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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice plot... Bookmarking
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Posted: 6 years ago
Read all the parts in one go.
Thank you for coming back and writing another story.
The description of coastal Karnataka was such a pleasure to read. Looks like you have immense knowledge about these places.

Coming to the plot, I do not think that Arnav and Payal were in a romantic relationship. Even in the prologue, it felt like Arnav was only looking out for her.

Does Arnav feel responsible in any way to what happened to Payal? Does he feel guilty that he could not save her? Is that why he wants to look out for Khushi more than needed? Maybe he does not want the same kind of situation to be repeated again.

And did he not recognise Khushi?

Poor Khushi, indeed she had a tough life. Even after having both parents, she must have always felt very lonely. I feel Payal felt that way too.

Very interesting plot.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Read chapters 2, 3 and 4. Finally caught up with the story.
I like how you have paced the story. So many developments in these 3 chapters.
So, Khushi is now living in the same house as Arnav and is heavily attracted to him.
Arnav doesn't remember Khushi but is drawn to her like he was in their first meeting.
Romance is building up and Khushi has decided to judge Arnav who he is now. While that is the logical thing to do, I am sure the past will soon catch up with them and rock their lives.
Payal's death is still shrouded in mystery.

Personally, I still believe that Arnav wasn't romantically involved with Payal. Maybe Payal liked him and he didn't like her?

Guess, only time will reveal all that.

For now, I am loving how Arnav and Khushi are coming close to each other. Hoping to read more of them together.

Thanks for all the updates.



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Posted: 6 years ago
I am loving this story.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Just managed to read Ch 2-5..
😛

N almost all amazing comments ..

Gauri,P,Sandy,Raji ..n another name .. Asha..

U guys have made my day..

Kavi..
I always knew U r an amazing writer..
I've read all ur FFs..
Wanna read them once again..

BTW..
I couldn't get access to the blog..
😕
Edited by pakpearl - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago
Attraction is brewing up so is the emotional connection 😊 ... killer combo 👏
In the cloud of misunderstanding small ray of trust is illuminating and bringing them close... i now feel Payal's heartbreak has nothing to do with arnav. Her friends group seems shady...
Edited by Arilip - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
Arnav, needs to know what is making Khushi dizzy.😉
Is Vibha the girl whose father brought Khushi to Udupi for the first time?

If Arnav is not careful, the brat Srijit is going do something to save his favorite madam from the clutches of the supposed stalker Arnav. Or is Sirjit having feelings for his mam and feeling jealous of Arnav?

Arnav and Khushi are opening up to each other slow and steady. Wish they trust each other and when the past comes in front of them, they don't blow up on the other.

It looks like they are going to make a difference in the lives of the other even before they express their feelings for the other.
I loved the way Khushi is handling and the way Arnav is responding.
Wonderful update.
Cheers...
Edited by Savera84 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks for the message, Raji!! 🤗
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Okay! Before I begin my rambling, let's have some visuals

Arnav in blue shirt (didn't find one with khaki pants)



And this is what I was expecting while they were on the ladder...



But I am more than happy with...



Will be back with more comments.
Edited by cheers2all - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Arnav and Khushi both come from a broken family and this will help them to understand each others pain and it will be easy to sooth it. The same thing has happened , Khushi for the first time has shared her pain with Arnav and he was able to sooth her pain and provide her some comfort . .
Arnav was very intelligent in avoiding the question about the heartbreak, in the heat of the moment he has opened a little bit about what is going on in his mind and heart

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