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Posted: 6 years ago

Will try soon

Edited by Bluemoon94 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update..

Geet told honestly about herself..

Maan playing with her innocence..

Hope geet get the lovely family..

Continue soon..

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Originally posted by: ramahesh

Nice update..

Geet told honestly about herself..

Maan playing with her innocence..

Hope geet get the lovely family..

Continue soon..

She is honest but not Maan

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Whole part deleted .... trying to find it wait please

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Part 4

Tell me the name of your would be husband .


Geet - Maan

Geet blushed furiously , Neeti kissed her forehead and said mehendi girl to do it properly . Damini was passing them and Geet thought to call her .


Geet - chachi aiye...

Damini - I don't have time for this circus


Damini gave her glare and told straight not caring the people surroundings Geet. Geet stunned for a moment but then gave fake smile to others who looked at her with pity . It's not new , she getting this treatment for long . But deep down she thought as she going now , her chachi may melt down a littel but may be she was wishing much .


Geet - woh chachi must be tired


she gave reason trying to light the atmosphere don't want people to think bad about chachi .

Cousin - still why this rudeness

one of her distant cousin couldn't stop from uttering it loudly .


Another cousin - she lost her daughter recently , it's obivous for her to be like this . Seeing Geet must be remind her of Sakshi


one commented and this time others stop thinking, went busy in their work . Geet too thought same , her chachi must be still mourning of her cousin . She was not so close to Sakshi infact they hardly talked . When she was small most family members stayed away from her including kids and then she went to hostel , so there was not much time for her to make a good relation with them .


But one thing she knows Sakshi was the perfect girl whom her grandparents adored most . She is total opposite to Sakshi , she has no quality like Sakshi had ... cooking , singing , dancing she was perfect. As they are blood related their face was kinda familiar , where Sakshi had beautiful straight hair Geet has curly one . Sakshi has pitch black eyes but she has brown ones . Looking at them anyone can guess they are sisters . But there was no bond between them .


Sakshi got everything which Geet never , family love respect . But Geet never jealous of her , may be she longed for those but couldn't envy her . She can understand Damini' s pain . Damini is Sakshi' s mother , her mother died saving her so she can feel a mother's pain for losing her only child .


Geet was looking at her mehendi , it's deep red .

Neeti - it's a saying ' mehendi ka rang jitna gehra hota hai, pati utna zyada pyaar karta hai

Neeti told her as she busy looking at Maan name . Geet hugged her feeling shy

Geet - sach mein chachi , will I finally get love acceptance respect ?


she came out of Neeti's embrace and looked hopefully

Geet - I won't be neglected or unwanted

a hopeful tears fall and it's broke Neeti's heart . How can anyone hate such child ?

Neeti - no one can hate my daughter . Woh itna sweet hai ki logo ko diabetics ho jaye ga, nafrat nehi

she wiped her tears , making her smile .

Neeti - you are a precious gem , people will be fool to ignore you . You will be queen in your new house


Geet - I don't want to be queen chachi , I only want to be accepted as family member , as their own that's it .


Neeti can understand her fear . Even she hoping Geet will get the love from her in laws which she deserve . She saw Khuranas, all seems nice and she is sure Geet's life gonna change for good .


Neeti - don't worry they will

she kissed her forehead with love her love and went away


Khurana Mansion

Maan was doing some work when his mother came with his coffee ...

Maan - Mom why you here ? Nakul kaha hai . Why you still awake . Waise bhi apki tabiyat....

Prema - uffo beta don't get hyper . Kya hum apne bete ko milne bhi nehi ahsakte

She cut him and went to sit opposite his chair . His hair was messy as he busy with work . Prema lovingly caressed his hair , Maan couldn't help but closed his eyes . He went down and put his head on his lap . It's so long that his mother doing it . After Sakshi gone his mother totally forgotten about anything now seeing her getting back normal he is feeling good .

Prema - Maan bete one thing is bothering me . Tell me honestly you really happy about this marriage na ? You not doing it because of me right ? You Do want to marry ?

Maan can sensed his mother is worried and he can't let it . His mother already in depression he can't say anything which can hurt her again .


Maan - Mom don't be silly . Do you think anyone can force Maan Singh Khurana?


He looked at his mother giving best fake smirk to make her believe . But in truth he is not that ready for marriage . It's not just about Geet, in truth he didn't plan to marry now . He was managing KC' s London branch and wanted to expend it to France till then he didn't want to get married . Infact this year he going to shift Paris for this purpose although his family yet to know . He never got the chance to tell them . With Sakshi' s death many things changed . His mother condition forced him to come back from London. But that doesn't mean he going to postpone his plan of going Paris to open another branch . He will surely go but for now not telling his family . He waiting for right time to settle everything here then he will go .


Prema - Do you like gee... girl ?

Maan noticed the way she avoided taking Geet's name but ignored .

Maan - ya she is cute and very honest like Dadima . I guess she and Dadima gonna bond well . Now you can get another girl to share your problem .


Prema smiled feeling happy . Yes no doubt her house will again going to light up , just like Sakshi used to do .

Perema ST - that girl whom i chosen will make her family happy again like Sakshi did .


She smiled remembering Sakshi's face but she forgetting one shouldn't try to replace people. She wants to replace her with Geet but what about Geet. She is human , not a show piece that can replace easily . In their own pain and selfish reason all thinking about Sakshi forgetting Geet who coming to their house as family member not some replaceable goods .


Handa Mansion


Neeti was about to go to her room when bumped with Damini . She gave her glare as if Neeti did it purposely.

Damini - dekh ke chala karo Neeti. Asman pe nehi zameen pe pair rakho . Yeh tumhari apni beti ki shaadi nehi ho rahi hai ke, tum itni uchal rahi ho .

Damini has set her mind that Neeti is enjoying it because Geet taking her daughter's place . When everybody dislike Geet, why she showering her so much love , its like putting salt in her wounds . Making disgusting face she was about to go but Neeti stopped her .

Neeti - Babhi thakti nehi aap.. ab bas bhi kijiye. She is going tomorrow . Can't we let her go happily . She atleast deserve it , she is also daughter of this family .


Damini - she lives or die why should I care ? She taking my daughter's place and you want ...


Neeti - she not at fault that Sakshi is gone . Even you know that . She didn't tell Khurana's to come with proposal. They willingly did then how it's Geet's fault . Why are you so jealous? Geet is also like your daughter na . They are cousin. Can't you give her small happiness ? Itni berukhi jaarori hai Kya?


Damini - no I can't nor I will . I will always hate her . And don't fly so high Neeti , she only getting married , who said she going to happy there . This marriage is just drama nothing else . All wanted Sakshi but taking Geet as she is gone . They will keep searching Sakshi in Geet but will never get that because my daughter is gem , that Geet is nothing in front of my daughter . And very soon they will realise what mistake they done and then they will kicked out Geet.. dekh lena tum .


Saying all bad words Damini left . Damini said those with so much hate and venom that , its scared Neeti . She knows Damini not liking this marriage but didnt thought she hating it this much . She never thought Damini hiding so much hate behind her cool mask . Suddenly Neeti couldn't help but started getting worried for Geet's future . What if Damini' s word turned right ? what if they actually doing this marriage to replace Sakshi not because they liked Geet's clam nature .


Sakshi - Geet ke Babaji aasa na ho . Please ab toh uss Masoom bachi ko uski khushiya dedo

Sakshi prayed last time for Geet's happiness unknown to her Geet heard last part of their conversation .

' They will keep searching Sakshi in Geet but will never get that because my daughter is gem , that Geet is nothing in front of my daughter . And very soon they will realise what mistake they done and then they will kicked out Geet.. dekh lena tum '

Geet - why they will search Sakshi in me . Im Geet not Sakshi not I want to . Why Cachi said those ?

Edited by Bluemoon94 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Chachunis right they are and will look for Dakshi in Geet or not think about Geet as an individual

With her own feelings. Poor girl. Khurana will not mean to but will hurt her worse especially maan

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update

Poor geet it will be very hard for her when she will come to know the whole truth about her marriage

No one is thinking about her happiness except her chachii maan is also doing same

Poor geet she will be really heartbroken after knowing the truth

Waiting for next

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 4

thanks for updating!

lovely update! nicely written!

feeling for Geet! love the bond between Geet and Neeti!

why does everyone think so highly of Sakshi?

sad that Geet is been used and is unaware of this! She thinks she will happy after marriage!

Maan wants his mom's happiness at the expense of Geet's happiness! while his mom cannot even address Geet by her name!

Maan has his own plans.... but what about Geet?

Hate Damini! she is so spiteful! Geet is hurt hearing her words! Neeti's concern is justified!

what will happen when Geet finds out?

update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

very nice update

maan is also lieing to his mother for her happiness

damini hates to the core which is fearing niti for geet what is her words come true

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Posted: 6 years ago

Fantastic update superb

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