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Part 28


Heaven and Earth may separate us today but nothing will ever change the fact that you made me mom ..........


Pari "toh phir unlogo nai asey q bola?

"She asked looking at geet with moist eyes" k mere mama muje chor k chali gye q k mein bad girl Hoon she sobed hugging geet

Geet kis nai bola she asked in anger who dare to hurt pari she console her

Pari summer camp ki teacher nai mein rain mein khel rahi thi unki bath nahi suni toh unhoo nai bola k pari gandi hai bath nahi sunti isliye uski mama usko chor k chali gye , fhir sarey kids nai mere majak bhi banaya jab mein mere mama nahi hai sab has rahey Thai she said sobbing sniffing in hugs

Geet really mad at that teacher how dare she said something to a child who lost her mom so cruel disgusting lady she thought she rubbed pari shoulders

It's ok bacha asey rotey nahi woh lady woh blind thi isliye toh Meri pari ki achi achi qualities nahi dekha us nai she kneel down wiped her tear console her with her sweet words

Unknown to them maan too hear everything he saw pari crying he stop at Door he thought geet scold pari but before he shout pari words made him stopped and his whole world trun up and down his pari his daughter face this he didn't even know

He clutched his hand into fist controlling his anger and hurt seeing geet pari once he moved away leaving geet behind to look after pari

He straight went to his gym

He recalled what ever hear from pari

He realized all his anger on punching bag every punched showed his anger when his strength broken

"Ahhhh !! he hit last time with all his strength hold the punching bag when it returns to him with both hands his Sharp breathing tells his fatigue from emotionally and physically both he kneeled down holding the bag cried without any sounds " people said wrong man not cried , they cried inside without letting their love once know it "

"Maan closing his moist eyes thought mein kitni bhi koshish Kar lo pari k zindagi mein Ek maa ki kami kabhi Puri nahi Kar sakta then he remembered something getting up he removed his gloves through it on floor , his hands makes fits to control his anger who burned him inside how can he not see his daughter pain how he became so ignorant in his sroundings that could not see what happening in pari life

He was hurts angry at himself to failed as father who doesn't had idea about his child pain and also he can't able to removed that of pain in pari lifes insecurities of not having a mother besides her

Maan q Chali gye tum disha ? His eyes moist remember his wife who's also mom of his pari , mein nahi rakh paraha tumhari pari k khayal akaley he closed his eyes tears rolled down from his eyes in grief

Flash back

Entering his room he saw something which brought smile on his face his 7 months pregnant wifey standing in front of mirror so ignorance in talking with their unborn baby holding her baby bump looking too cute he slowly walk toward his wife without being notice to her

Disha Baby you know tum jab aao gi na hum khub masti karey gye she said in excitingly when he hugs her from behind

Kiya Kar rahi hoo wifey he said in teasing tune ,who first get startled by his sudden hug ,she patted his arms for scaring her

Maan kabhi toh insono k jasey Aya Karo Dara Diya na hum dono ko she said in frown control her breath which get unstable due to sudden shocked

Acha !sorry ....maan apologize seeing her breathing hard giving her water making her sit on their bed get worries see her like that

It's ok !no need to get worries we both are fine she said as seeing tensed line on his forehead

Are you sure ? Let go to hospital if maan said in concernly but he was cut by his wife

Arey baba bola na am fine tension q lay rahey hoo ap she said little loud annoying by his hospital going every time when she felt a slight discomfort

Maan sigh of relief seeing her normal still worried , acha ok but what you doing before my arrival he asked normally which makes Disha smile

Disha I am talking with my pari she replied

Ohh so mama baby talking what they talking , kahi dada ki chogli toh nahi hori na Meri princess say he said teasing as lay down beside her keeping his head near Disha lap look at her suspiciously

Disha Ohhh she made owe face slapped on his check lightly mein asa q Karo gi she said irritating folding her hand around

Maan I can't trust you baby with my princess he winked

Maan..... she said his name in cute angry tune

Ok peace but what you saying to my princess he stopped his teasing seeing her red face

Hearing him she excited telling what she speaking to their princess he see her happy face start get lost she speak

Isliye mein na usko bilkul bhi datoo gi aur my little girl will be prankstar she said in excited and stopped not getting his response she shocked him

High!! Maan come back ,Kya howa ?

Maan AP sun bhi rahey Thai Jo mein khai rahi thi ? Disha asked

Ha baba sun Raha tha aur soch Raha tha k kitni bar mujhe humari princes k school Jana parey ga jab uski teacher mujko bulai gi he replied to her made her confused

Pari ki teacher apko q bolai g she asked in confusion

Arey jab princess koi prank karey teacher toh complain karey GI aur hosakta hai princess punish hoo maan reply normally not see his wife get angry listen punishment

Disha asey Kasey teacher complain karey GI punish Kare gi mein teacher ko amazoon k jungle mein bhej Doo Jo Meri princess ko hurt Kiya tohh and mein she said pushing her hands in air that hit glass which shatter around

Flash back end

Maan come back from his memories of his wife hearing sounds of glass breaking

Tum aj hoti toh us teacher ko Amazon bhejwa deti he said in painful smile

Outside nakul shout at servent breaking glass piece


Main while geet console pari she make her lay down on her bed her head on geet laps pari hold her waist ,geet carse her hair lovingly making her sleep

Geet furiously thinking us teacher ki toh class mein longi Meri pari ko rulaney k liye usko na jungle mein jangli janwaroo k pass bhej was dongi bachoo say Kasey boltey Zara bhi sense nahi hai she was going red thought how mean some people without thinking said anything to anyone


To be continued


Precap Mrs khurana I understand what our staff done is principal try to calm down her seeing Mrs khurana angry

What understand did your staff think before speaking just coz of your staff my daughter hurt how dare she said something to her geet said dangerously glaring that teacher who shiver seeing her anger

Edited by maankijann - 6 years ago

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