When Akshan Met Kalma OS part 5 ( last part)Updated - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice one..but need more kalma scene..hope u will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting ...update soon🥳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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PART 2

@Mumbai

@Kalma

Kal: malhar ji aaj yha itna traffic aur itni bheed kyu hai..kha le ja rhea hai aap hme..

Mal: yha pr international level ka cooking competition hai…isliye itni bheed hai..aur hum already itney late ho gye hai ki muje tmhe direct yhi lana pda ..yha duty hai meri..

Kalyani looks around and admire the venue…the whole area is decorated as different parts of country..representing their state food..with their regional decorations and attires..flowers balloons and delicious smell of foods…she forgets the fear of Mumbai…and get excited and hugged malhar…

Kal: OMG! Malhar ji..kitni acchi jagha hai ye…accha hua hum late ho gye nii to aap akele hi yha a jte aur mai ye sab miss kr deti..

Mal: to tumhe ye sab accha lga…smiling(which I really want to see in serial)…tm aram se ghoomo..enjoy kro aur moksh ka dhyan rakho.. mai abi report karke ata hu..and he left while kissing her forehead in hurry..

Kalyani stands their in shock and touched her forehead..and smiles..

@Akashan

Gudd: jindal sahab…rukiye naa..kitna tej chalet hai aap…ab hum apke sath aa gye hai to uski punishment denge aap hume..

Aj : m arm se hi chal rha hu aur kisne bola tha itni heels phnkr ayo…muje jaldi se jaldi venue tak pahuchna hai…competition ke turnt baad meeting hai..

Guddan (while making face) : bas meeting..kaam…aur hum..jo aapke sath aye hai…kya luggage mai aye hai..nahi lana tha to mna kr dete naa…humhi pagal hai jo aapke sath aa gye..

Aj(sighing): look guddan..abi time bht kam hai..aur meetingbht important..

Gud: humse nhi chla jar ha hai…aur wha tak cab bhi nii ja rii hai ab hume ese hi chalkar jana hai to thoda to hume sath lekar chaliye…

Aj look around and picks her in his arms…guddan protest..

Gudd: ye kya kr rhe hai…neeche utariye hume..hum heels utarkr chalet hai..

Aj: ab chup chap rehna venue tak…and starts walking..

Whole way guddan watch his face while smiling .. and Aj tries not to meet her eyes…As they reach the venue he puts her down and take her inside…

Guddan admires the place and start jumping in excitement…

Gud: accha hua hum zid karke aa gye nii to hum esi jagha miss kar dete..itne sare log itna sara tasty food ..and start walking around..

Aj: go take an walk around..but remain in contact…don’t get lost and …

Gudd: ha ha ..hum sab jante hai….and she walked away ..

Aj: and don’t get into a problem..Aj nodded his head sideways and went to meet his partners..

Precape : guddan meets kalyani and AJ meets malhar ..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

how can i update my topic name..???

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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Short tha ...but nice..expect more kalma

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome .....🎊🎊🎊🎉 update soon 🐰

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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Hi ..

Interesting...

Wah ab maza ayega guddu-kallu and akshu-mallu ko sath dekh k ...

Hope is gadbad me pillu ko kuch na ho...

Plz continue soon dear

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

Maza aa gaya....


Next. Time thoda bada update Karna pls

..😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Waiting for ur update please update soon 😢😢😢😢

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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Teaser for part :3

Malhar and Aj were talking meanwhile...they here soe noises..People were gathering on one place...Aj asked one man what is happining there..itni bheed kyu hai wha..Man :aree koii ladki hai jo kisi se jhagdaa kr rii hai...kch sun b nii rii hai kisi ki...Malhar& Aj (simultaneously)Aj: wo meri patni Guddan hogi..Mal: wo meri patni kalyani hogi..And looks at eachother..with tensed look..

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