AKSHAN SS-MERI Khushi last part on 8 Feb 2019 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
#31
Akshat Jindal... kya se kya ban gaye aap

Love that you got the creepy cat statues removed btw 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32

Last part


Hi forum wasiyon sorry for the late update.


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Days started to pass. The wounds on body as well as on both the souls were also healing. Slowly n steadily the destiny was playing it's game n the puppets were dancing on the tune of almighty.

All the three DIL were now trying to understand the sweet unsolved puzzle name as guddan who was their mother in law in relation. They were loving the happy go lucky girl who was a gift of destiny to them. They were realising that there was no one better than her who could have changed their AJ n the atmosphere of the home. Who could have spread the colours in their life.

Guddan was growing now she was understanding the meaning of family, responsibility n also the most important thing except anything else LOVE.

Yes she was understanding in their initial married life Akshat never ever tried to open himself to her. But now they talk about each other they about family members problem n resolve them.

They became frnds n now they were best friends who talk about anything. Once guddan in her guddanpana told Akshat that she had crush on him when he wore that pink shirt for her.


N they both burst out into laughter.

Akshat was now changed completely changed. The heart which was covered in a wall of glass was breaking the glass. The ice was meltingday by day. He started regaining the emotions.

Firstly it was care n protection then it was friendship n now the ride was coming to the end. To the most beautiful emotion ever which was love.


Yes love Akshat Jindal was falling again but this he falls for one who was completely opposite to him who was the reason of the change in him. But still there was a feeling who was 16 years younger to him.


Yess he was 36 n guddan was 21. Initially he cursed himself for ruining her life. not just once but many times he found that she wanted to be with him. He was understanding the restlessness in her which she just tried to shrug many times when he is in the surrounding area.

One day when they were coming back after a drive. Yes they went for a drive.


Akshat found a girl asked for a lift. When Akshat stopped the car he found it was Naina. Antara's college time friend who wanted to marry him. He hesitated a bit but when guddan insisted he helped her.


When he went to find a mechanic nearby Naina who was pissed off with guddan started...


N- so Akshat be doosri shadi Kar hi Li


G- Nahi Naina ji ... Wo to unki family ne unhe pressurise Kiya isiliye unhone shadi Karne Ka faisla Kiya.


N- haa haa waise thik b hai ... Waise pressure to tum par b Hoga na... Shadi kaa...tabhi to tum ne Apne se 16 Saal bade insan se shadi Kar li... Wo BHI ek widower... I mean jiski pahli biwi ...

Waise ek Baar batao tumne ye shadi paison k liye ki thi ...


. Ya koi bf Ka chakkar wakkar tha Jo maa baap ne itne bade Umar k admi se tumhari shadi Karwa Di...

N by the way ... Rishta Kaisa h tum logon Ka... I mean your life with your husband your bedroom life... Akshat ki chandi ho gayi ... Apne se Umar me itni chhoti ladki ...magar tum use koi Khushi Kaha de Pai hogi... I understand ki itne bade Umar k admi k sath... You know what I mean...


Tears were flowing through her eyes. She was broken but not for her for Akshat she realised in a moment that she was too imperfect for him.


Just then Akshat came she didn't told him about anything.


They reach home n went to sleep.

The next two days was a hell for Akshat he was not getting that why guddan is avoiding him. She never misses the breakfast with family but back to back two days she missed the breakfast.

She was not talking to him or if she then she was not talking with that essence. The essence which Akshat loved to feel.

In the night of second day. He took her for a drive. N stopped the car in a midway n asked


A- guddan kya BAAT hai... Main Dekh Raha Hu do din se ... U r not well agar koi BAAT hai to mujhe batao...

G- aap mujhe divorce de dijiye..


Akshat looked at her she was all lost in her own thoughts.


He hold her by her shoulder n shaked a little.


A- guddan... Guddan... Gudddaaannn...

Guddan came out of her thoughts n looked at him. A little droplet just touched her chin. Akshat hold her hand n asked


A- kya BAAT hai guddan ... Batao mujhe...

Guddan just looked at him. He was so pure n caring. She just hugged him.


N said


G- Akshat aaj se pahle hamne Kabhi BHI duniya ki baton par koi Gaur Nahi Kiya hamne Kabhi ye Nahi socha ki aap Ka or hamara yeh rishta duniya ki nazaro me kya hai. Ha ham pati patni hain magar kahin na Kahi duniya or society yeh b dekhti h ki Hamari Umar me 16 Saal Ka fasla hai.


Aaj se pahle hamne Kabhi in baton ko Nahi socha magar ab Soch Rahi Hu mujhe lag Raha hai i ...I m ruining your life. Main Aapke layak Nahi Hu Akshat... Magar main kya Karu main aapse door Jane Ka Soch b Nahi Sakti ... Aap k Bina Maine Apne wajood ko Kabhi mahsoos b Nahi Kiya. I love you ... I love you Akshat but main...

Akshat shushed her ..


A- shhh chup ... Bilkul chup... Mujhe samajh Jana Chahiye tha ki tum Naina ki baton se pareshan ho.

Guddan mujhe sirf ek baat batao ... Kya duniya ki Kisi b insan ki koi b BAAT hamare rishtey or iss rishtey me hamare bharose se badi hai.

She nodded a no.


A- to tumne kaise Soch liya ki main hamare rishtey k liye aisa sochta hu..


Promise me ki dobara aisa Kuch Nahi sochogi...


She nodded a yes ...


A- now listen to me... Tumse kis ne Kaha ki tum mujhe koi Khushi Nahi de saki... Sach to yeh hai guddan ki tumhara MERI Zindagi me hona hi MERI sabsi badi Khushi hai... You r the reason of smile n my happiness belongs to you. I belong to you.

Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal aapko hamesha doosron ki Khushi Ka khayal rahta hai na .. to MERI iss Khushi ka khayal rakhne ki zimmedari apki hai. Samajhi aap.


Or ab mujhe or Kuch kahne ki zarurat nahi hai to iss waqt MERI doosri Khushi ka khayal kariye.

G looked at him with questioning eyes.

He opened his arms in a hug. She smiled n hugged him.


He just said.


A- I love you so much ... Thanx for being my Khushi for life time.


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Ho Gaya re Baba ye b khatam ho Gaya.


Kaisa laga batana zarur pls.


N check my piece of writing on akshan at following link

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=5044845


Scroll down for my list.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
You write the dialogues really very well Di 👏
Nice one keep writing
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
beautiful ending
loved all the chap and dialogues of all the chap is amazing
do write more
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
Awesome update
Beautiful ending
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
Awesome ending kavya
Love their confession

Kash cvs tumse idea le le

To show main bhi aise lovey dovey moment dekhne ko mil jati

Do write more
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
Last dialogues by Akshat were bang on
Nicely written
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Lovely...Dil chu gaya re...👏loved it...thank you so much 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
Kaya, sari sweet endings ka contract tumhare hi paas hai😆

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