What do you really think?

Hello!

I am again here to disturb you all a little. 😉☺

I want your help...

Actually I wanted your opinion about my writing style...

What do you think about it? Is it good enough? Or not?

Did you find difference in stories or they feel similar and repetitive?

And a question to those who has read all my works from starting.. Did you feel any difference or improvement in my style over the time?

Plz do share what your views are... Would appreciate it!

-Shona. 😊

I'm your new reader ... I love the sweetness cuteness in your story , which is rare now 😊😊

But yes sometimes I got confused ( except Aaru series ) which story is part of which ...

I like how your use songs and they suit so well... I love your writing style ..😊😊😊

Keep writing

Hi Shona...

Since I have just started to read your work, so I would not be of much help when it comes to telling you about changes in your writing style...

But I can surely comment on what I feel after reading your re-posted work...

The most beautiful thing about your work is the simplicity of the concept that we all can relate to our day to day lives...also Maaneet are always indulged in a soft romance with a cute background story, that is what is lovely...

I like the songs you chose to depict the emotions too...

I always take your stories as a stand-alone OSes...that works fine with me...

It is lovely to see you seeking feedback from the readers...

God bless and keep up the good work...🤗

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

I'm your new reader ... I love the sweetness cuteness in your story , which is rare now 😊😊

But yes sometimes I got confused ( except Aaru series ) which story is part of which ...

I like how your use songs and they suit so well... I love your writing style ..😊😊😊

Keep writing

Thank you dear for reading and liking my stories. Really appreciate your response and always look forward to it.

Aaru series are actually parts of the story "Her first word"

"Pehle pyaar ka pehla gum" Is my first OS and "pal pal soch me aana na" Is a sequel to it...showing maan's point of view.

Then...

There is "musical maaneet... A musical love saga! "

Which has been updated till four parts...

1. Kisse puchhun?

2. Raste me hai

3. Ye nain ek anjaan se jo mile

4. Rabba main toh marr gaya

These all are posted as individual OS. But it's a one story.

Then there is "chori chori chupke chupke" Season 1

And it's season 2 is "Blank call"

You can ask if there is anymore confusions☺

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Thank you dear for reading and liking my stories. Really appreciate your response and always look forward to it.

Aaru series are actually parts of the story "Her first word"

"Pehle pyaar ka pehla gum" Is my first OS and "pal pal soch me aana na" Is a sequel to it...showing maan's point of view.

Then...

There is "musical maaneet... A musical love saga! "

Which has been updated till four parts...

1. Kisse puchhun?

2. Raste me hai

3. Ye nain ek anjaan se jo mile

4. Rabba main toh marr gaya

These all are posted as individual OS. But it's a one story.

Then there is "chori chori chupke chupke" Season 1

And it's season 2 is "Blank call"

You can ask if there is anymore confusions☺

Hey actually it's not your fault... my memory not so sharp 😆😆😆😆 I keep forgetting .... thnx for giving it

Between I love the musical love saga ... you have a way with songs 😗😗

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Hello!

I am again here to disturb you all a little. 😉☺

I want your help...

Actually I wanted your opinion about my writing style...

What do you think about it? Is it good enough? Or not?

Did you find difference in stories or they feel similar and repetitive?

And a question to those who has read all my works from starting.. Did you feel any difference or improvement in my style over the time?

Plz do share what your views are... Would appreciate it!

-Shona. 😊

I am not a very good reader ...But I do find your writing interesting..Hence am sharing my side of opinion as per whatever I have read from you so far.

Your writing style - It's very adorable and easy to follow. it's not complicated and that's why makes a quick gasp at readers mind. I love it. Especially distracted minds like me. That's why I was able to read your stuff...You are among those very few people whose stories(Romance I don't read) I have read...Also it's full of Maaneet..The romance cuteness I love it...I love school romance, teenage, childhood romance. So reading your os was an ease for me...

I loved your Ye nain os...Along with papa invited me. It was so refreshing and adorable.

Bold - I feel if anyone is able to express themselves then that there is already good enough. Also everyone is different with different sets of expectations. Can't please everyone. Writing on Maaneet is something for Maaneet, their love, nostalgia mostly...Maaneetians are not writer by choice but by passion.

Story concepts & repetition- Whatever I have read from you, I feel you are really good in writing teenage/ jittery/ first love/ Innocent crush/ Fidgeting/ Silently loving/ Emotional/Relationship stories. Since I have read a few only so this is what my limited reading tells me.

As par repetition is concerned every writer is bound to do that even the most professional ones as well. But best thing is if you are writing in one concept and nailing it that makes the difference...

Your last question - Can't answer that as I have only read your stories recently when you came back..

Thank you & hope I was able to express my side. You are amazing as you are..Please do keep writing. 💕

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

I'm your new reader ... I love the sweetness cuteness in your story , which is rare now 😊😊

But yes sometimes I got confused ( except Aaru series ) which story is part of which ...

I like how your use songs and they suit so well... I love your writing style ..😊😊😊

Keep writing

Glad to have you added in my readers list.. ☺

Thank you for ur feed back

Would love to write more...you too keeping reading😉☺

As new reader I like your story which u post on ani thread

Your story is cute plus light romance

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Hi Shona...

Since I have just started to read your work, so I would not be of much help when it comes to telling you about changes in your writing style...

But I can surely comment on what I feel after reading your re-posted work...

The most beautiful thing about your work is the simplicity of the concept that we all can relate to our day to day lives...also Maaneet are always indulged in a soft romance with a cute background story, that is what is lovely...

I like the songs you chose to depict the emotions too...

I always take your stories as a stand-alone OSes...that works fine with me...

It is lovely to see you seeking feedback from the readers...

God bless and keep up the good work...🤗

Thank you sahiba for responding and sharing your view... I really appreciate it dear☺

I am really relived to know that you like the simplicity factor.. Otherwise I used to doubt this particular thing that my work lacking all these masala stuff and high voltage drama.. Glad it still working for readers.

Ya.. I am a quite musical person and I have this habit of connecting to songs very deeply... Listening to songs push me to create story & concept based on them totally. That's why all the filmy titles too 😉😊

It was really needed by me... To get the feedback of you all. It gives a insight or you can say an assurance and motivation to a writer that know what readers think. And with me too.. It would help to motivate me in times when I feel disappointed/ demotivated or when I feel that I should stop writing... These responses would push me to keep going....

God bless you too and all of us too.. ☺

Thank you for replying... Thanks alot😊🤗