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Posted: 6 years ago
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Page 5 Devil's Deal

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Posted: 6 years ago
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You are only mine

Geet... How could you do it.. his angry voice suddenly got mellowed down as he looked at his wife. She was looking at him with sceptical eyes, her red saree and that elaborate nose ring was indicating that she was angry. She was just eighteen and that marriage that he did just to save herself from the clutches of that prince Dev Rathod and seeing her standing with no guilt for what she did he had no words..

how could you geet... How could you take the advantage of The situation.. how could you.. Maan felt like his heart was crushed.

Kya galat Kiya humne.. jo hamara tha wo hamne leliya.. she came towards him and held his corner making his step back a little..

Aap hamare hain samjhe aap aur hum bardasht nai karsakte kisi aur ladki ko aapke paas samjhe aap.. aur Jo hua wo galat nahi tha.. it was sacred relation of husband and wife samjhe aap.. aur aap bhi ye samaj lijiye.. this is not any platonic relationship. You are my husband aur hame pura haq hai aapki har cheez par aur aap usi mein aate Hain.. hame mazboor mat kijiye hum aise kadam uthaye jo aap bardasht na karpaye.. ye hamara vaada hai aapse.. I am your wife aur ye baat aap jitni jaldi samaj jayen utna acha hai..

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I was watching promos of geet and thought of something

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Haiyyy keep them coming
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Haiyyy keep them coming

It is the magic of maaneet😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice thought of role reversal, d plot of strong geet is wat i love
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

It is the magic of maaneet 😛

That's true 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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very interesting
waiting for more
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Kudos, Suhaaana...
Loved the OS...

Geet in her sherni avtaar and Maan bechara bheegi billi in front of his sherni...
She is damn right...The marriage gives her right over Maan and his everything...hehehe

Nice and something different to read after long...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashi14

Nice thought of role reversal, d plot of strong geet is wat i love


oh yes this is something like role reversal 😉

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