Originally posted by: fariya20
Awesome story
Both aware about each other chori chori niharna
But couldn't voice out
He finally stops her
Waiting for next
Thank you ☺
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Originally posted by: fariya20
Awesome story
Both aware about each other chori chori niharna
But couldn't voice out
He finally stops her
Waiting for next
Thank you ☺
Next coming up☺
He didn't knew it before.. ☺
Thank you ☺
Originally posted by: taahir004
Part 3
Fabulous Part
Geet now is aware of Maan's presence and this fact makes him happy
but when she pick up his handkerchief caressing and bringing it to her face
Maan was drawn towards her
but I'm glad that finally he stopped her from running away
will be waiting to see now what will happen
Thank you ☺
Originally posted by: babelicious
Hi, could you please update the story with the school reunion and Maan breaking Geet’s heart? I have swept through every page in this forum but damn I haven’t been able to find it 😒 pls consider that
Hi dear.. Sorry for late reply.
And again sorry cause it will take time for me to update that one... ☺
But I will update it for sure and will let you know☺
Last part
She was shocked to see him standing in front of her. She stood there..not knowing what to do! He started taking steps towards her. She wanted to move from there but something was there in his eyes which didnt let her!
Suddenly she got extremely nervous..seeing him so close to her. She quickly turned around to leave..but next her breath caught in her throat..feeling his touch on her wrist!
Her breathing become fast with this new feel. He was also affected as much as her.. His heart was beating so fast that he was sure..that she could hear it too.
She started to Wringle as she was afraid of someone seeing them like that! And he left her hand immediately thinking that she didnt liked it. He didnt wanted to leave any wrong impression on her.
As soon as he left her wrist.. She started moving inside. "geet.." she stoped in her track hearing her name from his mouth for the first time! And she loved it! Her name sounds more beautiful in his voice.
She waited for him to say something. While he was feeling so nervous.. "wo..hmm..kal sham..park me..aaogi..??..4 baje??" he asked hesitatingly.
She was surprised hearing that..she turned to look at him questioningly... It increased his nervousness more.. "tum chaho toh..apni friend ko bhi sath le aana..!"...he added quickly. "please..!"..he pleaded.
She bite her lips in nervousness & confusion...should she say yes OR no?? While he waited for her answer..inwardly praying to hear a yes!
There were still standing there. She was busy thinking what to do..and he was waiting for her answer.. When someone called her from behind.
"gudiya..dii"...it was her 5years old little brother..who came looking for her. She quickly went to him..before he could reach near them.. not wanting him to see maan there..otherwise it would have created a big trouble for them.
Maan smile hearing the cute name "gudiya dii".
"kya hua aayu?"..she asked approaching her brother. "aap kahan the..?? I was waiting for u.." he pouted cutely. Aayu didnt noticed maan who was still standing near the gate.
Geets thoughts went to maan and she trund to look at him..when aayu tugged her hand.. "dii...chalo na jaldi.." "han..chal"..she moved with aayu holding her hand..to go inside.
Maan wanted to stop her..but what he was supposed to do?? He was feeling disappointed.
When they reached at the entrance of the main hall..aayu ran inside before her. she stopped still unsure that if she should agree..? & turned around...only to see him still standing there..waiting for her answer.
He got some hope.. His eyes were pleading her to say Yes! She bite her lips to hide her smile..seeing his cute pleading face.. And she nodded her head..for a YES! That she will come to meet him!
She chuckled seeing him smiling so brightly...jumping in joy hearing his desired answer. He ran a nervous hand through his hair..embarrassed..seeing her laughing at his reaction!
He waved his hand at her..mouthing a bye n see u! She too waved back at him. Both kept looking at eachother...lost in these new feelings & emotions.
They were forced to look away..when aayu called her again. Giving a last look at him she went inside. After few seconds he too left towards his home.. Both were excited to meet eachother again & were waiting egerly for the next day.
That was just the beginning of their LOVE STORY...
~Chori-Chori.. Chupke-Chupke~
THE END..!!!
Nice part.geet scared when maan caught her hand.maan want to meet geet and she feel narvous he said her to take her friend with her.geet bro came and take her with him.maan wait for her ans.
Eid ka din... Will comment later
It's such a beautiful part
Milne aayegi na wo waise..
This deserves a tiny epilogue..
Originally posted by: momi_angel
Nice part.geet scared when maan caught her hand.maan want to meet geet and she feel narvous he said her to take her friend with her.geet bro came and take her with him.maan wait for her ans.
Thank you☺
And she agreed to meet him😉☺
Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
Eid ka din... Will comment later
Eid mubarak ☺
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