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Sudha

@Sudharies

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 6 years ago

#581

That's a beautiful closure to your wonderful FF, Priya..👏

I've loved reading each and every chapter. Enjoyed AdiYa's journey, especially your writing makes it even more interesting to read. Keep up the good work . I'm surely gonna miss reading this FF.. hope we come across on a forum with a similar ship once again, so that I could read your story somewhere once again

Keep writing, thanks for this amazing story on Adiya, and yeah thanks for all the PM's so far.

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Lilly321

@Lilly321

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#582

This was amazing ! Please keep writing more stories on Adiya

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#583

Awesome...Their journey was so Beautiful...how they started and how they progressed and the proposal was beautiful

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glorious

@glorious

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#584

Thank you for the amazing storyline you have sketched.

Writers like you have kept this forum alive. Couldn't have been a better day than today for this story to complete . One year of Bepannaah.

Thank you for making this journey of following Bepannaah a delightful one with this FF.

Continue to write please . .

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Peaceful_Haven

@Peaceful_Haven

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#585

Sweetness overloaded! What an ending! Loved both the installments. You truly gave a picture perfect ending to Adiya. Beautiful. ❤️

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#586

I disappeared for a while and you completed your story? 😲

Anyways I'm back to read this

Chapter 16

Beautiful update as always 👏, especially the comfortable bond shared by AdiYa

Arjun is very observant. Just looking at Aditya and judging his actions, he understood that Aditya has some feelings for Zoya.

I mean...it is suspicious that Adi would meet a stranger in a different country and out of courtesy decide to drop her to Mumbai.

But I'm glad that at least Adi has the sense to not deny those claims. He likes her and he knows it.

Does Harsh really need to be so blunt with his son all the time? I understand that they have personal problems but it seems like none of them are willing to sort it out (not that Adi should because Harsh is wrong here) 😡

Oops...the matters got heated and Aditya walked out without eating

No worries, Zoya to the rescue. This woman surprises me not just with her maturity and sensibility but her mental strength

Their small dinner date, in the room full of comfort, was heartwarming. 😳

My mind is a bit hazy on this but I think Adi is sharing his past with Zoya for the first time.

Oh...finally he opened up to her and made her realize that there are many out there who have had to face and suffer under cheating partners.

But it breaks my heart that both AdiYa had undergone such pain with no fault of their. 😭

Zoya dear...I love you but I think you should go for payback. Yash deserves it all.

It's high time that Adi opens his own chips company 😆

My favourite part was how you kept the reality factor in this by showing that Aditya falls for Zoya first like the show.

I'll keep all my praises for your writing to the end.

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#587

Chapter 17

Wow...such a brilliant update 👏

Ohh Zoya finally makes the call home. She reveals about her break up but not the reason behind it.

Lying to her parents at this point is not a good idea in my opinion. But I'll just wait to see how it all plays out

Zoya is finally realizing what Adi would have felt when Pooja cheated him and he had nobody to turn to.

"But she had Aditya to help. He, on the other hand, was alone." This line broke my heart 😭

Aditya's relationship with his mother is sweet. They share more of a friendship.

And Zoya has been officially invited by Anjana for a charity ball. So many cupids for just one couple

Aww...Zoya has developed a bad habit of eavesdropping on Hoodas' conversations. Chalo achha hua. Ab shayad she will get to know the truth.

Am I seeing signs of mutual attraction between AdiYa? Oh yes I am. 😳

Anjana is making it so obvious that she's trying to hook her son up with Zoya 😆 But I guess that's needed to push the two to realize their feelings for each other.

And the dance...I'm speechless with the way you've beautifully described AdiYa's thoughts and emotions from the beginning to the end. A flawless job done flawlessly ❤️

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#588

Chapter 18

Another beautiful update 👏

Zoya's parents come to Mumbai...this is going to be interesting.

The Hoodas and Siddiquis got along like a house on fire. Possible scenario of no objections regarding AdiYa in the future?

I was eager to see the dynamics in Hooda mansion change with Siddiquis arrival but you gave me a shock by sending Zoya back to Mussoorie 😭

Even with their last words, Aditya couldn't confess his feelings

Zoya's mental conflicts were beautifully penned ❤️ She is not exactly sure but maybe she is falling for (or have already fallen) Aditya.

Well if not face-to-face, they are talking through text messages.

Zoya and Aditya are so cute...the way Adi teased her in the same manner as her 'half-written' text 😳

OMG you have written the feelings and thoughts of the characters in such a beautiful detail. I already know how amazing of a writer you are yet this again proved why that is true ⭐️

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#589

Hey.
So I just spent the past 2 hours grinning, cheering and rooting while reading the chapters.
I haven't been on IF for so long and it feels so good to be back and read something this refreshing which left this warm and familiar fuzzy feeling in my stomach.

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: AsadZoya1708
Res...Meee First...
Unres...
WHAT??? THE END!!!
Such an amazing story came to an end...
Will miss it...
Loved AdiYa journey...
The ending was fantastic... AdiYa land in the same problem as one year ago...
Aditya proposing Zoya was awesome...
Do write more stories on AdiYa...

Thanks so much! for all your wonderful comments that kept me going :)

Glad you liked this AdiYa journey

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