Ankahee Ansuni Bateein Mere Dil Ki (Part 71 Page 146) 25/07/2021 - Page 69

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Posted: 6 years ago

Sorry for the late reply sis, when I saw your pm, I'm unable to open that and i can't login in IF due to the new version thing.

It was a lovely update. This misunderstanding also now turned cupid for our Mehrya. Thanks to Sonal she is the one cleared that misunderstanding.

Mehak wants to surprise him😉, and he plays like revenge is sweet honey 😂😆.

At the end, sure that Sk didn't given those paper to her then who? Like Shinu said in her fb the one who will beaten by our Sk right?😋

Still fresh that memory which Sk slapped a business man😂 more than 5.

Thanks for the update 🤗😚

Take care sis❤️

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Originally posted by: kamali870

Sorry for the late reply sis, when I saw your pm, I'm unable to open that and i can't login in IF due to the new version thing.

It was a lovely update. This misunderstanding also now turned cupid for our Mehrya. Thanks to Sonal she is the one cleared that misunderstanding.

Mehak wants to surprise him😉, and he plays like revenge is sweet honey 😂😆.

At the end, sure that Sk didn't given those paper to her then who? Like Shinu said in her fb the one who will beaten by our Sk right?😋

Still fresh that memory which Sk slapped a business man😂 more than 5.

Thanks for the update 🤗😚

Take care sis❤️

Thank you Kamali for the feedback glad you like the update and you will know soon who send the note. thank you and stay blessed always
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Posted: 6 years ago

Omg....😢😢😥😫😪😭😱😧

You don't know how desperately I was waiting to read the next chapter..

Guess I was the first person to read the same when it was posted in wattpad..

Will give my detailed fb after you post it here..

But at present...am so restless and can't control my tears.. seriously.. don't know how am gonna handle the cumulus of emotions persisting in my heart...😭😩😥😭😪

You are so talented.. Haseena di.. kudos for this brilliant writing🤗👏👌😚

Still am in tears...😢

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Haseena try to update now... If u have time... I read the thread postd for bugs n issues and there they have written they have fixed ffs related bugs

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Part 33 (A) 29/04/2019

Mehak took the lift to level 15 and looked at the right and left to see where is the penthouse located, after she saw the signage which points to the penthouse she takes her step towards there. Her heart fluttered as she walks and she practiced a few times how to convey her apology and how to open up about their relationship. She entered the penthouse by pushing the wooden door slowly to peep in to check anyone inside. She slowly came inside and the door closed slowly, she looked around and the place was only using dim lights. She mumbled to herself and why is the place in dim light and self-talking this Shaurya can’t do anything directly all have twisty ways. Now, where is he asked me to come here and he is missing.

She looked around impatiently for him to appear but a silhouette pass behind her, she realizes someone behind her and turn to see and there was nothing behind her. She walks slowly and calls Shaurya, are you here? Look you don’t play with me like this okay I don’t like this game of yours, better come out or else once you come out you will get it nicely from me, quick. As she finishes her sentence she saw another silhouette passing her. She palpitated as no reply came and saw another door she walked to the door. She went in and saw there is no one again but just the curtains flying as the wind blows. She asked loudly is enough of this hide and seek Shaurya, you better come out now, I came here to tell you something important, I thought you will be happy to listen from me, seems like you want to play this stupid game. This is not funny Shaurya, if you are not coming I am going back. No reply came and she turned to leave when she bumped into something hard and jumped to her feet, screaming in terror. The room was dark and she realized something amiss. The something she bumps onto earlier was a man and he is not Shaurya. She took a few steps back and asked who are you? She only heard a burst of mocking laughter as the figure in front her took a step forward revealing himself, she quivered when she saw a man in a scary mask which used in Halloween parties and her knees freeze seeing the face as she began to scream blue murder. The man in mask quickly came forward suffocating her to prevent her from screaming. She bit his hand and run towards the door screaming for help, as she runs outside her saree’s pallu stuck at the door frame she pulled it abruptly till the lace material was torn and she didn’t bother about it. She can’t remember the way out or in as all look the same tears of panic flowing down as she screams louder for help. As she wants to exit from a door the man in a mask came in front of her grinning like a maniac which caused her shivered and she tried putting up a brave face, she demanded him who are you? Why are you here, if Shaurya sees you here he won’t spare you, trust me is better you leave this place now. The man laughed like a maniac, no one will come here this entire floor is only you and I are here. Hearing him, shiver crawls up in her spine as Mehak took a few steps back till she felt she hit on a stool she turned and saw a flower vase there, grabbing it discreetly when the man approaches her she use that to hit him. As he ouch in pain she runs away from there screaming for help, she saw the door and grab the handle to turn it but it was locked and she pounds on the wooden door with all her energy so anyone outside could hear her. She wonders where is her mobile as she came in with it but when running away from the man, she dropped it somewhere and she wants to look for her mobile to call Shaurya. She saw her mobile under one of the tables and bend down to pick it quickly as she was panic-stricken she can’t unlock it in the first attempt and try to do it again when a hand came to grab her hair from back she dropped her mobile as it was too painful to bear and she started to scream asking him to let go off her, the man stepped on the mobile till it cracked to pieces. Mehak’s scream echoed in the room as the man turn her to face him and slapped her hard which made her feel dizzy as the force of the slap caused her to lose balance. She fell on the floor by the impact landed on her face. She is slowly losing it out but she can’t give up till she fights this off. She kicked the man at his knee and he dropped on the floor and she slowly moves away from him but her movement stopped when he took a heavy object from the nearby table and hit it hard on her ankle which made her yelp in pain and she can’t move at all. She screamed in agony as the pain seared through her, it’s impossible for her to get up on her foot and escape from there. She screamed calling Shaurya’s name before she let out another scream the man pounce on her, she was lying on the floor as he was on her letting out evil laughter. She tried with all the might to hit him hard with her hands but he gripped them and took the phone cable which was nearby and tie her up and restricting her movements. He looked at her as if she is his delicious meal and Mehak spit at him and asked him to let go if he loves himself because when Shaurya comes he won’t spare him as his own family can’t identify your dead body. Do you think I care about your silly threats, you are at my mercy beautiful, he boasted as he caressed her cheeks as she wriggled in disgust as his hand trail down to her neck then towards her chest. She squirmed and tried to free herself from his hold as she knows only a miracle can help her, she is badly injured she prayed deep in her heart so Shaurya can find her and she doesn’t want to go through this and she can’t even think what is going to happen to her now. She was dragged kicking and screaming to a nearby room when Mehak bites the man’s hand he became furious as another slap landed on her face and he began to strangle her ferociously. She gasped as she feels there is no air to breathe and she feels like her head is going to explode any seconds with the pressure placed under her neck. Black spot formed as Mehak losing her conscious, she heard, good I like my girl to be quiet while I enjoy them, a tear rolled out from her eyes as deep in her heart she apologies to Shaurya and her family for any of her untoward behavior as her vision became black.

On the other end, Shaurya looks around the room to see Mehak and she was not there. He looked outside the party room and many are returning off and he thought maybe she was upset as he didn’t listen to her when she tried to talk to him earlier. He smiled inwardly as he goes to the hotel lobby to get into his car and head back to the hotel. He bid goodnight to the driver and walks to his room and he inserted his room keycard and entered the room. The room was dark and he turns on one light at the hall area as he walked to the bedroom, he took off his bowtie and place it on the nearby study table and saw the bed was empty. He went to check inside the bathroom and it was empty. He called her name a few times before heading to the balcony as scratched his chin wondering where she went. He took out his mobile and dialed her number it went to the mailbox and he tried calling her again and it said the same. He got up frustrated throwing the mobile on the bed as he rested his hands on his waist thinking where is she? He took the mobile again and dialed Vicky's number. Vicky answered within a few rings. He asked Vicky is Mehak is with them, as she left the party early. Vicky on the other side gets up from his seat and asked what you mean she left bhaiya, she came there to the party because she wants to talk to and discuss something important. She is not with us, yes she told us she wants to follow us back to Delhi but she changed her mind. Shaurya's color faded from his face hearing Vicky. He felt unusually heavy at his chest as he undoes the collar button at his shirt. He takes a deep breath as he heard his brother ranting. Vicky where are you now? We are the hotel bhaiya we change our plan to go back tomorrow as we want to know what happen with you two. As they two were still online and confused where is Mehak then Vicky said bhaiya is bhabhi angry with you and left again. Shaurya raised his voice to stop Vicky from completing his sentence. He calm himself and said no she doesn't leave me like this, she must be hiding and playing with us. Just then Shaurya's room doorbell ring. He told Vicky who is still online, I think she is back you heard the doorbell, let her come in then she will get it nicely from me, Conveniently taking her time to roam somewhere making me hell worried about her, he didn't finish his sentence when he opens the door and stopped when he saw not Mehak at the door.

Part B at next post

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Part 33 (B) 29/04/2019

There were two men standing outside his room, one dressed in a constable uniform and another wore khaki pants with a black collared t-shirt. Shaurya casually said hi to them and the guy with a black t-shirt greeted him back. Officer Jalalluddin and this is Constable Raj Kumar. Shaurya introduced himself I am Shaurya Khanna.

OJ: Mr. Khanna, could you follow us, please?

SK: Can I know what is it about?

OJ: I can't discuss anything here Mr. Khanna, it's for your own interest. Please follow me.

Shaurya can understand the seriousness in his tone and nod, Vicky who was still on the line said bhaiya,is bhabhi back, Shaurya place the mobile on his ear and said Vicky, I will call you back he quickly slid his mobile into his pants and close the room door follow them. Throughout in his journey in the police car Shaurya's mind ruffled with questions, why is he being called like this, where is Mehak, is she in some sort of trouble? His trance broke when the car stopped at the hospital.Officer Jalalluddin opens the door for him and he gets down from the car. His worry increases as they in the hospital, the officer walks in as Shaurya follows him at the back like a shadow. Shaurya's throat gets dry as the officer passes some corridors, he uttered officer, that's when Officer Jalal stopped and turn to look at Shaurya.

SK: Why are we here? If you have some inquiries etc. bring me to the police station but why we are here in the hospital?

OJ; Mr. Khanna please follow me, my team is waiting there we will explain to you.

SK: Officer, I need to go and look for my wife,

OJ: We are going to meet your wife Mr. Khanna, please follow me.

Shaurya's POV

When the officer said, we are going to meet my wife, I felt some unexplained kind of emotions in me. I never felt like this before in my life. I hope Mehak is fine, she must be fine she has to be fine. During the party, she came in to surprise me and wants to talk to me but I want to test her patience and avoided listening to her. I saw her while I was busy discussing with Mr. Jatin and his guests about some random topics, she was still there fidgeting her saree pallu hem anxiously, I love the anxious look in her face, that's the same expression she had while in ISC. Whenever we give her tough situation like unusual ingredients or some new challenge she will pout anxiously as she mutters something in her. Usually, if there is no one she will stomp her feet in annoyance. Though I have told my self I will not bother her but old habits die hard, I love to do those things to her. But why is she in the hospital, why she didn't call me if she got injured.

They reached in front of closed ward area and many police officers were visible there. Shaurya looks at them all and wonders why many police officers are here, that's when a doctor came off with a surgical mask from her face, she removes it and Officer Jalal introduced, Dr. Kaur this is Mr. Khanna, patient's husband. She replied thank God you manage to get him on time, please get his signature in order to start the procedures and we need to get the treatment started. Before that let him do the patient' sverification. That's, when Shaurya's breath hitched something, is not right and they guided him to a closed ICU unit pointing at the glass door.

OJ: Mr. Khanna, please verify is that your wife?

Shaurya told himself it is not Mehak, it cannot be his Mehak there, whatever happens, it should not be her,and this must be some mistake he prayed deep in him as his feet freezes at the spot. Officer Jalal placed his arm around his shoulder and bring him forward to the glass door, Shaurya took a few steps slowly and peeped at the glass door.His breathing stopped seeing Mehak was there. He rested his hands on the glass door as he was jolted seeing her lying down on the hospital bed with an oxygen mask covered on her face, some cables running everywhere around her with many machines placed around her monitoring and a cervical collar placed on her neck.Her face had some bruises too, His heart sank and he uttered Mehak and tried to push the door to go in to be beside her but the door was locked.

SK : Doctor, let me in I need to see my wife.

Doc: I am sorry sir, please sign the authorization form first so my medical team will start with the treatment first, it's crucial for you to sign the form and we can save your wife.

OJ: Mr. Khanna, please sign the form in order for them to start the treatment. At the moment only first level treatment has been given, they can only start the necessary treatment after the next of kin's authorization. Every minute you delay, chances for her are getting slim.

SK: No, give me the form, let me sign it now. I will not let anything happens to my wife.

Doctor Kaur's assistant gives him the form as Shaurya didn't read any of them as he signed every single column required and pass it back to the assistant. He looked at the doctor and Officer Jalal can you explain what happen to my wife. The doctor nodded as she guided him into her room.

He sat in front of the doctor,as the doctor takes out her folder with some photos, she put them in front of Shaurya, it was some wounds in close-up shots. Mr. Khanna when your wife was brought in here, she was badly injured. Your wife was attempted to rape.

Part C continues

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P/s: Dear readers, I know whatis coming from you all after this chapter been uploaded. Your comments andfeedbacks are very much appreciated. I input this scenario in this update as anindication that, apology and opportunity will only give once and at the righttime as the time won’t come back. Many are blessed to have normal life with upsand downs but some has gone through some misshape and they have a dark story. Restassure that there will be some hope in another 4-5 chapters maybe that dependsif I don’t want to become twisty head again. Don’t hate me okay, send me allyour love, I can smell ammunition, rotten tomatoes with eggs are coming my way.Also that I am not a medical expert and I do not know how does treatmentrelated to rape survivor happens, I did read a lot prior to update this chapterand if anything you find it weird or unacceptable please forgive me. If thereis any Medical experts here feel free to correct me. I love to learn from mymistakes. To my silence reader, to type these 6 pages 4255 words it takes a lotof effort and I need to sacrifice some of my me time because writing issomething I love to do and reading your feedbacks are very important to me,please click on the Like/Vote icon to show your support. Thank you have ablessed day ahead.

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Thanks for the twisty chapter Haseena.... U have penned down it so beautifully....bht that was really a shocker..... I was anticipating an romantic moment but it turned out to be so disastrous for Mehek... All things played against Mehrya in this.... Shaurya casual teasimg leading to such a big trauma...really dont know how mehek will cope up with this... Definitely it will be so hard for Mehek to forgot all this and start afresh with shaurya...😨😨

But it will be hard too for shaurya as well to make mehek out of this traumatic thing... As he himself is in guilt that he couldn't protect Mehek from.this happening.

I really hope she will be fine soon physically ...mentally it will take long time to overcome and i want that Mehek.should allow Shaurya to help her out. As this is kept secret with other family members ...hope she will be again cheerful.as before.and that man should be hanged behind bars for commiting such a sin.

But your way of writing such a emotional turmoil is so brilliant...i really appreciate this... U have to be strong enough for writing such scenes... Kudos to u... 😘😘😘

Please make the situation bit normal.for Meherya so that they can overcome from all this.. Want to see bubbly Mehrya again soon☺

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Thank you so much for the update

My heart has just broken to see Mehek like this... i am feeling like crying loud... one after one disaster is going on her life... how will she cope with this trauma.. 😭 😭

I am also feeling angry with Shaurya( though thats not his fault ) but i am irked😠... atleast he should call her before leaving the party.. fate is playing with them.. 😟

I just want to rip out that maniac's head and cut into pieces..🤬 🤬 who is that *** who tried to molest mehek.. i want him to get the cruelest punishment

How will they keep the news from the family... mehek will be totally torn.. Shaurya will live in guilt... don't know how will their life again be normal 😣

Sorry i am being too much violent...

its really an emotional chapter...and you have written it really well...👏👏 ..

Please continue soon

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Originally posted by: friendlyghost08

Thank you so much for the update

My heart has just broken to see Mehek like this... i am feeling like crying loud... one after one disaster is going on her life... how will she cope with this trauma.. 😭 😭

I am also feeling angry with Shaurya( though thats not his fault ) but i am irked😠... atleast he should call her before leaving the party.. fate is playing with them.. 😟

I just want to rip out that maniac's head and cut into pieces..🤬 🤬 who is that *** who tried to molest mehek.. i want him to get the cruelest punishment

How will they keep the news from the family... mehek will be totally torn.. Shaurya will live in guilt... don't know how will their life again be normal 😣

Sorry i am being too much violent...

its really an emotional chapter...and you have written it really well...👏👏 ..

Please continue soon

Lima dear thanks for the idea to post in parts. but what annoyed me is that there is another 500 plus words part cant update... i am super annoyed as admin not replying in the thread.

I wrote this chapter quite sometime ago and waited till the right time to post it. yes i agree its heart breaking chapter. but this twist needed here. i am happy to read your comment and don't be sorry bcs u were able to feel the pain of the character and i am happy that my work did create the agony in you through my work. have a great day ahead.

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