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Posted: 6 years ago
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Trying something of this type first time ever.... If it isn't good... My apologies in advance🙏

Title might be changed if came up with something more suitable..

Do share your views... It will help improve..

-Shona.




She felt a tug on her hand which he held in his. She turned to look at him but he was already moving ahead, dragging her with him. She followed him silently. She noticed, he was taking them towards the exit of the Hall, the sand off party was held in. She looked around consciously.. But all seems to be too much busy in their Own selves.

They stopped when they reached a lonely corner, which could provide them their needed privacy.

She kept looking at him, as he checked the surroundings to make sure they we're alone. Once sure of it, he turned to her.

A moment of silence passed with them looking at each other...locking their gaze. And then they broke into giggles, feeling very much like the two mischievous teenagers, that they really are.

Laughing to their hearts content on their success of this adventurous escaping, they fell silent once again.

They smiled lightly ,looking at each other..trying to cover up the strom of emotions rising up within, as the current situation sinks in finally. They both were alone, together!

Being alone with your love, with these teenage emotions and desires.. Is really not easy to handle.

Raised heart beats, uncontrolled emotions and carving souls... Longing for something unknown so desperately... Yet somewhere fearing it too..how much more confusing and complicated things can get??

She gulped the lump in her throat, when he squeezed her hand which was still in his hold. Eyes locked all the while, none wishing to break it off. He kept looking at her with something strong and intense in his eyes as he came closer to her. She clutched his hand more tightly trying to stay still. His breathing quicken, matching hers as he leaned towards her, closing even that small distance between them.

She closed her eyes.. Feeling his breath on her face. His other hand came up on her shoulder, wanting to bring her as much closer as possible.

A few seconds passed, for her in waiting for the much anticipated... For him in gathering himself to take that step finally...

These few moments wait felt the longest one to both...

And then it happened!

She sucked in her breath as she felt that soft touch of his lips on her skin for the first time. He felt her shudder as he very slowly placed his lips on the corner of her mouth , packing her gently.

His own condition was not better either. He had wanted this from so long, had dreamed of it so many times, to be this close to her....

Not having enough of it, he pressed his lips more firmly on her skin. It only worsen the condition of her already trembling self, causing her to grasp on to his shirt tightly around his waist with her free hand, to hold her self in place.

Time stilled for them, Both lost in the moment. Absorbing the feel of this first intimate touch of their love!


(Should I delete it?🙄)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's beautiful

I was expecting more

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on the new story!!!

please do not delete!

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Fabulous update! beautifully written!

there yearning well portrayed! that moment was everything and more for them!

continue soon

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fabulous update dear

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It's lovely

Teenage emotion , first touch so beautifully written 💙💙💙

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beautiful

tender feeling of love

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Its so Innocent so Beautiful


That very first touch …………...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

It's beautiful

I was expecting more

Thank you☺

I can't give more than this.... I don't know how to write it? 😋

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on the new story!!!

please do not delete!

Thank you☺

I won't.. But I am not satisfied with it!

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