When Akshan Met Kalma OS part 5 (last part ) updated - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshata2010

Aww... Guddan is so sweet with the kid ❤️ I want AkshAn babies 😢

Patience behen patience av usme bahut time hai😀

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ye neri biwi hogi kitna vishwaas hai dono...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wonderful update

Both Malhar and Akshat were so right about their wife's 😂

Kalyani and Guddan fighting in 1 team was awesome 👌

Pillu is lost ☹️ but is atleast with Akshan

Looking forward for next update

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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Hehehe

That was cute..

Mallu-akshu ek he naav pe savar he

Guddu-kallu firebrand

To mokshko guddu ka dupatta which laya...

Chalo dekhte he kaise milte he Sab ek dusre ko

Continue soon...

Waise yeh new if ki wajahse mail notification Ana he band ho Gaye he....

Bahot confusion ho Gaya he hope they work on it ...

BTW plz pm me for next part

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Posted: 6 years ago
#35

Nice story love it

Please update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#36

Part 4

@Akshan

Aj: Dkho Guddan iske maa baap bht preshan ho gye honge… mujhe lagta hai hume yha jo police hai unhe bta dena chahiye..

Gudd: haa to hmne kb kha ki ise hum ghr le jyenge…hum to isiliye ise apke pass lye the ki aap hmari help kr ske iske mmy papa ko contact krne mai..aur aap hai ki hme hi suna rhe hai..

Moksh start giggling..seeing Aj’s face…

Aj: aap ne bhi inki party join kr li…

Gudd: guddan to hai hi esi ..koii bhi dosti kr leta hai..chaliye ab aap ise smbhaliye…m tbtk iske liye kch lkr ate h ..dkhiye iski dudh ki bottle b khali hai..

Aj: mai kese….ye bht chota hai..

Meanwhile Moksh extended his hands for Aj …

Guddan: dekhiye ye to aapse bhi dosti karna chata hai…aap kijiye isse dosti ..hum ate hai

And she leaves for finding milk..

Aj takes moksh in his arms…

Aj: ye jo guddan hai na thodi si pagal hai…but aapko aapke mmy papa se jroor milwa degi….aur m bhi khadus nii hu..to fr hum dost..?

Moksh smiles and hugs Aj..he smiles back hug him too…

From a distance Guddan is adoring this scene..

Gudd: Jindal sahab bacche ke sath kitne khus lag rhehai….and start dreaming about their own child…

@Dream

Aj and guddan playing with their child….guddan running after him..aj comes and take him in his arms and trio are laughing..

@Dream end..

Gud: pta ni ye kbi sach hoga bhi ki nhi…kyu ni samjhte ye ki hum inse kitna pyar karte hai…aur hume pta hai ki aap bhi humse bht pyar karte ho …bs ye baat aap kb samjhoge….Lord Krishna…kch kro naa..

She came near them…

Aj: guddan wo constable hai naa mai use jakr btakr ata hu…

Aj phones start ringing…he speaks on the phone and cut the call..

Aj: yha ana bhi khrab ho gya jo meeting honi thi wo delicates to aye hi nhi pye flight cancle ho gyi unki…

Gudd: lord Krishna ne hume yha bheja hai to kisi kaam ke liye hi bheja hoga ..shayd isse milwane ke liye…

Aj Smiles watching Guddan happily playing with Moksh..

Aj(pov): kash mai tumhe ye khusi de pata …par mujhe nii ptamai tmse kese kahu ki tum meri srif dost nii ho ab….mujhe pyar ho gya hai tumse…tmne wo jagha bna li hai jo kisi ki nhi thi meri life mai..antra ki b nhi…lekin tm agr srif dost bnkr mere sth rhna chati ho yhi sahi…

Aj moves towards constable…but guddan stops him…

Gudd: nahi aap unse kch ni khenge …aap unse baat kijiye..ACP Malhar Rane…hai naa…

Aj looked her in confusion..

Gudd: aree kya pta ye asli hai b ya nhi…hmne movies mai dekha hai…

Aj: guddan…ye movie nhi hai…aur ye asli police hai…

Gudd: jo b ho…aaap sirf ACP se hi baat krenge bs…

Aj sighed but agree to her…

@KALMA

Malhar is asking his constable and wandering here and there….and Malhar received a phone call..

Pawar: sir mujhe moksh baba mil gye hai…

Mal: kha hai moksh…kalyani …pawar ko moksh mil gya hai..

Kal: pillu …kha hai mera pillu…

Mal: ruko mujhe baat krne do… bolo pawar..

Paw: sir ek admi hai aur shyd uski wife b hai…unke pass hai..m unke peeche hi hu…wo constable ko dekh kr uski wife drr rii hai…ye log moksh baba ko sth le ja rhe hai khi..

Mal: tum unke peeche hi rho..aur mujhe btao ki kha ho..

Aj went to constable and ask for Malhar contact number..

Paw: sir wo aapka number mang rha hai…shyd apko blackmail kare…

Mal: krne do use ..tum bs unke peeche rho..

Kal: m chodungi nhi un logo ko mera pillu…kch hua na use to mai…

Malhar side hugged her…kalyani shant ho jyo..mil gya h na moksh..

Pawar told him his location..and start spying on Akshan..

Mal: ese log itni tight security mai kese aa gye..

Kal: abhi call ayega naa tb baat mai krungii..dekhti hu kya krte hai wo…

Mal: kalyani…arm se baat krenge hum moksh unhi logo k pass hai..

Kalyani hugged him…and Malhar consoles her..

Malhar(pov): tum kitna pyar krti ho moksh se kalyani….kya kabhi mujhse b krogi itna hi pyar..ye jo ajeeb sa rishta hai hmara…kb sbkuch thk hoga..kb m tumhe srf moksh ki aai nii apni patni b kh sakunga…kb tum mujhe apna pati manogi…kab mujse b pyar krogi…kyuki…m to kb tmhe apna sb kch maanchuka mujhe bhi pta nhi chla…jb sochta hu ki tmhe btau ki m kitna pyar krta hu tumhe..tbhi kch na kch ho jata hai…

Kal(pov): kha mai soch rhi thi sb thk ho rha hai ..malhar ji bhi badal rhe hai..aur mai to unhe btane wali thi m apne is rishtey ko dubara suru karna chati hu..pyar ke sath…apne pyar k sth jo mai aapse krti hu..mere liye aap moksh k baba hi nhi mere pati bhi bn chuke hai..meri life…bt fr se ye sb..bs aaj pillu mil jye…fr mai sb thk kr dungi..

Mal: kalyani ab rona bnd kro..chlo tmhare pillu ko lekr aye…

Kal: tumhare nahi…humare ..

Malhar smiles and kissed on her forehead…she smiles back..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Awesome

Loved it

Akshan ka baby how cute

Plz update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#38

Beautiful update 😍

Next update soon please

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Posted: 6 years ago
#39

Cute one

Both akshan are in love with each other nad want their own baby its so cute

Plz update the next part asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

Cute update

Akshan conversation and pov was beautiful

Kalma are missing their son and hope misunderstanding is removed soon

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