my 1st ashi-yuvi fic--PART 2 !!!!!!!

part 1

ashi n yuvi were in d shed as usual..........................

A: duh yuvi,cut it out!!mai ab achhi mood mein nahi hoon.

Y: babes,tumhe hua kya hai?everytime i try 2 kiss u,tum mujhe kehti ho ki u'r not in a good mood.tum aajkal mujhe bahut ignore kar rahi ho.if u have sum problem wid dis relationship............

A: shut up,yuvi !!u kno dat mai tumse pyar karti hoon.i don't have ne problem................

Y:(really worried) phir baat kya hai???

A: mumma...................

Y:sonia aunty????ab unhone kya kiya??

A: i told her about u n me................................

Y:(very eagerly)wat did she say???

A: mumma is very happy wid dis relationship !!!!!!!!!!!!!

yuvi can't believe it n he asks,"wat???"

A:(laughs)yes yuvi,mumma se maine baat kar li hai n she's very happy!!!!!!!!!!

Y: i'm so happy dat tumne sonia aunty se baat kar li !!!!!babes u don't kno how happy..................

yuvi is unable 2 finish his sentence as ashi hugs him...................

after like 5 minutes😉 they break apart n yuvi kisses her😳

ok guys,i'm not 2 much into ritin n all but plzzzzzzz tell me whether i shud continue..........😕

ya u shud it was realy gud im eargerly waiitng for next part 👏

plz dia,continue now. i love reading fanfics & urs is simply superb 👏

omg !!!!!!!!! i don't BELIEVE this !!!!!!!!! my fic--awesome????????? 😆 😆 newayz,actually i haven't thot of d next part yet..............i'll b posting it asap !!!!

nice start dia......hope to read the next part soon 😛

Originally posted by: ashi912

dia, plz continue

i will as soon as i finish riting it....................

Originally posted by: remixdbest

we r waiting..........

hey bhaggu,r u THAT desperate?????actually 1st i'll go offline,rite d next part in rough n then i'll post it .........

ya sure doo bco if i c u online i will keep troublin u 😆

ok guys,CHILL !!!!!here it is......

Part 2

ashi n yuvi spend sum more time staring into each-others' eyes........ 😳 😳
finally.............
A: yuvi,i gotta go now,bye...........
as ashi turns 2 go,yuvi holds her hand,stops her n says,"r u free 2morow?"
A: duh,obviously!!coz kal toh saturday hai.newayz,kyun??
Y: then can v meet 2morow mornin at 9??
A: ok--par kahan??
Y:u don't need 2 worry about dat 😳 😳 --tum sirf 9 baje tak ready hokar apne room mein wait karna.........i'll cum 2 take u.........
b4 ashi goes,yuvi kisses her on d cheek 😳 😳 .........................GOD,they kiss so many times 😉 😆
A: bye.........................
Y: bye babes....................
dat's all 4 now......................

Rocking!!!!!!!! Plz continue fast!!!!!!!! Awesome work!! 👏