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Posted: 6 years ago

Okay folks this is it! Today is the last day of the shoot. BeHir ended a few weeks ago, this week show will also end. So I was thinking ki I will post some chapters that I have already written and then I will stop. I think a three or four more chapters are there.



This is an ongoing story and it will not end. It will live on. I might post it on the FF forum now. From the beginning. After June. A new thread and maybe more readers.



Thanks you all for the support and love. After the next few chapters the story although incomplete, will end. You guys can take it wherever you want from there.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Okay,that was a little unexpected,is this the same for all FF's ???and that also means ur presence in this AT would be no more right??😒 😒

Anyway thanks Ash chechi to leading this story till here,u r trusting us to lead it ourselves after a three to four chapters,but u can trust me,I would only imagine the best for BeHir😳😳


And plz don't let Bela punish Mahir so much,I wish to see a baby in the last chapters,that's why,poor guy,he's been going through a lot lately ,I know u would end it good,thank u so much🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi ASH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry for being late.

and dont worry about replying its fine I understand

Everyone is worried ye kaand karke kaha gaye and waiting for gossip but One look at bella and people decided to move to their room matlab look at the terror of her tears.

Mahir you are doing in no good its not because of your physical health she is worried its your mental health that affected her. This decision of him to hide things from her no matter how much unintentional and innocent made her doubt her love infact the very base of their relationship i.e. trust friendship something which they had from start. It broke her that while she was miserable he was actually making her feel that little she knows that he had his own nightmares and the one thing he dreaded was coming back to him. She thought maybe she actually became like someone involved in work so much that she became unapproachable. His wild memories were not the way we wanted it to be wild.

ASH I wanted GOA for BEHIR and you gave this yucky stuff their enjoying sadistic pleasure are we? How much tipsy was he to kiss back that girl KUHU should know about this now. Also ANU should be brought back thrashed left right by bella and everyone from family even kuhu and also should witness behir ki intimacy I want her to burn like burn real bad.

This guy knew they got married under not so happy circumstances yet he was expecting that bella should give her attention to him talk about being hopelessly in love. ANU made this elaborate plan of trapping mahir after she came to know that he is having amnesia. This girl I would love to see her getting thrashed by every single member of the family. she opened pandora's box of his insecurities she tapped that one thing he was always afraid of she should be punished.

All his life he was running from that one thing proving constantly that he was not and will never be what everyone expected him to be he was not just ANDY's son but SUMI's son also and he will never do this. He was afraid that what if he would have hurt bella even though unintentional this guilt was eating him. That's why he asked her is she happy with him what else he should do somewhere deep down he wanted to make her happy so that his past will never come his insecurities will never win.

mahir she wasn't crying that you watched her in bathrobe she was crying that you just watched and did nothing when she was in bathrobe. that was so soothing that he called bella infront of anu when she hugged him good going burn girl. Look at her audacity she keeping head in his lap mahir should have thrown her out only I am telling you ash I want her to witness behir and their intimacy I want her to burn and realise that what she lied and planned about was actually happening in front of her eyes.

But how she got to know that he offered her post of chairman KUHU should take hajmola dose. This girl manipulated everything their every action so perfectly she played her cards well initially trying to portray bella as gold digger than someone who still missed her first love but mahir should have known that kiss they shared was not casual I know I am stupid to say this but this anu made me go red with anger. This anu is exactly the N3 wali anu always looking at cashing in minutest possibility of having mahir with her.

Mahir was poster wale mahirji asking logical things but there is saying na IF YOU CANNOT CONVINCE THEM THEN CONFUSE THEM & THE MOST POWERFUL WEAPON IN THIS WORLD IS TEARS Anu used both of them cautiously manipulating him and confusing him and bella was also distant giving him space making him even more confuse to believe in her lies. He was in that confused state also was justifying bella's behaviour and doubting his and somewhere hating himself that what he did with her and why he became that only which he always feared his heart knew how much it would hurt if bella left him even though he didn't knew about it that's called real love.

Anu not only attacked his hurting nerve she also made him guilty and trapped him from all side so that no matter even if he wants to go he cannot leave her. This girl I am telling you ASH this girl should be royally insulted by everyone even rehaan if it makes you happy. OMG did she actually went on describing things to make him remember that this girl has no shame.

Poor guy was so vulnerable he wanted that bella should give him so much attention that he will not get thoughts of never loving her but it was like a double edge sword the more she showered her attention the more he became guilty of what if he actually would have hurted her. Finally he blurted the real trauma of his past which haunted him poor guy went through so much bearing all this silently and this constant guilt of being one of the reasons his mom and dad separated although for me ANDY and his reason of falling for POLO was lame I mean SUMI was doing everything for them and if he was feeling so neglected he should have told her rather than seeking someone else help. LAME excuses people come up with to justify cheating.

ANDY should realise what all he made that small child go through because of his one act I think somewhere andy feels guilty and that's why he is in this plan and genuinely happy for BEHIR. and yuvi and Pratham were born around same time so what was he seeking comfort from both of them.

This much amount of pain mahir never shared with anyone he shared with bella his most secret part his most vulnerable part he shared with her they connected even more she knows his fears now he imagined also that he will leave bella stranded in middle of nowhere with kids. YUVI was very much sane in all this or maybe he knew how low anu can stoop for mahir that's why he advised her.

Bella is amazing instead of feeling sad or pity she made him cheerful she knew there is a way to handle this if she kept on discussing his insecurity he will never get over it and so she thought of working on their own relation rather than justifying on what happened in past and who was guilty.

MAHIR MAHIR MAHIR this boy is next level tharki here one moment he crying and next moment he is gifting her VICTORIA'S secret collection seriously he just cannot control himself after being away from her for so long. MAHIR and his fantasies he was gifting this imagine boss and employee playing around and had anu entered that day then to anu would have vanished into thin air.

I knew it the moment bella said make me wear it there will be a catch what he thought after making her longing for him for weeks she will let him have his way easily no chance buddy. And this is what you do to your friend mahir needs to be taught about being friendly. she will tempt him badly now. but bella is wrong Suhani did expected her to wear that lace type thing although not for her but still don't kill me for this. and mahir never told about kiss because he don't want to miss out on action happening in his bedroom for something so disgusting.


But first this ANU need to be taught a lesson she assaulted him at his vulnerable state bella should not let her go easily.

ASH what a chapter fab writing I loved the way you handled this emotional but fun in end. I am completely surprised by your writing even though I have read it many times but your choice of words your handling of emotions fun every aspect of relation makes me dumbstruck all the time.


waiting for the next update post it soon you know the reason for it I mean bella mahir anu andy this is going to be one hell of a drama

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CHAPTER 21: Yuvi and Suhani

Next morning Bella expected to get court marshalled by Andy and Kuhu at least but surprisingly when they came downstairs, everyone was perfectly normal with them with the exception of Sumitra. As soon as they reached the dining table Sumitra launched her verbal attack on both of them. She spoke for fifteen minutes non-stop before Bella could get a word in. The general gist was the carelessness with which they had disappeared from the venue without informing anyone.

Bella: MA! Relax! Calm down. I am sorry. I should have informed you but buaji had pissed me off, Mahir had pissed me off and on top of that masi irritated me. I couldn’t take it anymore. I just had to leave. I know I should have called you but I didn’t think of that...

Polo: And why were you crying last night?

Bella: Because of Mahir. He was being an ass.

Yuvi: OMG! Bhai I never thought I would see the day when a girl would call you an ass. If I remember correctly all my girlfriends would go how sensible your brother is! Why can’t you be like him? Learn something from your brother!! Half of them had a crush on you. Bella! Thank you for calling my brother an ass and proving that he is just like me.

Bella: He is nothing like you Yuvi but yes he was being unnecessarily stupid yesterday.

Yuvi: Ouch! You could have agreed with me just to keep my heart you know.

Bella: NO!

Sumitra: Okay, you two! Stop fighting!

YuLa: Yes MA!

And they burst out laughing! With everyone laughing, Andy took that opportunity to pull Bella aside.

Bella: Yes dad?

Andy: Thank you, dear.

Bella: For what? Forsaying your son is stupid?

Andy: No. For defending my son. I heard your conversation with Ahilya yesterday. My sons have suffered because of what I did in life. I did what I did and you did not have to defend me or Polo’s honour for that matter. But you did. Thank you, Bella.

Bella: Dad I have no idea why mom is a part of our lives. But she is and that is all that matters to me right now. She is family and no one insults my family in front of me.

Andy: Dear, I was worried about how my kid's partners would fit in our unusual family situation. But you, Suhani and RJ not only accepted my kids with open arms but also support them unconditionally.

Bella: Dad, don’t worry we are family. No matter how unusual or otherwise but we are family and nothing will ever change that.

Andy: Bella, I had been meaning to talk to you about this for quite some time now. Ever since your wedding actually. This is neither the time nor the place but still. Mahir is very insecure about himself. Ever since his childhood, he has had to bear the brunt of being my eldest son. I did plenty of mistakes in my life, one of them was bringing Polo in Sumi’s life. I have no justification for my actions... I was an idiot... I mean Polo is great but Sumi has suffered a lot... Even Polo has suffered...

He looked very awkward and embarrassed at that moment. Gone was the Andy Sehgal Bella knew and admired. Before her stood a man, bent and defeated, one who had carried the weight of his mistakes for far too long. Seeing him so vulnerable, Bella was reminded of Mahir from the previous night. Andy and Mahir had nothing in common when it came to looks. Except for his height, Mahir had inherited nothing from his father. But that day Bella detected faint traces of Mahir in Andy.

Andy: Bella, Mahir was always taunted for being a cheater’s son. He was constantly reminded that he was my son and hence he was likely to commit the same mistakes. I could do nothing to shut the people who said this... I was so helpless Bella while my kids suffered in silence.

Bella: Dad, I don't need any justification. I told you. I have no idea why mom is a part of our lives. But she is and that is all that matters to me right now. And I know allabout his insecurities. And now that I know, I will ensure that he gets rid ofthem. Don’t worry.

Andy: I was embarrassed to broach this topic with you but seeing Mahir’s behaviour from the past few weeks, I knew I had to do it. I...

Bella: Dad, I know. I will make sure that Mahir never faces his old nightmare. EVER.

Andy gave her a smileand they both went to join the breakfast table. During the breakfast Bella keptgiving Mahir really dirty stares. So much that even Polo who was generallyclueless noticed it. When Anu dropped in for a bite, Bella gave her such aglare when she tried to talk to Mahir that Anu wilted in front of that one. Anuwho was an expert at comebacks could not think of something scathing to say.Yuvi noticed this and almost spit out his last bit of paratha. He as it waschoked on it and Suhani had to thump him on the back. Once he could breathe normallyhe whispered to Suhani

Yuvi: Did you justnotice the glare that Bella gave Anu?

Suhani: I did. What was that for?

Yuvi: I think I know. Meet me later. We will speak with Bhai.

Suhani: Okay.

Post breakfast, Yuri and Suhani went to Mahir, who was in the study, going through some files looking thoroughly miserable. Pratham had to leave immediately but they promised to keep him posted. He brightened up at the sight of Yuvi and Suhani.

Yuvi: Bhai what didyou tell Bella that she gave such a poisonous glare to Anu?

Mahir: I... I toldher about the Goa incident last night and some other things...

Suhani: What Goa incident?

Yuvi: Shh. I willtell you later on. Was that why she was crying?

Mahir: No. That is a long story and not meant for your ears. Just know this that I am in a hot soup. She is still angry that I pretended and then I went on to call her a terror. As in I said she is a terror when she gets angry and also well I told her that I sort of kissed Anu back...

Suhani: You kissedAnu? When? How?

Mahir: When I wastwenty. She kissed me actually...

Yuvi: Bhai you sureknow how to screw up a story. Suhani long story short we were in a night clubin Goa celebrating Anu’s birthday when Anu out of blue kissed Bhai. Bhairesponded for a micro-second before pushing her away. I wouldn’t call thatresponding but Bhai thinks it is. In order to push someone/something away youneed pull that object close for a micro second. Only then will push be effective. Newton’s third law of motion Bhai. Every action has an equal and opposite reaction. I was there Bhai, I saw you push her away. When someone ispushed away, a small jerk comes. That is the moment when that person isslightly closer to you. I had a hard time convincing Bhai that he should notfeel guilty and clear it with Anu which he did. It was all my stupid sister’splan to get Bhai and Anu together.

Suhani: But...

Yuvi: Bahi don’t tell me you told Bella the details.

Mahir mutely nodded his head.

Yuvi: Bhai! Why did you go into the details? You could have simply told her the truth but why go into the details? This is cruelty against women.

Mahir: Look Yuvi I appreciate your concern but you can’t tell me how wrong I am, okay? Trust me I already know. I was just trying to keep the honesty factor intact but I guess I bombarded her with too much information last night. And on top of that my stupidity... I am in so much trouble... I mean she took it quite lightly but Iknow she is hurt.

Suhani: Bhai, I knowBella since we were kids. She will not hold this against you. She will not-torture you for something that happened more than ten years ago.

Mahir: I know Suhani.Anu deserves the glares but that is not why she is upset with me. There are other things that I have done in the recent past that have hurt her tremendously. Anyways I don’t know what to do...

He went from thereleaving behind an exasperated Yuvi and a puzzled Suhani.

Yuvi: Look at this man! First, he spent his youth waiting in a corner for some girl to notice him. Now that she has, he destroyed it with his own two hands. He is digging his own grave.

Suhani: I hate to say this, but I agree with you. We need to do something.

Just then Mahir came rushing back and caught hold of Suhani’s hand.

Mahir: Suhani, come with me. I need to talk to you.

He dragged her to hisroom and shut the door behind them.

Mahir: Suhani, how do you befriend someone?

Suhani: What?

Mahir: How do youbecome friends with someone?

Suhani: Why are you asking this Bhai?

Mahir: Bella has toldme that before I become her husband, I will have to become her friend first. And I don’t know how. Shall I take her out on a date? Or maybe get a gift? Oh, Iknow I will take her out on a holiday? Or maybe I will gift her a spa package...

Suhani: Bhai! Calmdown. Take a deep breath! These things are what boyfriends do. Or husbandsdo. Friendship is not about material things. I mean I rarely gift Bellaanything. The only time we gift each other is on birthdays. Friendship will nothappen tomorrow. It builds over time. Love can happen in an instant butfriendship? It takes years of efforts from both the sides for it to growstronger. Friendship is not about gestures, it is about promises; the promiseto be there, the promise to support, the promise to lend an ear whenevernecessary. It is not always about having the right advice but also about beingable to just listen. A friend is someone to whom I can go and rant and rant andrant and then we can go out for a coffee, the topic of ranting left far behind. Friendship is about being a safe place where I can share all my secrets. My ownpersonal locker. Friendship is about giving these rights to a person.

Mahir: But we already have these things. I mean Bella comes and rants to me. She shares her worries with me. She does all those things that you said...

Suhani: Bhaifriendship about one more thing. In friendship, rights are not just given but they are also to be exercised. She exercises her rights as a friend. Do you do the same?

Mahir: I don’t want to burden her with my problems...

Suhani: That is whereyou are wrong. She is feeling like she is the only one sharing things with you. When you say this, you make her feel like a stranger and I know Bella. She will take this as a personal failure. She will say that she has failed as a personto get you to open up to her. She will blame herself.

Mahir: She is blaming herself. You are right Suhani. But what do I do now?

Suhani: There is one more rule in friendship. As in between best friends if at all you end upoffending the other person, you say sorry but you don’t wait for the otherperson to forgive you. With best friends, forgiveness is a given. You go back tobeing as you were. But remember to never repeat the same mistake again. Don’tbehave any different with her. Behave just the way you were.

Mahir: Are you saying that me going back to normal will help?

Suhani: It most certainly will. Mahir bhai, she is stubborn as hell but deep down she is a sweetheart. I will have a word with her. She will be fine.

Mahir: Thanks Suhani.

Suhani: Any time bhai.

In the meanwhile, Bella had reached the study for some reason and was amazed (read shocked) to see Yuvi standing there.

Bella: Yuvi, what are you doing inside the STUDY?

Yuvi: Marvelling at my brother’s stupidity.

Bella: What?

Yuvi: Yeah... He told you about the Goa incident with Anu right?

Bella: He told me a lot of things last night...

Yuvi looked surprised at that.

Yuvi: Bella, I know I am, not a very reliable source but trust me when I say, Bhai did not kiss her back. It was just his perception.

Bella: I don’t need you to tell me that. I know he did not kiss her. It’s just that... Well, I need to have a word with you. Come...

She dragged him out of the study towards Yuvi’s room. Once there she turned to him.

Bella: Tell me honestly, what did you see?

Yuvi: When?

Bella: When you told me to go and get my man, you sounded like you knew something was not quite correct and hence you were warning me. So, tell me what did you see?

Yuvi: You caught that huh?

Bella: Of course. I know you well enough by now. So are you telling me?

Yuvi: I might as well tell you that. Come sit.

Bella sat on the edgeof his bed.

Yuvi: Okay, you will listen to me first and then freak out, get it? I am not dealing with your tantrums today.

Bella simply noddedher head, looking at him keenly. He got a dirty look for his last statement.

Yuvi: When I came toyour room that day, I did not know how I was going to broach the topic. Whatever I had seen was awkward and very very sensitive. A part of me told me that it was none of my business but a part of me told me that as a friend it was my duty to warn you. So I had decided to simply warn you without going intothe details. But then I found you crying like a weakling and it pissed me off. Hence the lecture about crying instead of doing something.

Bella: What had you seen?

Yuvi: I was passingMahir bhai’s room on that very day when I heard a girl’s shrill giggle come from in there. I knew you were at work and Kuhu was in her room, so I wondered who was in Bhai’s room. Against my better judgement, I peeked inside. The door was open slightly and all I had to do was to peep inside. What I saw, stunned. Mahir Bhai was sitting on his bed. Looking supremely uncomfortable and Anu was flirting with him. And by flirting, I don’t mean harmless flirting with words. I will spare you the details but she was saying something like all Bhai had to do was to kiss her once, he would remember all of their magical moments together. Bhai looked ready to burst into tears. I knew I had to rescue him.ASAP. So I knocked on the door and Anu had to jump back. She gave some flimsy excuse of having come to ask about his health and I showed her the door. Bhai had been behaving really weird with me ever since he lost his memory so I thought it would be unwise to say anything to him.

Bella: So you came to warn me?

Yuvi: Bella, I knew Bhai would not succumb to her advances. But he has this habit of getting guilty. He was guilty about kissing her last time. I had a hard time convincing him that HE was not at fault. And if eighteen-year-old Anu could kiss him, then this older Anu can most certainly do that. I did not want her ruining your relationship. You make him happy Bella. And I want him to be happy. So...

Bella got up and hugged Yuvi tightly.

Bella: Thanks Yuvi.Mahir told me all about Anu and her attempts of convincing him of their affair.

Yuvi: Any time Bella.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: TenderCoconut

Okay,that was a little unexpected,is this the same for all FF's ???and that also means ur presence in this AT would be no more right??😒 😒

Anyway thanks Ash chechi to leading this story till here,u r trusting us to lead it ourselves after a three to four chapters,but u can trust me,I would only imagine the best for BeHir😳😳


And plz don't let Bela punish Mahir so much,I wish to see a baby in the last chapters,that's why,poor guy,he's been going through a lot lately ,I know u would end it good,thank u so much🤗


Enjoy the story right now Ima. I might continue this on the FF forum. You will just have to wait a bit as I will start it from beginning over there. I will keep you guys on the PM list.


@Rehan same goes for you.



And one more thing. I just realised that the stupid IF has been clubbing words. Since I was posting from my mobile, I had not realised this. I have corrected that for this chapters. For previous ones, I will do it later.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Thanks for your ff

I will miss u when u will stop writing

If possible for u add me on insta

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Originally posted by: Preciousevil

Thanks for your ff

I will miss u when u will stop writing

If possible for u add me on insta


Rehan I am addicted to writing now. I will continue to write. And whenever I do, I will drop in a pm. And this story will go on on the FF forum. Here the response has gone down and the show us ending so I am moving it.


Insta I would rather not as that is my personal account and I don't want to mix these two. Sorry about that.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer


Rehan I am addicted to writing now. I will continue to write. And whenever I do, I will drop in a pm. And this story will go on on the FF forum. Here the response has gone down and the show us ending so I am moving it.


Insta I would rather not as that is my personal account and I don't want to mix these two. Sorry about that.

I thought u r having some fan page that y I asked abt it..no need of sorry yaar.... every one has ryt to keep his personal life and other things separately. ... and yes do pm me whenever u right anything 😊😊😊😊😊

I will b waiting keep this in mind 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

So, this story is not gonna end on a cliffhanger? Are you moving everything to the FF forum?

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Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

So, this story is not gonna end on a cliffhanger? Are you moving everything to the FF forum?


Yes. Everything. But slowly. I will post the remaining flashback of HYLILY in late June. And then I plan to rewrite these. Will take time but yes...


And this story I will start posting from 22nd June. From ch 1 on FF forum.

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