Jus wannabe with U my Love…jus wanna be – My RagKor

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Jus wannabe with U my Love…jus wannabe – My RagKor Part A

Am going on a family vacation for 10 days so will not be active…. So just thought to give all something to relinquish till then ……….. Miss me as I will miss you all loads of love………………..

The Archieve….turns fossil – Part A

Ra4gKor was getting through so much in their lives.

Kids were excelling, roses were growing up…

Chakor was extremely busy with her marathoning coaching schedules, her regime was getting hectic and also she was toning too well. She was preparing Arjun for the junior level marathoning along with Rohan. He was busy with his workout regime and also his academics. Aayansh was getting into the next level of caricature and calligraphy along with his guitar classes.

Raaghav was busy with new businesses, new orders, expansions and since the plantation has grown multifold, he had to get in able administrators. Kaaka was very very satisfied about the way business was growing and how Raaghav took care empowering the second in line. Kaaka was advising Raaghav with investments in the name of roses.

Govind was given more responsibility as well as Mohit andRohan… many rival companies tried to poach them giving them 3 times of benefits but they had their firm say NO and felt it was not a company but their temple and the staff welfare was excellent and it got consecutive awards of Great Place To Work With.

He would not compromise on his daily routine with his cubs or roses but he was missing something and so was she but both could not quite understand it… what it was… their world was revolving around the kids and business. Many a times Raaghav had to stay behind late to just morally support the workers who had to work late to meet the delivery schedules. Shyam Kaaka was witnessing this too as well as Chakor who was always chipping in inspite of her rigid schedules….

They had their very very brief balcony moments,cuddles. She most of the times slept on the dining waiting for him or would sleep off in the balcony when he would just scoop her close to his heart. They would sleep forgoing dinner as he would not feel to disturb her smile in that sleep but end up waking her in the middle of the night as her tummy would be grumpy only to feed themselves some sandwiches or fruits…and with a brief kiss…They were together but not together… its not about physical intimacy but just being together…

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It was an early morning, when RagKor set out for a seminar which Kaaka had wanted them to attend to. It was a one day at the outskirts of Mumbai. After much insistence by the cubs, Shyaam,Girija and the baby sitters RagKor agreed to attend it.

Kaaka asked them to carry few casuals and one party wear dress too as the participants are from international companies… and the seminar was very very informal and in a best beach resort.

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They waved bye… dropped at airport and flew to Mumbai and from their was driven to the venue..

They reached the venue and it was one of the best luxury beach resorts with individual luxury villa with private pool leading to beach.

Chakor liked the ambience so much and just clung to his arms resting her head on his shoulders… this place is so nice and serene wish we could just spend some time after the seminar she said. He just pressed his head on her … hmmmm true. But chalo lets go to the room refresh and lets get ready.

Before going to their suite they went to the lobby,

They asked about the seminar when they received the shock that there was no such thing happening but was given a letter.

Ragkor opened the letter,

My Dear Raaghav beta and Chakor bitiya

My heartfelt apologies…. And kindly forgive me first.

Raaghav I have no words to express how happy and contended I feel for god giving you and bitiya to us. When the boys lost their biological parents I was baffled but I must admit, God had other plans for them as well for the business and that’s why destiny has brought you both here. You both have never failed in anything with regards to the boys, the plantation, the welfare of the staff and trust me unlike many I never felt bad of not having a son to take care of me, as no on ecan be a better son than you beta.

Bitiya…. I have no words for you and only thank god for sending you in to our lives.

Raaghav I have not given you any gifts throughout these years but I feel I should give you this time as time as the best gift to just be with each other.

You both have been through so many things in your lives.

Just be with each other forgetting everything as time lost cannot be gotten back.

We are here to take care of everything. Your phones will betaken away from you and placed in safe custody to be returned only during the night to speak to the cubs and roses.

May god bless you both.

With loads of blessings

Yours Shyaam Kaaka…

Ragkor were in tears…..

The lobby assistant took their phones away switched off,placed them in the lockers and gave the keys to Ragkor but said they cannot open it as the lockers open with two keys together and as per Kaaka’s orders one key will be with the Lobby.

They went to their suite holding each other…….

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The villa was luxurious… with an suite…. Private pool leading into the beach….

A king sized bed.. a kitchenette, a bar counter, a special draw beside the bedside which had varieties of flavoured luxury packets…. He smiled looking at it thanking for the arrangements…. An exquisite bath with bath tub, Jacuzzi and stock of aroma oils….

Mild channel music was playing….

He was in his sheer shirt and shorts resting himself on the private pool relaxing chair while she came in with a spaghetti short tops and skirt. He was having a mocktail…

She came to him sat on him sideways and just placed her head on his chest.. no wonder kaaka was insisting on carrying informal clothes.

No words they were just in each other’s embrace… he closed his eyes and was caressing her shoulder playing with her straps and placing soft kisses on her forehead.

She placed herself on his chest when unknowingly she was tearing…. Feeling wet on his shirt he just lifted her chin and asked why are you crying??

Cupping his face she spoke her heart out, the archieved emotions within her for the first time..

Raaghav you said everything of yours was first for me, your kiss, your hug… but… but…. mine was not and …sometimes I feel sad as I cannot say that….shhh he placed his hands… why are you feeling bad now…. You did not hide your past and I was brought due to your past…

I chose you!!! I expressed my love to you! You did not as I know the power of your love ….. but I believed my love for you will overwrite it.

Raagav.. please tell me.. have you for any once thought that I was a wid…. She cried… he just closed her mouth in his style…. She closed her eyes crying… he allowed her to cry within his… holding her…he said, I never thought you as a widow…never suspected your love nor ever felt bad that you were loved before by a pure soul who sacrificed himself for you… For I know you went through hell to break through the walls… You sent away BhuKa also as you did not want to reminisce your past love.

Chakor I just love you and my love to you increases manifold. Cry how much ever you want to today if that would make you feel fine…. You indeed changed me, gave me a meaning to live.. and my life is just you and the kids…thank you for giving me those beautiful roses and coming into the boy’s life. I am indebted to them for this life is due to them. I want nothing else. I feel sad that I could not make your archive turn into a fossil… she just closed his mouth…. Please no not a word about you…. I promise Raaghav I will never ever cry again… I love you too much Raaghav that sometime sI feel guilty that I am not………… he shhhed her…. I am sorry…. Please don’t talk… just be on me he said…. Hugging her close to him..

They just wannabe together with each other…

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They were called for lunch.. they had and went for a stroll by the beach side, side hugging her…kissing her temples. The waves was hitting them washing away all her little insecurities. She tripped on something and both fell rolling into the water, the chillness took over and they were just mingling themselves playing in the water…. She jumped and played like a kid which he was admiring….. Time went by and he lifted her above when she spread her hands wide like flying high in the sky…. He twirled when she said Raaaghav I am flying high high…. Laughing aloud…. He lifted her to the suite while she was garlanding him..

Both were completely wet…they showered together spent warmth in the Jacuzzi… she was resting on his torso, he hugged her and placed his chin on her shoulders and said… I promise you… I will live with you and die with you for I will never leave you to live or die alone… she had tears in her eyes…please no tears …. They both hugged each other forgetting themselves... he wrapped the towel around him and wrapped her in in her bath robe… came out…they were indeed tired… she dried her hair and he carried her to the bed..

He just removed his towel…. Raising her to him bending her head back kissed her fervently… removed her robe…. And just hugged her cozily and drew the quilt on them…

His hands was going all over her… she turned to him cupping his face… both in their birth suites… but he was calm eyes closed……Raaghav your unlimited thaali is still due…..would you… she asked….

NO, but…. I jus wanna be with you my love he said..

he was placing kisses all over her very soft, drenching her in butterfly kisses…. Very slowly taking her assets in his mouth..sucked her for sometime…. turned her and back hugged her pulling her close to him.. she gave in the way he wanted as she jus wannbe with him her love… she was equally kissing him…. he went down not leaving an inch of her… he was not harsh nor fast… he went till her toes and came up … kissed her beautifully and went up and turned her towards him…. he slid down, caressing her bulge below at the back with his hands while soothing her assets, placing soft kisses… Raaghav she said…. My sweetheart my sexy birdie… tiredness in the water was taking over. he soothed her to sleep while he slept sucking hers and hugging her as all they wanted to jus wannbe with each other….He never moved himself from her twinies and she was hugging his head smiling at him who was like a grown up kid with his mouth on hers and sleep taking over. He indeed looked very cute and handsome.. Sleep took over as she raised and placed her left leg on his waist.. No lustful mingling as they jus wanna be together..

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It was evening when the intercom bell rang….

he slowly opened his eyes, moving her legs from him he reached the phone which informed that they have a private dinner in their private pool. He thanked them and went into the quilt and cuddled her, slightly pressing her twinies.. His hands were warm, just his slight cuddle hardened her peaks and her movement of her legs on him down lifted his naughty too. But he just wannabe with her…. Chakor he called…. Can we get uphmmmmm she pulled him which eventually made him land on her assets… his naughty banged on her sweety…which ignited him and her.. urge taking over… they kissed hard… he quickly brought her down… he reached over to grab the packet when the intercom again intervened…. Biting her lips…he picked and spoke….ok we will be theresexy boldie birdy…. We are called for the dinner , lets get up and go, and continue later…. Dinner with mocktail and dessert he said. His eyes were dangerously desirous.Kissing him my Rustic Insatiable Rowdy..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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The rea(vea)lization about the saree!!!

Mmmm bhiii !!! aaa bhiiiii !!!!and ummmm bhiiii (thanks Nikki for this) – Part B😳❤️☺️

The dinner was in their private pool, lights beautifully laid around… a melodious channel playing. He came in a sheer white shirt and a Bermudas. She wore a blue plain georgette saree stuck to her silhouette with a sleevless back knotted blouse which was revealing her cleavage .. her satin inskirt and saree was low tied showing the thin line of her waist and her navel…she wore a mild gloss and loose hair… with her dior perfume… He walked up to her.. slowly took her beautiful right hand and knelt down taking out a beautiful diamond ring… it was a big solitaire … wow her eyes opened wide filled with tears. Why she asked. I have not given you anythingI wanted to buy this solitaire through my money which I earned as a worker of the plantation… I finally saved and bought it. I carried it with me as I thought we will steal some time for this. I love you Chakor, he slid the ring and said thank you for marrying me and coming into my life. She kissed him and made him rise hugged him.. thank you… but I have nothing to give she said. He held her tight.. You are the best diamond that I can have, I have adorned you he said.

You are ravishing he said holding her waist, pulling her to him… nuzzling her perfurme….you are driving me crazy he said. Nuzzling he rneck…. Kissing her.. holding her head back.. down her cleavage… why suddenly saree he asked… they held each other and was swirling to the music, foreheads together and slowly kissing eachother…… kaaka said it’s cosmopolitan dinner so thought a saree would be better and decent than a dress.

Whistlingso ooohhhh…. The dinner was spread for the two with a champagne …. A special small cake was there for them… the candlelights, her saree and the ambience was turning hi seyes with passion.

How about champagne my lady just for today he askedhmmm if you wish…. He poured it in the tall slender glass holding it near her cheeks… you look so clearer than this he said. Raaghav how about dinner please I am hungry she said…. He nuzzled her kissing her nape tightening his hold around her…saying yes me too very very hungry…. Loooking at her, his voice was hoarse. Hmmm she took him to the table made him sit and she sat on his lap and took the plate feeding him he was all eyes on her … meddling her knot behind.. he kissed her …. Mmmm eeeeat she said… I am he said…. They both ate all the while he was holding the glass. Her seat on his lap was creating heat. They got up and he took her to the bar table. Made her sit on it.. keeping the champagne beside.

Tell me how do you say saree is decentits better than a dress, its not revealing she said… he just held her waist…he had attitude… ohhhh he soothed and kissed her bare shoulders and down her hands saying is this not revealing…..slithering his hands through her waist…circling her belly button...going to her ears… is this not creating a havoc and slowly finding his hands to slide through down her inskirt to her bulge behind and pinched her light.… she jerked.. mmm she was moaning due to his erotic actions and seductive voice, her chest was heaving making her transparent pallu slipping. He caught the pallu, fingering her cleavage…. Kissing there…looking into her eyes.. isn’t this dangerously seductive…he bent her head back and she moaned with his love torture on her. Hmm tell me he said with attitude… she was going weak…she was feeling dry.. I need water she said.

Kissing her he lifted her to the kitchen counter which was big while placing his chin on her valley while she was touching his forehead. … he made her sit on the counter, he brought cold water from the fridge. Pulling her close and stood in front of her widening her thighs. She drank the water which was spilling over her… he kissed the droplet on her cleavage, trailing lines with his tongue on the rim of the blouse, making butterflies fly.. her pallu was slipping , when he smoothed behind with his hands being over, kissing her neck and meddling with the knot… she was shying, though he has seen her plain but his seductive tortures was one she yearns for. He pulled her closer to him, tell me,his voice was too horny… soothing her back down to her waist he removed her knot behind, the blouse came out revealing her assets covering with the thin pallu.. isn’t this making me go crazy.. hmm,going over her assets over the thinn pallu creating ripples in her, taking each into his mouth, licking it…pushing it . she slithered on to the counter, holding his cheeks, pulling him towards her to kiss him. he removed her saree, while she removed his shirt.. she was in her inskirt which was stuck to her toned legs. laying her on the counter, he started to kiss her all over…..trailing kisses down to navel and down placing kisses on her satin inskirt deep at the right place. She moaned terribly bending her left leg which made the inskirt fallback on her waist revealing her inner….. Raaghav ….She was moaning ….He removed her inskirt and inner and started to circle her thighs and also slowly rubbing her . The ministrations continued,,,passion was taking over her…. she pushed his bermudas and held the boxer going over his grown length. She was caressing him inside. The cake box was beside… she pushed the boxer…. It was not giving in easily. She pushed with force… making him smirk, easy my dear eagle he said.. shut up

How about a cake h easked. She pulled him near to her lips and kissed him saying no cake I want only your h****g. Those lustful words drove him crazy. He lifted her while she was kissing his torso and biting his chest.

He placed her in the middle of the bed.. he sat with widening his legs … .making her sit on him facing him… passionately kissing her, just going into her mouth…she opened hers and he was invading her walls… He couldnot get enough of her leaving her for breath, I just love you more more my lady, tell me is saree not revealing… turning her in his ways.….. She was just going into reverie … saree is the most sexiet dress I would say….he carressed her into him...

Chakor you are too too beautiful and I cannot get enough of you he said. She lost herself completely in his those words….. Urge was piling up. She went on him with force, which made him jerk… My queen is in very naughty mood he said.. hmm yesss she bit him while going into the rhythm,,, moaning hugging him tight while he was helping her with the movement… it was so blissfull both were in sync when she was having ripples… he carefully pushed her down taking full stride, reaching for the packet.. Its ok she said you need not use it ….mmmmm…..he just invaded her mouth……after which he could not hold as it was tooo long and they were just enjoying it… the naughty and sweety jus wanna be with eachother. Chakoooor I love you… he just throbbed into full force, pulsating, erupting with pleasure which made her cry out in ecstacy. He shivered and she too in that pleasure…..

It was bliss… they jus wannabe together for each other. They both hugged each other, not bothered about anything… he was placing soft kisses on her. She hugged him with passion and said Raaghav just wanna be with you forever… and ever.

They were subliming together, thanking Kaaka for this blissful day.

The intercom rang and they were connected to the kids…Chakor quickly covered herself with the quilt while Raaghav laughed at her…hugging her pinching her down, they are on phone tapping her forehead he said…she was blushing… the cubs and roses asked them how was the seminar and how is it going.. he winked and said Seminar was extremely satisfying, kissing her …Nooooo she closed his mouth and good and it is still going on pulling her closer when Chakor hit him on his chest…..and they will see them soon the next day morning. He gave her the phone, she had to adjust her heave and talk while he purposely kissed her assets when she yelped.. Take care we love you, the kids told, we love you too and he cut the phone to continue their sweet kissings. Budda why did you do thatwhat while talking, kissing hmmm…achaa did I... where..keeping an innocent face chup.. ok he chupped taking her assets into his mouth. Oh god my Insatiable Rowdy

I am and I don’t shy about it as I just waana be with U my Love my life…. He said….

A satiable day of togetherness from dawn which dusked sweetly into a happy slumber closing in each other.

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The morning dawned well. They were fresh rejuvenated…thanking kaaka within themselves they took the cab to the airport.

They were driving through a self driving car, when they wer epassing through a lane. Raaghav….. hmmmmm he stopped the car at the side.. she cupped his face and asked… you enjoy without barriers na then why didn’t you when I asked you to ….. He looked into her eyes pushing her strands cupping her face … No… I don’t want you to suffer with that migrane hereafter he said. She was shocked, perplexed… how do you know?I know those days you had the pill you were suffering with terrible migrane when I checked online and with our gynae she said for some it has side effects of nausea and migrane… Why don’t you tell me he said…banging the steering… I just love you I cannot see you suffer due to anything….ANYTHING.. tears and anger was there in his face. I can understand you with just your expressions he said.

She just hugged him, teared saying Raaghav, you know me more than I do about myself….. I just want to live and die with you as I waana just be with you my love Forever and Ever… I too Chakor… please promise not to hide anything from me he said….I promise I will never.

They saw a temple of Bajrangbali, they stopped by to seek his blessings and all they prayed was just to be with each other forever and ever…

Sometimes we are so preoccupied that we miss to be together. We just wannabe with each other.

All I wanna do, is be with you, be with you

There's nothing we can do just wanna be with you

Only you

No matter where life takes us nothing can break us apart

You know it's true

I just wanna be with you

I just wanna be with you

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Thanks so much girls

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Posted: 6 years ago
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You have left me speechless dear 👍🏼

Its such a lovely lovely story.....I am not even touching the hawt part of it.... that indeed you have aced as always. But the crux of the story is such a lovely lovely thought - just wannabe with you😳

So true!!! Many times in the hectic pace of life we forget this.

Fantafab read it was.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 77nikita

You have left me speechless dear 👍🏼

Its such a lovely lovely story.....I am not even touching the hawt part of it.... that indeed you have aced as always. But the crux of the story is such a lovely lovely thought - just wannabe with you😳

So true!!! Many times in the hectic pace of life we forget this.

Fantafab read it was.


Nikkiiii😘😘😘🤗🤗🤗🤗

Thanks so much dear

Yes we miss so much that we seldom realise.

I love this high school song so spinnned around my Ragkor..

Gosssshhh everything is now spinning around them.

Wannabe always with themmmmm... Lala lala.


Thanks dear

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Ganga for the lovely words

All are in love with the Rowdy 😍😍

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I became kinnda mad with ur story, even still i m.. Not only this one.. I read ur other work as well but to be honest with u.. This one(ragkor) is really touch my heart... I m one of the mad fan of sukor/Ragkor n fan fiction of rag4kor is like medicine which i need everyday..❤❤❤Now come to the point.. Everytime u come with bang.. N this time not only bang.. Supper banng... Surprised... Not only surprise i was .. Like dead🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥hot update uffff🔥🔥🔥Salute to ur creative mind. Keep it up.

U written chakor feelings n emotions very very well. Suraj n Raghav two diamonds ✨✨💎💎💎💎 chakor is very lucky ❤❤❤❤my rowdy babuuuu I'm in love with him 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘May your journey be free from stress and bring you home safely.enoy the journey 💜💜💜lots of love

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Thanks a lot

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sritama for the lovely words

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Since u r going for a vacation u will b busy today so I will not disturb u with my long feed back..it's such a lovely ,heartwarming story where both of dem discovering n realizing dey just want to be with each other forever n ever❤❤togetherness is d one n only thing dey want..in tday's busy life it's not always possible to spend some quality time together bt at d end of d day that's wht matters d most n u perfectly gave tht msg through dis story😍❤ Chakor expressing her hidden guilt.. d way Raghav succour her❤his beautiful words..once again he stole my heart..such a pure gem he is❤bow down to him n to his unadulterated love for Chakor.. as always Ragkor's sizzling hot ,passionate,seductive romance was🔥🔥😍😍❤❤Rustic Rowdy n Sexy Birdie both were on🔥🔥d car scene in d end too was so beautiful😍❤all in all a super duper update filled with sublime Ragkor bliss..😍😍👌👌enjoyed it to d core❤❤

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sukor123 for the lovely words

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Thanks a lot dear for such a unique story of RagKor & also before going on vacation u gave us this beautiful story of RagKor to cherished them

Fantab update as always story name said all about they both want to live together their whole life & RagKor moments are 🔥🔥🔥 as always u again nailed it with ur superb writing

Once again thank u so much for such a beautiful RagKor stories 😘😘😘

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Smita.. That's a lovely lovely comments. I reread my story....

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Again an amazing topic you have chosen Sumi. I read it 2 days ago but couldn't reply you as I was so frustrated due to broken our expectations of seeing meejay together in the new show but today I read it second time. This was a beautiful & emotional too . Your thoughts & concept is always very interesting & quite realistic. This is not an exceptional too.

Everything was going well in their lives yet there was a lack of something in Ragkor life but they couldn't express it. It's the togetherness they missed due to various responsibility & growing work pressure. It seems they are together but yet not together. Actually in our busy lives there is no chance to spending time together even it's difficult to get some me time too. But how important it is that you make us realize very well through this Ragkor story. They were eager to spend time with each other but weren't getting the opportunity that came to them unexpectedly.

Loved Kaka for his gift of love to them & the letter full of emotions. I ended up with tears in my eyes 😥😥.

Loved the way Chakor conveyed her feelings to Raghav that he is not her first love & it's like a sense of guilt to her which was untold for long time , & the way he understood her distress & calmed her, the entire scene, the dialogues were so perfect & soothing 👌👌.

Then about the hot, sizzling, Ragkor romance, what can I say Sumi, you have achieved great expertise in writing such hot & romantic scenes🙏🙏. Ufff... Hotness overloaded🔥🔥 . Difficult to breathe😝😝 .I'm continuously blushing 🙈🙈while reading.Loved bold Chakor & how cutely she asked him if he would like to get the unlimited thali😍😍😝😝 & the evening dinner part was so fiery, smoking hot 🔥🔥🔥🔥.

The car scene was so lovely, I'm proud of Raghav, who is rowdy but a very sensitive & soft minded. He couldn't see his queen to suffer for anything. I'm fascinated as much as I read about him. His love for her is so pure & genuine. I'm speechless & my love & respect for him continues to grow.

Sorry again for the long feedback as I know you're on vacation, but I believe that you don't mind. Thanks again for this story to cheer us in absence of you . Hope you're enjoying your vacation, take care dear, love you 😍😍 & yes miss you too.


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Thanks so much for taking the time to read the story

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear 🤗🤗🤗

The holiday treat was superb with mixture of emotions and hot romance🙈.

Right from kaka giving a surprise, those letter with emotions... then her emotional breakdown on her past, he completely understanding her , soothing her with his words&warmth.. then the fun at beach,bath , then the just wanna be together, slept...aww...then the morning chatpata bites and the phone call disturbing😂 , then getting ready for food, she asking him to have food and he telling he ia already having one🙈 then the entire convo on saree with his demo🙈😁 by the way i agree with him on saree😁😁.. and then the hot hot romance🙈🙈🙈 uff🔥 ...

and then the morning relax convo with kids, they returning happily, i loved all


his dialogue.I will live and die with you..aww..true if you love your closed one, then dont chose to leave them alone and die

overall enjoyed reading it. your ficfam and ragkor is always a bliss to visualise and read

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear 🤗🤗🤗

The holiday treat was superb with mixture of emotions and hot romance🙈.

Right from kaka giving a surprise, those letter with emotions... then her emotional breakdown on her past, he completely understanding her , soothing her with his words&warmth.. then the fun at beach,bath , then the just wanna be together, slept...aww...then the morning chatpata bites and the phone call disturbing😂 , then getting ready for food, she asking him to have food and he telling he ia already having one🙈 then the entire convo on saree with his demo🙈😁 by the way i agree with him on saree😁😁.. and then the hot hot romance🙈🙈🙈 uff🔥 ...

and then the morning relax convo with kids, they returning happily, i loved all


his dialogue.I will live and die with you..aww..true if you love your closed one, then dont chose to leave them alone and die

overall enjoyed reading it. your ficfam and ragkor is always a bliss to visualise and read


Thanks so much Uma..

Loved the way you loved this and felt like reading a precise..

Yes she is indeed overwhelmed with his pure unadulterated love so need to shed those tiniest insecurity so twined it.

Yes bang on my favorite too i will live and die with you. 👏👍

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