Our Angel friend:MaanEet OS

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Our Angel friend


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Hearing the alarm bell Tej woke up from the bed and went to the kitchen.There he saw his dear wife Jhanvi.
Tej:Jhanvi..tea..
Jhanvi gave him a cup.He sipped it.
Tej:This is not tea.This is water.

Jhanvi:Ya...if you don't bath you will not get tea.I have told you many times.
Tej:Oh Jhanvi..now we are old.Still your rules have not changed.
Jhanvi:Yes..we are old.That's why I am telling you to have healthy habits.Go bath..
Jhanvi pushed him out.

Breakfast time...
Well...Tej and Jhanvi are the parents of Triplets Shivay,Aditya,Naresh and their youngest son Omkara.They got seated for break fast with their wives Anika,Pankhuri,Aanya and Gauri.
Gauri was feeding Omkara.

Om was shy:Enough Gauri.
Gauri:Why to be shy?We are husband wife.
He smiled.

Tej:Jhanvi...everyday vegetarian food.Why don't you make non veg once in a while.Suddenly Jhanvi kicked him with a spoon.
Tej moaned:Ah...


Jhanvi:Though you call me Jhanvi,my real name is Janaki.I am a tamil brahmin.Thinking of non veg itself is a sin for me.
Jhanvi frowned and left the room.
Shivay:Papa..if you want non veg like us why don't you go to hotel and have it?

Tej:I can't betray your mom even for non veg.I can't hurt her.
They all smiled.

Tej:By the way you all are planning for a reunion with friends.Right?

Aditya:Yes dad.
Omkara:But the problem is that we have not decided the place.
Gauri:We are confused.


Tej:Why to think so much?We have a resort.Right?
Jhanvi:You all stay in our resort and enjoy the reunion.



Omkara:Wow...nice idea.
Naresh:We will inform our friends now itself.
Aanya:I can't wait to meet Vish.She will come with Ajitabh.


Gauri:Even i am waiting to see Ajitabh bhai.
Aanya's twin sister Vishaka is married to Gauri's cousin brother Ajitabh.

The Oberoi brothers and wives went to the resort.
As usual Tej and Jhanvi welcomed the guests who are their sons' friends like Ranveer,Ritik,their wives Ishani and Shivanya.
Jhanvi:Vaango vaango...

They all widened their eyes.
Tej:Jhanvi..don't talk in tamil now.They won't understand.
Jhanvi became dull.


Shivanya:So sweet of you Jhanvi aunty.
They all hugged Jhanvi making her cheerful.Tej and Jhanvi became busy with their work and the friends gathered together chatting and enjoying.
Aanya and Vishaka hugged each other.Gauri and Ajitabh too had a sweet reunion.

Naresh:Missing Geet very much.Why has she not reached yet?
Shivay:Exactly.Without her there is no fun.
Suddenly Geet arrived:Hey guys..I am here.
They all were excited:Geet...
Geet hugged them all.

All of them hanged out with Geet and had fun.



Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi batein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi
Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi batein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi
Ladkhadane lagi mushkurane lagi
Bewajaah har jagaah aane jaane lagi
Tu mujhe main tujhe
Jo bhi ho dil me woh khul ke bataane lagi
Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi batein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi
Waqt bhi sarfira sa lage
Bhaagta saa rahe har jage
Waqt ko in dino sujhne hai lagi dillagi
Ho, yaariyaan gadiyaan jab huyee
Mastiyaan sastiyaan tab hui
Aaj kal marziyon ki jagah se thhagi zindegi
Sath hum jo chale
Ban gaye kaafilein
Aur koi hamen ab mile na mile
Mauj hai roz hai..
Roke se bhi naa ye rukte kabhi silsile (Come on, come on)
Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi batein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi
Hai chadi hai chadi iss kadar
Ghumti jhumti har dagar
Befikar befikar saa lage zindegi ka safar
Yaar ko yaar ki hai khabar
Pyaar se pyaar si baat kar
Yei Jahan hai jahan
Hum rahein ab woh hi umra bhar
Dhup ko thaam ke chal pade na thake
Fursaton mein rahe, kaam ho naam ke
Befikar befikar subhaa suhaanee ho khali ho pal sham ke
Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi batein hain nashe si
Jaise daru desi


Ladkhadane lagi mushkurane lagi
Bebajaah har jagaah aane jaane lagi


Tu mujhe main tujhe
Jo bhi ho dil me woh khul ke bataane lagi(Cocktail).


Geet:Now we all are hungry.Let me cook something.
Aditya:But this is a resort.How can you cook?
Geet:Hey..this is your resort only.So you people can let me enter your kitchen to cook.Right?
Shivanya:Ya..Geet is right.
Geet:You have brain Shivanya.
Geet hugged her.

Geet started cooking in the kitchen.She had not allowed anyone else in the kitchen.
Shivay rang up Geet.
Shivay:Is it ready?
Geet:Won't you allow me to cook peacefully?


Shivay:We all are very hungry yaar.That's why.

Geet:Have some patience baba.Keep the phone down.Otherwise I won't be able to cook anything.


She cut the call.
Shivay:Oh no...
Aditya:What did Geet say?
Shivay:She needs more time to finish cooking.
Naresh:Oh...then our stomach will burn.

Geet cooked some pasta in the kitchen and served all of them.
Shivay:After a long time had something delicious.
Geet hugged Shivay:Thank you Shivay.


Shivay:You know...Anika can't cook anything.

Anika frowned:Geet..see..this Shivay is always finding fault with me.He always blabbers.
Pankhuri:Adi is very boring.Only work.No time to even talk to me.
Shivay-Aditya got irritated:Complaining about us?
Anika-Pankhuri:Yes.
Geet held Anika and Pankhuri closer:Chill guys...we are here to enjoy.Not to fight.
They smiled.


Aanya:Yes..right.
Ajitabh:By the way Geet...where is your better half?
Vishaka:You got married.Right?

Geet:Yes.His name is Maan.
Gauri:You know our love stories.But we want to know your love story too.
Geet blushed:Ok.I will tell my love story to all of you.

Geet dressed up her sister Meera.

Meera:Enough Geet.Today is not my wedding.
Geet:So what?The boy is coming to see my jeeji.Today he will tell his mom that he will marry only you.He will lose his sleep seeing your beauty.


Meera became shy:Stop it Geet.





Geet:Ok my sweet jeeji.

She hugged her.

The boy Dev and his family came.
Dev and Meera exchanged sweet glances with each other.
His brother Maan was roaming around while Geet was also coming that way.
Both collided with each other and she slipped.Before she fell down Maan lifted her up in his arms.
They shared an eye lock.

Mahi..mahi...

He put her down.
Geet:Thank you jeejaji's brother.
Maan:What?Call me Maan.That's my name Miss...
Geet:Ok.I will call you Maan.And I am Geet.
Maan:Ok.
Geet walked.Suddenly she realized thather saree's pallu was stuck somewhere.
She turned back.It was stuck onto a table.Maan removed the saree pallu from the table.She turned back in shyness.
Maan:Your pallu.

Geet pulled it back shyly.
Geet:I thought you were catching my pallu.I did'nt know that it was stuck up.
Maan:Why should I catch your pallu?I am not a small child to walk holding somebody's pallu.
Geet giggled.
Geet:By the way why are you here?
Maan stammered.
Geet:You want to overhear what your brother is talking to jeeji.So you want to go to their room.Right?
Maan was embarrassed:How did you know that?
Geet:Because I can read other's mind.
He was embarrassed.
Geet:By the way..even I want to hear what my jeeji is talking to my future jeejaji.
Maan:You too?
Geet nodded.They both chuckled.
Geet:We both will go there together.
Maan:Ok.
Suddenly Dev-Meera came there.
Dev:No need as we already finished talking.
Maan-Geet were embarrassed.
Maan:What's the decision?
Dev:We liked each other.
Maan-Geet were over excited.
Geet:Really?
Meera nodded shyly.
Geet:I knew that you will be my jeejaji as no one can resist falling in love with my sweet jeeji.
Dev:Yes.I fell in love with your sweet jeeji.

Maan hugged Dev and Geet hugged Meera.


While hugging their eyes fell on each other and they smiled at each other.

Mahi..Mahi...

Maan-Geet had frequent meetings during wedding arrangements.The engagement of Dev Meera happened.During games Geet chose dare and she was asked to kiss a boy.Her eyes fell on Maan.Without any second thought she went and kissed Maan.


He was shocked.He stared at her.Seeing his angry eyes Geet ran away.
Later Geet went near Maan.
Geet:Maan...
Maan:Why did you kiss me?
Geet:I did that to win the challenge.
She pulled her own ears:I am really sorry.


What to do?When I was asked to kiss a boy you were the only handsome boy around.How can I kiss ugly boys?I can kiss only a handsome boy like you.That's why I kissed you.
Maan blushed.But he faked anger:Just to win challenge you kissed me?I thought you kissed me because you love me.
Geet was stunned.
Geet:What did you say?

Maan:I thought you love me and that's why you kissed me.So I became very happy unnecessarily.
Geet:Why were you happy thinking that I love you?
Maan:Because..because I love you Geet and so I longed for your love too.
Geet was surprised.
Geet:Don't worry.Because though I did'nt tell you anything I also love you.That's why i kissed you only to win the challenge.
Maan was surprised:Really?
Geet nodded shyly and embraced him.He embraced her back indulging in romance.

Mahi..mahi...

During Dev Meera's Sangeet function,Dev Meera and Maan-Geet danced romantically.

Zara zara si neend bhi
Ajnabi si hogayi
Zara zara chain se
Dushmani si hogayi
Tum mile kho gaya
Hai khud ka hi pata
Kya karun, kya nahi
Kuch bas mein na raha
Samjhun kaise koi samjhaye
Dil kya kare jab kisi se
Kisi ko pyar ho jaye
Jaane kaha kab kisi ko
Kisi se pyar ho jaye
Ho.. unchi unchi deewaron si
Iss duniya ki rasmein
Na kuch tere bas mein jaana
Na kuch mere bas mein
Tum mile kho gaya
Hai khud ka hi pata
Kya karun, kya nahi
Kuch bas mein na raha
Samjhun kaise koi samjhaye
Dil kya kare jab kisi se
Kisi ko pyar ho jaaye
Jaane kahan kab kisi ko
Kisi se pyaar ho jaaye
Jaise parbat pe ghata jhukti hai
Jaise sagar se lehar uthti hai

Aise kisi chehre pe nigah rukti hai
Rok nahi sakti nazro ko
Duniya bhar ki kasmein
Tum mile kho gaya
Hai khud ka hi pata
Kya karun, kya nahi
Kuch bas mein na raha
Samjhun kaise koi samjhaye
Dil kya kare jab kisi se
Kisi ko pyaar ho jaye
Jaane kaha kab kisi ko
Kisi se pyar ho jaye
Kisi se pyar ho jaye
Kisi se pyar ho jaye
(Kaabil).

Geet came wearing a blue lehenga for Dev-Meera's wedding.


Maan could'nt blink his eyes seeing this beauty.She appeared like a blue rose to him.


Mahi ve..Mahi ve...
Mahi ve..Mahi ve...


Maan Dev Meera got married.



But Maan was lost in Geet


who was dressed in beautiful blue gown.
She was blushing continuously.

Mahi...Mahi...


Geet was lost in her handsome lover Maan.She could'nt take her eyes off him.


Mahi .Mahi ...


Geet was excited when Dev Meera had a baby boy.Maan and Geet pampered the little boy a lot.


Maan:Geet...let us get married and have babies.
Geet blushed:So this is how you are proposing me?


They giggled.
Geet held his hand and said:Yes,I will marry you Maan.
They shared a romantic eye lock.

Mahi..Mahi...

Maan-Geet got married.

Present...

Geet:This is our fairy tale.
Ishani:That's so sweet.Really a fairy tale.
Ranveer:Ours is also a fairy tale love story.Right?


Ishani blushed.
All the couples smiled hearing Geet's love story.
Ritik:When can we see your Maan?
Shivanya:Why did'nt he come?

Geet:Maan was busy.But he will come to pick me up before we part.
Om:We are waiting to see your Maan.
Gauri:Hopefully Maan will teach Omkara how to romance.
Om frowned at her.

Anika:Even Shivay should take training from him.


Shivay:What?
Pankhuri:Adi too.
Adi:Why me?

Geet:Anyways guys let's prepare for Naresh's birthday party.
Naresh:You remember my birthday?
Geet held him closer:Of course my buddy.

They all made preparations for Naresh's birthday party in the resort.
Tej Jhanvi were also present.
They all partied enjoying to the full.






Geet clicked Naresh-Aanya's photographs with other friends.

Geet:Let me take snaps with the birthday boy and his sweet heart.

Geet took photographs with Naresh and Aanya.


The next day was the last day in resort.
Geet was not seen anywhere.
Shivay:Where is Geet?She is not seen anywhere.
Ranveer:That's what we are also wondering.Where is she?
Omkara:Can she go without biding us good-bye?
Naresh:No way.We will search.
They searched everywhere.They did not find her anywhere?
Ritik:Where is Geet?
Suddenly they saw light.They saw a girl facing backward.Slowly she started turning backwards to face them.


It was Geet who appeared in a beautiful shining gown.They were shocked to see her legs floating in air.
Adi:What's this Geet?
Geet:Don't be scared.


I am not a human being now.2 weeks back I died in an accident.
They were shocked.
Shivay:Don't joke Geet.
Geet sat down:It's the truth.After death God made me an Angel as he loved me a lot.I did'nt want to miss this reunion function as I missed you all very much.So God permitted me to come here and spend time with you all.I really enjoyed a lot.Thank you guys for making these days special.I really enjoyed a lot.


All of them were in tears.
Geet:Now I have to leave.This will be our last meeting.I won't be able to see you all again.So don't say good-by with tears.
All were crying.
Ishani:Geet...you will go alone..are you alone in heaven?
Geet:Don't worry about that.My Maan is there with me in heaven too.We are soul mates.We died together in the accident.

All were shocked.
Maan arrived.
Maan and Geet embraced each other.

Mahi..mahi...

Mahi..mahi...


Geet stood closer to him:This is my Maan.
Maan:Happy to see you all.Geet always talks about her dearest friends.
They did not know what to say as they were in deep pain.
Maan:Shall we go?

Geet nodded emotionally.



Geet:Bye everyone.
Geet waved her hands at them.They all waved hands at her crying:Geet!
Geet smiled tearfully.Maan held Geet's hand.

Maan and Geet disappeared in a moment.
Everyone was crying.
Pankhuri:Why this happened with our Geet?
Tej and Jhanvi reached.
Tej:What happened?Why all are sad?
Jhanvi:Say.

Shivay said everything.
Tej and Jhanvi were shocked.The Oberoi guys and their wives hugged their parents and cried.
Tej and Jhanvi caressed them silently with pain.

The End

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Omg what a twist maneet died in an accident two weeks back geet came for her friends nice loved the os the edits of tej and janvi are superb MT should defintely see them 😆 super job👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely OS
Loved how u used tej and Jhanvi..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice work...
you brought an interesting twist in the end...👏

I really loved the pictures you have used throughout the story...😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting story with twist
So nice pics of every character easy to imagine
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice OS dear
Liked it!!
Fab pics. Liked Tej nad Jhanvi's edited pic
Interesting story with a twist. Maaneet are died in a car accident. Geet came to visit her friends in a runion party.
:))
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on the OS!

wonderful and amazing OS!! terrifically written!

oh no Maaneet are dead!


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely OS

Maan and Geet met during Dev and Meera's wedding functions
and both fell in love
but later met with accident and now Geet attends her friends reunion
as an angel
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Posted: 6 years ago
#9
thx 4 commenting.
MT means Mahesh Thakur?
They r not edits.They are real pics.Mahesh and Sridevi have acted together

Originally posted by: himani_rosid

Omg what a twist maneet died in an accident two weeks back geet came for her friends nice loved the os the edits of tej and janvi are superb MT should defintely see them 😆 super job👏

Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#10
Thanks 4 the lovely comment.
They r not edits.They are real pics.Mahesh and Sridevi have acted together



Originally posted by: anu5

Nice OS dear

Liked it!!
Fab pics. Liked Tej nad Jhanvi's edited pic
Interesting story with a twist. Maaneet are died in a car accident. Geet came to visit her friends in a runion party.
:))

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