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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Are you gonna update today, Sims? ❤️

Yes my dear Shreya, the update is here! 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

She slipped because she had never stopped loving him. After all those harsh words and unanswered letters, she could never stop loving him. She can control her brain, recite again and again the 'move on' phrase but who will teach her that the heart has a mind of it's own which doesn't know any restraints. I just love romance filled with angst so I would just say bring it on, I am all ready to read. 😛

It pained my heart immensely when Vishaka just left Sameer without caring for him properly. I just don't understand how a mother could be like this. My heart hurts.

He is not allowed to lock doors since which incident. Aren't you increasing the suspense? 😳 I am now curious about why Sameer decided to stay away from Naina when he was madly in love with her and now this, that incident.

The sneak-peak to the next chapter is very interesting and exciting. Update when you are completely fit and fine! 🤗

Edited by Mayashika - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Sims diii pehle to big Bholuram for responding so very late. I was busy with some things which is why neither I could I be active on the thread nor I unreserved at the earliest.

Let me say that Dialogue again which I used to say in HAHK updates

Mai fir agaya diii aapka laalchi late lateef reader apne review k saath…..

Naina ne move on krne ka declaration to de diya lekin sameer k saamne aate hi she got carried away. Saara ka saara determination ki mai usse dur rahungi , mai aage badhungi wagera wagera furrrrr hogaya!!!!! Hawa ka jhonka aaya aur naina ne jo walls banai use hila ke chala gaya….. lekin mai is baat se khush nahi hu. Infact mai to ye soch rahi hu ki kitni takleef hui hogi naina ko sameer ko delhi me dekh kr aur vo bhi jaise hi vo is city me enter hote se hi…. Oh gosh sims diii bohot takleef hui hogi na nain ko..

But all i would is all the best of luck to naina , you've come here to make your career , be the Naina Agarwal you've always wanna be! Stay strong!

And yes those lines how perfectly they've defined Naina's situation! Sims diii i like it soooooooooooo very much when you add lines in your updates and special mention when the lines are written by you. They are always mood lifters for me .

This is the best quality of naina she cannot see anyone in pain , her gesture towards that little girl was very nice. Maybe she'll play the cupid in samaina's love story in Delhi!

Tum kis kahani ki pari ho naina ? This line is soooooooooooo clear and soooo deep!!!! Mad boy she's the fairy of your life ab dekhna kaise akal thiqaane lagati hai tumhari vo bhi bina kuch kiye… oh i am soooooooooooo very excited what's gonna happen next!!!!

Like i said earlier the girl is Deepika and Naina is in Sameer's house on her first day at this very new city!!!! Naina jiii be ready your day is gonna be very very exciting and you'll get lots of shocking suprises!!!! Ab samaina meet to hona hi hai.. mai meri thaanedaar madam ji ko jaanti ho is update me jitna tadpaya hai next update me usse jyada tadpaayengiii!!!

Meri badi behena ab please jaldi se update de do ab to naina ne bhi shirtless sameer dekh liya i am eager to know what will happen next!

Keep smiling

Labhya

Edited by Labhya - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: IamIbe

Yes my dear Shreya, the update is here! 🤗

Is baar mai second aaaya😎

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Posted: 6 years ago

Ressss

Unres....

Naina is so lost and thats true... she evidently recalls wach and every feeling and sensation that passed through her yet whats to make sure he doesnt make a difference to her. His presence makes all the difference in this world..

Destiny plays its own games, she met him exactly when she didnt want to, and the hanky which was his since 5 years finally slipped into the hands that it was made for....

Her wait was painful, with every passing day she was holding onto the diminishing hope till one fine day she lost it..and again the line memory of his voice and handwriting were fading to residues was amazing... it shows that she wasn't only holding on to the hope but the memory of him..

I knew it when reading about the girl that ots gonna be Deepika and my guess was right...

But the most painful part of the update for me was when Vishaka left tending his wound and went to Somani's side. My Sameer has no one for his support, everybody has their own priorities and he is not anyone's priority. The one whose priority he was and always would be, he wants to stay away from her, yet want her will his soul and heart...

He had described Deepika as demon's daughter 😆

Naina being Naina understood the place of him in that house without even interacting with him or any of the members of Somani house. Her concern for his photo showed that she cared about the love that he received from the house and somewhere she knew that he would not receive any love from that house..

Oh the part where she touched the things in Somani house, trying to absorb his feel.... how deeply she is attached to him, even the place he was, things he touched is somthing of value to her... the lifeless house would also carry a life if it is touched by him for her...

Oh yess.. Sameer just out of a bath and Naina there... how lovely.. waiting for some amazing chemistry in the next update...

And i have a small guess to make... Is Naina going to stay in Somani's house and and and... would Rohan fall for her???????

Too many question plus a lott of excitement....

Please update soon di...

But TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF....🤗

Edited by chaaru26 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Yess naina has finally entered the somani’s house this is gonna be so exciting as to whats gonna happen next

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Posted: 6 years ago

Res...

Unres❤️

Sims di, I am in tears..😭! Ye chapter humare dil o ki saath slow poison kar gayi!! What apt title for this chapter,di!! Take a bow....👏!!!

Every line of this chapter screamed the game of destiny!!! Dono ek hai... lekin ek hike bhi nahi hai...😊!! Such beauty of your writing di, kab khatam ho gaya kuch pata hi nahi chala...!!! This chapter is more based in naina's pov..!!!

Destiny and destiny!!! The inner turmoil of naina... "Tu toh kabhi chudiya nahi pehenti...", beyond words!!! Unknowingly she gave extra effort to herself as if he was going to meet sameer... and destiny did that!! In future, destiny will do so! Na chahte hue bhi... naina hopelessly effected with the fact that she was in sameer's arms some time ago.... and I am loving these feelings❤❤!! Sims di, you are pro to do such things with words..!! Indeed, magic...❤️🤗!!

In case of Samaina,destiny always play a huge role...!! Naina remembered sameer as she remembered the poem 'Musafir'❤ !!! And then unknowingly she helped sameer's sister,Deepika!! And went to Somani's house..!! Vishakha kabhi bhi sameer ko thik se samajh hi nahi payi....! Sameer has only two persons in his life.. Nanu and Naina, who loved him by heart,by soul!! Waiting to see all the equations further..!! I can't decide whose condition is worst... Sameer or Naina?

"Tum kis kahani ki pari ho, Naina! " ye line kitna kuch bol jaati hai... !! Always will be my favourite line from Sameer..❤️🤗!!

Not a single photo of sameer in the Somani's house.... naina got some glimpse of sameer's miserable life!!

Again cliffhanger... ye cliffhanger nahi humein tadpane ka solid upai... Sameer clad in a towel after shower... and naina entered☺️!! Jaan le lo,di!!! Kaise mujhe react karna chahiye pata nahi.... !!!

A emotional update with a jaanleva cliifhanger and precap!! Thursday jaldi se aa ja re baba..!!! And I am missing hahk and leap to your heart's update... *laalchi me!!! Take care of yourself... aur Thursday bas jaldi se aaja....🤗!!

With love,Suparna

Edited by Suparna13 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

res

unres

Sims sims bhen aa gale mil

I am in tears okay

and I don't know what to say

Sameer is tolerating so much

and he does not have anyone in so many people to call his own

who will understand him if not Naina

but he has to let go of the pain he is going through

and Naina will tend the wounds.

Their destiny will keep throwing them in front of each other

out of all houses Naina had to land in his house and then his room

Naina stopped writing letters because he did not respond

they will have a huge breakdown when the truth will come forth

and I should carry buckets with me

because tu mujhe bhut rulane wali hain

Thursday why so far

Edited by munchkinland - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

For chapter 1

Woah! I didn't expect them to come face to face so soon! Like Delhi mein pair rakhte hi Naina ko to Sameer dikh gya.

It was too good. Both of them are just trying to keep the other away, for different reasons ofcourse, but still hv that yearning for each other.

Rushing to read chapter 2

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Posted: 6 years ago

Sims, this update was more from Naina's POV, just like the previous one was more from Sameer's POV. That's what I felt. After reading chapter 1, I was actually going to ask you to give more of Naina's POV in chapter 2, but I was late in commenting.

Anyways, I liked how things turned out in a way that led Naina to Somani house and infact, to Sameer's room.

Intrigued about that incidednt!

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