Shayar Sameer : What if Naina would have left the marital home

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi all,
I just read through the LU where people have vented so much about Naina actually packing off for her maika after an argument with Sameer and her cold response to Sameer's pleas to not leave their house and to not abandon him again like Nanu and his mother.

Well !!! What if Naina would have actually ended up crossing the dahleez of her marital home in a fit of rage and left without looking back and Sameer being too shocked at the turn of events to even retaliate or stop her

Well while reading through the pages of this forum for the celebration thread I got to know that Sameer dabbles in shayaris...Here is my take on Sameer's feelings if Naina would have actually left their home

Andheron ko ghar kehte the aur
Mehfilon se darte the ,
Kyunki dost thi tanhayi...
Naa jaane phir tum roshni lekar kaise aayi ,
Jisne hamari zindagi se dosti karwayi...
Khushiyon ke baharon mein phir hum yun kho gaye ,
Ki hamare bhi chehre par muskurahat chayi.
Par Jaane kiski nazar lagi...

Jaane kiski nazar lagi...
Woh humse nazarein churake chal diye,
Auur dubara hamari dost hui tanhayi.
Andheron mein phirse kahin kho se gaye,
Kyunki chod gayi thi woh...
Joh kabhi roshni ban kar thi zindagi mein aayi...

I know its not Sameer ke level ka,but just my take on this state of mind if Naina would have abandoned him...
Love,
Ria.

Edited by RangnRia - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is so beautiful Ria❤️
Thank you for penning it down🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi.I loved your shayari.You wrote sameer's feelings very well. Keep writing more shayaris.❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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This was really very beautiful Ria Di
the pent up emotions and Sameer's feelings came out so good in this shayri
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow di Please keep writing such poems. Loved it! It was super se bhi oopar😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's soo beautiful
Loved it
Specially the last line ..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Hash,Deepa,sonushrivastava,Suhani,Ray and Albelipari.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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This was really beautiful
loved it
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

This was really beautiful

loved it


Thanks Sadhika.I actually thought Naina has either amnesia or has turned mental after gaining freedom so as to actually walk out on Sameer.
My heart went out to Sameer who was actually pleading her not to abandon him...Thats when these lines struck me...I am glad you and others liked it...

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