MG SS- Happy New Year UPDATED part4 /pg9... June6.. - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
#31

This is so adorable. Awesome os...

I loved it one zero zero in one zero zero or may be more...Aaru is cutest...Loved Maan's reaction to it... Amazingly wrtten...plz write more... waiting...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: love2_soma

cute update.............


100 rupees as entry fees........🤣

Thank you☺

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Posted: 6 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Maangeeet

This is so adorable. Awesome os...

I loved it one zero zero in one zero zero or may be more...Aaru is cutest...Loved Maan's reaction to it... Amazingly wrtten...plz write more... waiting...

Thank you☺

Next part coming up...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Part3


"Aaru ko party me jaana hai na..?" ..annie asked as she started having her fav ice-cream...to which Aaru nodded very eagerly.


"Annie..."..geet warned her.


"ye lo bhai..aapke sare efforts waste kar diye isne.. I told u ke..iss jhagdalu ko jhagde karne me hi maza aata hai.." ..vicky taunted.


"SHUT UP..Vicky..!" annie said irritated.


"SHUT UP..VICKY..!" ..aaru & maansi copied & giggled..making others to laugh with them too.


"oye..changu-mangu..ruko..abhi dikhata hoon tum dono ko.." ..vicky shouted and ran behind them. The whole place was filled with their laugh, giggles and shouts.


"ok..enough..jisko party me jana hai wo yahan aao..abhi.." ..annie yelled, catching their attention successfully and maansi & aaru came running, saying that they want to go.


"but aapne toh bola tha ke kids nahi ja sakte.." ..maansi asked confused.


"han..but hum apni khud ki party toh kar sakte hai na...papa, mumma, dadi aur hum..sab sath me..!" ..annie replied with a mischief glint.


"yey..!!" ..both the kids jumped in excitement & joy.


"humari party..?" aaru asked with a wide smile..annie nodded returning the smile.. " han..humari special party..!"


maan & geet were pleased with the idea which made their cuties so happy.


"wah..pehli bar koi acha idea diya hai..." ..vicky spoke, only to get a slap on the back of his head from annie.


And they all got busy in planning for their own exclusive party! Aaru & maansi were the most excited souls. They kept telling maan each & everything they wanted in their party. From balloons to pizza.. From cake &pastries to chocolates and gifts! They were so over excited that they were not ready to sleep also...maaneet had a hard time while putting them to sleep.



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Next day..


Preprations for the party started. Aaru & maansi too helped annie in decorating the living room. They had even invited a few friends of maansi & aaru who lives in the same neighbourhood.


They were busy in their works when aakanksha came.


"what are u doing here?? Party me nahi gai..?" ..annie asked raising her brow.


"party me hi toh aai hoon.." ..aakanksha replied grinning widely.


"oye..hello..tujhe kisne invite kiya..?" ..annie glared at her.


"woh actually..tum log na mujhe invite karna bhul gaye.. But its ok..i forgave u aur main khud aa gai.." aakanksha replied naughtily.


Annie shook her head at her nautanki friend.. "humne tumhe jaan bhujh kar invite nahi kiya..so u are not allowed in our party.." ..annie stated.


Aakanksha knew that annie was just joking...still she though to play it! She turned to aaru.."aaru i am ur friend na..aap mere ko apki party me aane doge na..?" ..she asked with a puppy face.


Aaru who is very soft hearted, nodded a yes at first.. But then seeing his bua & di glaring & signaling at him to say NO..shook his head instantly.


"aap mere ko nahi aane doge..but kyun..? ..aakanksha asked.


"bua aur dii nahi bol rahi hai na.." aaru replied making a sorry face.


"but main toh apki friend hoo na.." and saying this aakanksha faked a cry..making aaru to feel bad for her.


"bua...dekho akksha ro rahi hai..plzz usko bhi aane do na humari party me.." ..aaru requested cutely.


Annie tried to resist the smile which appeared on her lips hearing him. She looked at aakanksha who winked at her smiling naughtily.


"ok..tum party me aa sakti ho..par tumhe fees deni padegi.. Aur wo bhi 500Rs..." ..anni demanded.


"but mere paas toh 500Rs nahi..sirf 300 hai.." ..aakanksha replied.


"toh kya hua..aaru ke paas haina..! Aaru papa ne paise diye the na..dikhao toh.." annie asked.


Aaru pulled out the 100rupee note which his papa has given him. Annie took that note and gave it to aakanksha saying that aaru would love to help her. While aaru who heard it, instantly took it back from aakanksha...saying.. "ye mera hundred hai.."


annie teased him.."but ab aaru ko ye aakasha ko dena padega..aap uske friend ho na..ab uski help nahi karoge.."


aaru instantly hided the note behind him..."nahi ye mera hai..papa ne diya hai.."


"toh thik hai..fir aaksha party me nahi aa sakti.." ..annie said eyeing aakanksha who stucked her tounge out at her.


Poor aaru baby has to agree to help his friend as he cant see anyone sad..


"ye lo bua.." ..aaru forwarded the note to annie.. " ab aaksha ko party me aane doge na.." ..he asked.


"han..but abhi bhi ek aur hundred chahiye fees ke liye.." annie answered.


Aaru thought for a while and said..."jab papa aayenge na..main tab leke dunga..thik hai..?" he offered sweetly.


Before Annie could reply, aakanksha who was amazed & impressed with the innocence of this cutie, instantly hugged him and kissed his cheeks.. "awww..mera sweety pie..u are so cute.."


"eee..aaksha...leave me..." ..aaru cribed feeling irritated with those kisses.



To be continued.....

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Posted: 6 years ago
#35

Awww. another cute chapter Shona ❤️

The kids couldn't stay angry for long

Continue soon 😃

P.S Change the title head from OS to SS 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#36

You have already updated😳

Didn't see it..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Cuteness overloaded ❤️❤️

Aaru and Mansi excited for the party 😃

Annie has finally set the things right 😊

Edited by Silvermist32223 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38

Nice part.aaru is soo cute.anni plan their family party and kids are so excited.anni and akansha tease aru and aru gave his money to akansha and invited her in party.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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aru is so sweet n innocent

very cute update

kids are excited for their own party

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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

awesome update, kids are so cute

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