I disappeared for a while and you completed your story? 😲
Anyways I'm back to read this
Chapter 16
Beautiful update as always 👏, especially the comfortable bond shared by AdiYa
Arjun is very observant. Just looking at Aditya and judging his actions, he understood that Aditya has some feelings for Zoya.
I mean...it is suspicious that Adi would meet a stranger in a different country and out of courtesy decide to drop her to Mumbai.
But I'm glad that at least Adi has the sense to not deny those claims. He likes her and he knows it.
Does Harsh really need to be so blunt with his son all the time? I understand that they have personal problems but it seems like none of them are willing to sort it out (not that Adi should because Harsh is wrong here) 😡
Oops...the matters got heated and Aditya walked out without eating
No worries, Zoya to the rescue. This woman surprises me not just with her maturity and sensibility but her mental strength
Their small dinner date, in the room full of comfort, was heartwarming. 😳
My mind is a bit hazy on this but I think Adi is sharing his past with Zoya for the first time.
Oh...finally he opened up to her and made her realize that there are many out there who have had to face and suffer under cheating partners.
But it breaks my heart that both AdiYa had undergone such pain with no fault of their. 😭
Zoya dear...I love you but I think you should go for payback. Yash deserves it all.
It's high time that Adi opens his own chips company 😆
My favourite part was how you kept the reality factor in this by showing that Aditya falls for Zoya first like the show.
I'll keep all my praises for your writing to the end.
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