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Rph09

@Rph09

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Congratulations bro 🥳

Finally another writer in the forum! And this is just the beginning. I loved their romance Naina is the only one who can handle Sameer. Sameer's childhood memory was very emotional. Kahan chupe the! Pehle hi story writing suru kar dena chahiye tha.

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@Tellurium

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

EXCELLENT one

Please keep writing 😳

Edited by TehreemShaikh - 6 years ago

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shwta16

@shwta16

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Oh God, Abhi! What was it? And you still say that let me know if you like it. There is no "if" and "but" bro, because I know for sure that you are a fabulous writer.😊 and yes, I mean it. Your poems, your story - everything you have written has a different style and an emotional connect.

I loved this story. It is too emotional, too deep and awesome. When I started reading it, I thought it's a dream but with the progress in your story, I got everything right. The way you have described Sameer's flashback of his childhood and then his company is amazing. And the way they opened up to each other, I just loved it. 😊

Now, I really wan more stories from you. 😊 You write very well. You know how to play with words and how to build an emotional connection with your audience. Please keep writing and showering us with more such lovely stories.

Lots of love,

Shweta 😊

Edited by shwta16 - 6 years ago