeti" yeh kya baat hui, tu kab se aisa sochne lagi, galat baat hai Naina, mujhe toh ekdum achchha laga, pata hai itne achche se baat ki mujh se"
" tune usse baat kyun ki? khabardar agar usse baat ki toh main na teri chachaji se shikayat kar dungi"
Preeti was shocked to hear this" itna overreact kyun kar rahi hai? "
Naina got pissed off again, everything related to Sameer was pissing her off. By his mentions she was getting flashbacks of his hold and almost a kiss." tu nahi samjhegi aur isse zyada mujhe kuchh nahin kehna ki ab se uski koi baat hamare beech nahi hogi" she left and Preeti shook her head in disagreement.


The rest of day passed like normal one for others but Naina was thinking whole day about morning incident which was boiling her blood whenever she was feeling how close was he and what he could have done to her? At night ,lying on bed she again started thinking about morning incident. How dare he, I will never forgive him for that badtameezi. She started blurting it out loudly which got Preeti curios who was lying on other side of bed" kya hua Naina, kya badbada rahi hai? Kisne ki badtameezi? "
"tujhe pata hai Preeti woh London wala angrez jab subah hamare ghar aaya tha na usne mere saath... "
" tere saath kya? " Preeti asked with wide open eyes. Somehow Naina didn't get courage to share the incident, it was making her uncomfortable to share with Preeti too even though she used to share almost everything with her and knew she will understand. So she just said" bahot rudely baat ki"
" Ohh, yeh baat hai mujhe laga pata nahi kya kar diya, toh isliye tu naaraz hai"
" main kaunsa naaraz hun aur woh lagta kaun hai hamara jisse main naaraz rahun"
" Achcha ab tension mat le, main teri aur uski dosti karwa dungi, mujh se thodi der mein hi bahot free ho gaya hai"
" koi zaroorat nahi, dosti kara dungi" she imitated her.
"Tere dimaag mein kya chalta rehta hai kuchh samajh nahi aata, ab chal so ja aur zyada mat soch uss London wale angrez ke baare mein"
" maarungi tujhe ab agar uska naam liya toh"
" Naam kahan liya, London wala angrez bola waise naam bhi kitna pyara hai na Sameer, thandi hawa ka jhonka"
" Sameer, gandi hawa ka jhonka" Naina said making irritating face.
" tu bhi na Naina, kisi ke peechhe pad jaati hai toh bass pad hi jaati hai, ab chhod uss bechare ko, ek week ki baat hai phir hum kahan woh kahan" Preeti tried to make her easy and she made peace with it that it is a matter of few days only that too at Taiji's home which she can avoid visiting for this week and she slept with this thought not knowing what was in store for her in subsequent days.



Pralay was calling Bela constantly" chachi, chachi, jaldi chalo mummy bathroom mein gir gayi hai" Bela, Naina Preeti ran to find out Taiji lying in bathroom making various sounds as in pain. They carried her to bed "O Bai, pata nahi kaise pair phisal gaya" till then Naina had called doctor, she searched around to see where was Sameer but he was seen nowhere. Doctor told it is just a sprain and will be OK within 2-3 days but to take complete bed rest.

"O Bai Bela ab kya hoga? sheher ke itne bade wakeel ka itna khaas mehmaan hai ghar pe" she was worried about Sameer and his mehmaan nawaazi.
"Bhagwan jhoot na bulaye, hum alag hain kya bhabhiji, apna hi apnon ke kaam aata hai, aap fikar mat karen ab se hum aapke mehmaan ka khayal rakhenge."

Naina looked at Preeti, she just shook her shoulders remembering last night conversation" waise hai kahan aap ka woh London wala angrez? " Naina spoke suddenly but to tone down her last few words" abhi toh factory gaya hai tere Tauji ke saath, ab raat ko hi lautenge"


At night, Anand greeted Sameer, he bowed down to take blessings of both Bela and Anand. Anand chatted for sometime about here and there, India and London and impressed with him for humility and handling of bussiness.

At dinner table Preeti served, Naina was trying not to come infront of him as everytime she saw him it would remind her first meeting which would boil her blood. With the first bite he couldn't control the spicy food and got reddish eyes with constant hichki "Naina jaldi Paani la" she heard Bela's voice and hurriedly went with a glass of water and bashed with Preeti who was also coming from front with a bowl of cooked tinde, the result was on his shirt.

" yeh kya kiya" Bela shouted " jao beta jaldi se dho lo warna daag pad jaayega safed shirt pe"
" daag toh already pad chuka hai" he thought and Anand took him to washroom before that he had looked at Naina with angry looks. After dinner Bela told him to send that shirt, she will return it after washing." iski koi zaroorat nahi hai chachiji" he said." zaroorat kaise nahi hai, bilkul hai" he couldn't deny.


In the morning Bela had sent Naina to take that shirt from Sameer, she argued" chachiji please Preeti ko bhej dejiye na"
" Beta Preeti naha rahi hai na, jaldi jaa aur sorry bol dena aur tere Taiji Tauji ko bhi toh naashta dena hai na".Naina gave breakfast to them and asked about Sameer, he was in the room.
Knock knock
"Come in" He was busy combing.
"mujhe woh chachi ne shirt ke liye bheja hai"
" it is there on the chair" he said without looking back and it is my favourite shirt toh zara dhyan se"
" bol toh aise raha hai jaise hum naukar hain iske" she thought and dropped the idea to apologise.
" aur yeh naashta bhi rakha hai"
" phirse teekha toh nahi banaya hai na" He turned with a smile.
" Jee nahi, mehmaan nawazi hamain achchhi tarah aati hai" she said with little bit of anger and left. " pata nahi iske naak pe hamesha ghussa hi kyun chadhha rehta hai" he thought.


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" Preeti, Preeti dekh na yeh kya ho gaya"
" What happened" Preeti asked and shocked to see Sameer's white shirt coloured pink shaded.
" Oh My God, What is this Naina?"
" woh maine galti se apne dress ke saath yeh shirt daal di thi"
" Now what will happen?" She asked her.
" wahi toh main tujh se puchh rahi hun, aur ek baat bata yeh English mein bolne ka daura pada hai kya tujhe?"
" Nahi woh toh bass main uss London wale ko impress karna chahti hun, kya pata baat ban jaaye" she winked.
" zyada bakwaas na kar, bataya tha na kaisa hai woh aur aaj toh aise baat kar raha tha jaise main uski naukar hun, bola favourite shirt hai dhyan se"
" kya? tune uska favourite shirt kharab kar diya?" asked Preeti ignoring her rant.
Naina came to senses " haan yaar, yeh toh bahot bura hua, ab kya karun"
" jaa ke sorry bol de, maaf kardega bahot achchha hai, pata hai papa bhi bahot tareef kar rahe the uski"
" sorry bolegi meri jooti, mera bas chale toh use do din mein nikaal bahar karun" she said without meaning it but the damage was done. He had come for dinner earlier than expected and heard their conversation. He thought "toh tum mujhe ghar se nikaalogi, mera naam bhi Sameer Maheshwari hai tumhare jaise bahot dekhe hain."

Later Bela called Naina."Naina, Pralay babu ko bheja hai Sameer ne apni shirt ke liye,ja jaldi se lekar aa". Naina got confused what to do now" chachi main woh shirt dhona bhul gayi thi, kal dho dungi" she hurriedly said which irritated Preeti. Why did you lie? You can say truth to mummy atleast. Naina said she can't undo it and now what to do. " mujhe thoda sochne do, waise tu agar sorry bol deti toh zyada aasan hota jo tujh se hone se raha, kuchh sochti hun" said Preeti and Naina got relaxed thinking Preeti will definitely come with something good.


Next day, at the time of dinner, Tauji had gone to Rajkot for completing legal formalities and Taiji was still bed ridden.
" aaj kisne khana banaya hai?" asked Sameer.
" Beta yeh maine banaya hai, kaisa hai? said Bela with heartfelt smile.
"bahot achchha hai, aur aap ho bhi itni achchi isliye khana bhi tasty banta hai warna kuchh log sadi shakal le kar jo bhi kaam karte hain woh bigad jaata hai". All laughed, he looked at Naina with meaningful smirk.
She got it" jee nahi, khana toh khana hota hai chahe jaise bhi banao" Bela dragged her to kitchen" kya kar rahi hai, aise chillane ka matlab"
" woh chachi ji main toh bass keh rahi thi ki... " Bela told her to be in kitchen and Sameer enjoyed this.
" mujhe pata hai Preeti usne mujhe hi kaha tha, dekha tha na kaise mazaaq uda raha tha mera" Naina told Preeti in kitchen.
" tu bhi kuchh bhi sochti rehti hai, woh bhala tujhe kyun bolega, aakhir tum donon girlfriend boyfriend ho kya? "

" kya? kya kaha tune? Agar dobara aisi baat ki toh munh tod dungi tera."
Itna bhadak kyun rahi hai, aajkal pata nahi teri naak pe kyun itna ghussa rehta hai, agar mujhe koi uski girlfriend bolta toh aaj main khushi se naach rahi hoti"
" bakwaas band karegi ab, maine tujhe pehle hi kaha tha London wala hai aur..."
" haan sab pata hai par tujhe samajhne mein galti bhi toh ho sakti hai na"
" koi galti nahi hui mujhse, achchi tarah se samajh gayi hun use aur do chaar din mein wapas chala jaayega isliye bardasht kar rahi hun use"
He had come to washbasin and heard her last sentence "pata nahi apne aap ko kya samajhti hai,thoda maza leta hun"

He went to Bela and asked about his shirt just to make Naina uncomfortable. Bela called Naina and Sameer enjoyed her colourless face.She made same excuse that she again forgot to wash it which pissed off Bela, she reminded Naina to wash his shirt, this time strictly tommorrow only.



It was a hectic day for him at office but he was enjoying it, understanding bussiness here was more fun. He had come in the evening from office, he had talked with Nanu on phone in office but not in detail so he was feeling alone as he wanted to share office days with someone. He hadn't felt like this before, maybe because he was always with Nanu so whatever he wanted to share he used to do without any hesitation ,without a delay.
He saw Naina in Taiji's kitchen and without thinking much he went in the kitchen, she was shocked, what are you doing here?
" ek cup chai milegi" he said with a smile.
" haan aap bahar baithiye main le kar aati hun"
He was little scared while asking but relieved to see she just agreed without much ado. After few minutes, she came with snacks and tea.
" where is your cup of tea?"he asked.
" aaj toh bahot achche se pesh aa raha hai" she replied " nahi woh maine bass abhi abhi li thi".After finishing he appreciated tea.She thanked and thought this is the right time to talk about his shirt" mujhe aap se ek baat kehni hai"

" haan bolo" then Taiji called Naina and she told him to come at her room after sometime. " pata nahi aisi kya baat hai, chalo chal ke dekhte hai, she was behaving like quite normal unlike her nature" he shook shoulders.

He thought to go and see why Naina had told to come after sometime. He was feeling bored to stay at Taiji's side as well as curious to know so he went forward.

It was dark inside and he stopped for a while. He called Naina's name but no response and he entered her bedroom. She came out of bathroom and shouted in her peak volume seeing the shadow and he had to put hand on her mouth, with this sudden jerk, she fell on bed and he tried to balance but he also fell, trying not to fall on her,he put both his hands on bed and she again screamed. Suddenly lights were on. Anand, Bela, Preeti were at door and got shock of life to see the bedroom scene. Sameer stood up and bewildered Naina took a position away. Anand slapped Sameer" hum ne tumhen kya samjha tha aur tum kya nikle, sharam aani chahiye tumhen"
" chachaji meri baat toh suniye main toh bass" he pleaded.
" chup raho, hum sab dekh chuke hain, isse zyada aur kuchh nahi sunna, main kal hi bade bhaisahab se baat karke tumhen nikaal dunga iss ghar se"
" chachaji main toh Naina ke kehne pe yahaan aaya tha" he addressed Naina " tum kuchh bolti kyun nahi"
She was too shocked and scared, to utter a word, she remained silent. Sameer looked at her for few seconds " achcha toh yeh tumhara plan tha, tumne mujhe yahaan bulaya taaki yeh sab kar sako, shame on you"
Anand tried to slap him but he held his hand " ab nahi, bahot ho gaya aur aap kya mujhe nikaalenge main khud yahaan se jaa raha hun".He looked back at Naina and went straight away to pack his bag.

What was in those eyes? She couldn't get over his look, was it anger, was it frustration, was it despair, was it..? She was thinking too much about him, Preeti came.
" Naina tu sahi keh rahi thi, insaan ki seerat theek honi chahiye soorat se zyada aur aaj jo Sameer ne tere saath kiya, kamina mera toh dil kar raha hai joote maarun jaa ke"
Naina was lost in her thoughts " main tujh se baat kar rahi hun Naina, kya hua? bahot bada shock tha na?" she hugged.
" Preeti mujhe lagta hai uska koi aisa iraada nahi tha, hum se bhul ho gayi Preeti"
" yeh tu kya bol rahi hai? Humne dekha tu chillayi thi aur baad mein woh manzar"
" kabhi kabhi aankhon dekha bhi galat hota hai" she stood up" main abhi aayi"
" kahaan jaa rahi hai?" but she got the answer from door" ek zaroori kaam karne, bahot zaroori"

Naina searched Taiji's house but he was not anywhere " O Bai, aise kya dekh rahi hai aur itni zor se kyun chillayi thi?" thankfully yeh bed pe padi hain warna hungama ho jaata" Naina thought woh Taiji andhere mein chhipkali dikh gayi thi toh darr gayi thi"
" O Bai, chhipkali se aise chillata hai kya koi" she interrupted " Taiji woh Sameer kahan hai dinner ka time ho gaya na?"
" uske Nanaji ka phone aaya tha, baat ki aur oopar terrace pe gaya hai aur sun..." Naina was not there to listen her " yeh ladki bhi na pata nahi kaunsi P.T.Usha bani phirti hai"she ranted.

After talking to Nanu he was very worried, what will happen if he comes to know about this? Nanu will trust me but still? Or if he doesn't trust me? No, no, he knows me, he will definitely trust me, and Nanu wanted me to see Indian culture and people here? My foot!
He was lost in these thoughts when she coughed, he looked at her " ab kya lene aayi ho, ho gaya jo tum chahti thi? Le liya badla?"
"Sameer meri baat suno aisa kuchh nahi hai"
" jhoot mat bolo maine khud suna tha tum mujhe do din mein ghar se nikaalna chahti thi and must say what a plan it was" he clapped. She remembered her conversation with Preeti " kahan ki baat kahan aa gayi, main toh ghusse mein keh rahi thi, mera sach mein aisa koi matlab nahi tha"
" achchha toh phir bola kyun nahi chachaji ko ki tumne hi mujhe bulaya tha?" he looked at her with hatred as if she is such a low class creature. She ignored it and said" main ghabra gayi thi aur mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha tha"
He didn't say a word and turned to step down " Sameer, ruko" she came in front of him to block his way " maine tab nahi kaha par abhi abhi sab kuchh keh diya hai chachaji ko ki iss mein tumhari koi galti nahi hai aur hum sab ne tumhen galat samjha" he stopped there with a plain face, she continued "I am sorry sab meri galti hai aur ab yeh baat Tauji ko kabhi nahi pata chalegi toh tumhare Nanaji ko bhi nahi, ab khushh"
She looked in his eyes and smiled" ab toh thoda smile kar do" finally he smiled
" achcha aur ek cheez" she took packet of brand new shirt from a bag "mujh se tumhara shirt kharab ho gaya tha isliye yeh ekdum waisa hi, yeh lo" she gave him " aur isi liye maine bulaya tha room pe"
Sameer told that he already knew she had spoilt his shirt and it was just for fun he was asking about his shirt "aur main toh tumhen ekdum khadoos samjh raha tha, you are opposite of that" he laughed.
" and I thought you are characterless but you are opposite of that" she laughed and he too joined her " sach mein kitna galat hota hai na bina jaane kisi ke bhi baare mein apna opinion bana lena aur judge karna" she said in a deep voice and he looked at her thinking how true her thought is. First time he had looked at her with a plain slate and found her innocent and beautiful. "pata hai mujhe yeh full moon aur stars ko dekhna bahot pasand hai, jab bhi main udaas hota hun ghanton in stars mein sukoon dhundhta" he was not knowing why he was sharing this info with her.
" tumhare family mein kaun kaun hain?" she just paused thinking it's too personal.
" bass ek Nanu, papa ka accident. ..bachpan mein hi ...phir mummy ne doosri shaadi karli aur tabhi se mere Nanu hi mere sab kuchh hain aur tumhare?"
" meri mummy bhi bachpan mein hi guzar gayi thi par mere papa hain aur Arjun bhaiya bhi, abhi woh Jaipur shift ho gaye hain, main apne chacha chachi ke saath rehti hun, unhone hi mujhe paala hai bachpan se " she looked at him who was staring at stars. First time she looked at him with a plain slate and found him handsome " preeti sach keh rahi thi par maine kabhi Sameer ko aise na dekha aur London mein pala bada hai par kitna apna lagta hai" she thought and by thinking 'apna' for him she checked him as if he might have listened her thoughts.
" matlab tumhari kahani bhi meri tarah hi hai, na poori tarah tumhari family hai na meri" she was looking at moon. For sometime they remained there silent then she said "chalen, dinner ka time ho gaya hai".He followed her.


Later Anand also apologized, Sameer has already forgiven though. At dining table, Naina took extra care to serve him which was a welcome change for Bela and Preeti.

At morning doctor visited and declared Taiji is fine now. Anand to satisfy his guilty conscience told Taiji that Sameer is their guest as long as he is staying here and they will continue with hospitality. Taiji was more than happy to hear this.

At evening Sameer came with gifts for all as a return gift for Naina's gift. He gave beautiful Indian dresses to Naina and Preeti, saari to Bela Taiji and tie for Taiji Tauji and big soft bear to Pralay.

After dinner Naina saw him going to terrace, after sometime she followed him.
" kya hua Sameer tum aaj bhi udaas ho?" she asked.
" what?" he was confused.
" kal tumne kaha tha na udaas hota hun toh moon aur stars ko dekhta hun"
He just smiled " achchha toh tumhen yaad hai meri baat"
" toh bhul jaana chahiye tha kya?"
He laughed " Nahi aaj main udaas nahi hun, ek alag hi sukoon hai dil mein"
She just looked at him with expression to know more in detail but he didn't say much and he remained silent. " achcha kis baat ka?"
He looked in her eyes" bachpan se lagta tha koi meri bhi family ho, mere friends ki tarah par Nanu ke siwa mera koi nahi tha aur sab ko gifts dekar bahot achchha laga phir dhyan aaya yeh sab temporary hai"
She thought " lagta nahi tha is ke dil mein itni gehrayi hogi, hum kya sochte hain aur haqeeqat kya hoti hai"
He waved hands in front of her eyes" kya sochne lagi"
" kuchh nahi tumhare Nanu toh hai na jo tumhen itna pya karte hain aur kya chahiye" this made him peaceful.
Then they talked about her studies, his business, his work, environment here and in London.He shared many things which he had never shared with anyone except Nanu and she liked to listen him as well as share her feelings which she had shared with Preeti only.Preeti called Naina and she left.


It was his second last day and Naina wore the dress gifted by him and made a breakfast of his choice which he had shared last night. He appreciated the efforts as well as the taste. Later whole day he had so much work to complete before leaving India. He skipped dinner and he was so engrossed in work that he didn't realise time, official meeting had just wrapped up and telephone rung.
" Sameer Maheshwari speaking" he said.
" tum abhi tak office mein ho, time dekha hai kitne baje hain?" he was shocked to hear Naina's voice and then he saw time 12:30.
she was still speaking "main kab se wait kar rahi thi phir laga tumhen kuchh ho na gaya ho aur, yeh London nahi hai samjhe"
He listened her ranting then just said " wait, wait " she said " bolo"
" you are worried right?"
" kya?" she was confused.
" Tumhen meri fikar ho rahi thi na?"
She realised calling at this time of night is not good at all and put phone on cradle without replying. Sameer just smiled rolling his chair.

It was his last night in India and early morning his return flight was scheduled . After dinner as usual he went to terrace, she came very late but this time with Preeti and remained silent while Preeti talked with him.

Preeti had started taking note of Naina's changed behaviour. Now she used to talk about Sameer, his looks, his habits, his passion for work etc. Sometimes she was seen in deep thoughts then she saw Naina taking extra care of Sameer and spending time with him on terrace after dinner. Tonight she almost dragged Naina with her even though she was not willing to come. Later she pretended as if Bela called her and went downward, when Naina tried to follow her Sameer called her name.
" Naina, ruko mujhe tumse baat karni hai" she stopped. He came in front of her and said " do you believe in love? "she was shocked but remained silent while looking at moon.
He continued" Do you know worrying about someone is love and I love this love".He didn't know why he was going so frank with her. "if you don't mind can I ask one thing?" he asked.Naina looked deep into his eyes "haan puchho".

"would you like to settle in Ahmedabad or London?"


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"Phir kya hua papa? " asked 8 year old Rhea." mummy ne kya kaha?" she was curious.
" Beta mummy ne Ahmedabad kaha isliye toh aaj hum yahaan hain"replied Sameer.
" aur shaadi?" she asked another question. Naina laughed at her innocence. "Beta shaadi ho gayi tabhi toh tum aayi ho hamari zindagi mein" she looked at Sameer who was enjoying it.
Sameer kissed his adorable daughter and told her to go to sleep " papa pehle batao na shaadi kaise hui?"
"abhi bahot raat ho gayi hai, chalo so jao baad mein batayenge" He carried her on shoulder towards her bedroom and remained there till she fell asleep. When he came back, he saw Naina with their wedding albums " chalo bhai, ab do ghante toh kahin nahi gaye" he murmured and sat on bed. Naina showed him album and started telling stories behind each pic which he had listened umpteen times.




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Posted: 6 years ago
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This os was one of my favorite from the contest .. It was light hearted and beautiful you've written it very amazingly 👏 the title in itself is so intriguing

What a meeting it was full of tashan that slowly turned into affection for each other the " shirt " drama was so cure and funny that actually led to the changing dynamics between the two

My most favorite part of the update was sameer's unique proposal " worrying for someone is love and I love this love " this line has my heart .. So frank and then the googli " would you like to settle down in ahemdad or London " seedhi baat no bakwas 😎

Loved the whole update to the core

Love

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome story. Loved it.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#4

Lovely OS Ross. 👏

Loved it to the core. I read just a few OS from the OS contest entries and unfortunately missed to read this. Its a brilliant piece of work.

First impression can sometime go wrong too and your story puts that so beautifully. Both of them judged each other wrongly but glad that they realised their mistake and finally came together. Nanu's memory made me nostalgic. Miss him in the show. Loved how sameer is straightforward and uniquely proposed Naina. So nice that they have a daughter. Waiting for it in the show too. All in all a beautiful story and a great attempt by you.👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful OS yaar just loved it sooooo much

Srilatha

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely OS sirji.

You know I didn't read any of the OS Contest 2 entries because I was not eligible for voting and I knew that if I can not give votes after reading such wonderful stories, then I'll feel bad.

And so I read it today for the first time. And I must say, this OS is awesome. I loved the story of this OS. Sameer telling about his and Naina's love story to their 8 year old daughter.

I could really imagine that scenario and I found it too endearing. And the way you portrayed Sameer and Naina's story along with all the Agarwals and Nanu was wonderful. You deserve applause for that. 👏

And I can't help but laugh at the fact that even in your story, Taiji got injured and I don't feel bad about it 🤣.

I know you don't like typing much but you write very well and therefore you should write sometimes. And if you feel lazy, then you can at least write Drabbles. All the laalchi readers like us will be very happy 😃.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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The end's so cute!!!😂❤❤ Beautifully written!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi Ross!

Just noticed this now👍🏼 have read the beginning and end😆 seems engaging. Will read the whole story and comment.

Uma

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow, beautifully written 👏 I loved every bit of it...never knew you write so well...have read your daily analysis post, which are always very entertaining...and you are equally good in writing OS too...you must try to write more often...loved how sameer and naina’s relationship grew and how Sameer finally proposed ..thank you for sharing...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#10

Very entertaining OS

Loved how you portrayed Naina and Sameer here

Beautiful OS

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