ETERNAL LOVE-TEN MILES OF PEACH BLOSSOMS-MG FF-UPDATED PT 04 PG 03

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<h2><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6" color="#cc0033">PROLOGUE</font></h2><h3><font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">It was a very beautiful palace placed inside the heart of the sea.Maids started to move in hurry taking some medical equipment while a man with twinkling eyes entered inside the palace seeking a sick patient.He was followed by a beautiful girl who looked around.The water king greeted and led them towards the sick patient.That beautiful girl looked around her walking inside.That man who was a doctor took a look into the sick patient and got to know what was his ailment.He requested the water king to step outside.</font></h3><h3><font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">When water king exited then he spoke to the beautiful girl,Can you sense the different aura from the crown prince Geet?</font></h3><h3><font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">That beautiful girl nodded and sat in front of the sick patient and snapped her fingers and sat doing meditation holding the chinmudra.After some time she entered the mind of the sick patient using her power and walked inside the sick patient's mind.She walked further and felt the strong power and took a look into it to get her master...her mentor...her favourite teacher Yash sindhia.Geet's eyes watered seeing her teacher taking the reign of the sick patient's body trying to get powerful to return to his body.She immediately came outside and spat blood all over.</font></h3><h3><font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">The doctor threw some power towards her and made her well instantly and asked,Do you got confirmation Geet?</font></h3><h3><font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Geet nodded and spoke,Thank you for bringing me here Manchanda. I've waited for him for a long time!</font></h3><h3><font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Manchanda spoke twinkling at her,Oh,it's ok my dear.Since you are very loyal to him that you fed your heart's blood and waiting for him from 1,00,000 years,its my duty to ease your pain.</font></h3><h3><font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Geet smiled at him and sat near the sick crown prince sighing.</font></h3><h3><font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">She asked,Any chance of helping him god father?</font></h3><h3><font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Manchanda spoke looking at the sick patient,Oh don't worry.he was powerful at his times and now also he's powerful inside this crown prince Ansh.He'll come around in 3 months!</font></h3><h2><font size="6" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0000">CHARACTER SKETCH</font></h2>

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<h3><font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Maanveer Singh Khurana-Crown prince of the celestial tribe.</font></h3>

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<h3><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">Geetanjali Handa-Queen of fox tribe.</font></h3>

</p><h3><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">Yashwardhan sindhia-High god of war,teacher of Geet.</font></h3><h3><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">Manchanda-Doctor and high god in medicine.</font></h3><p>Image result for Behzaad Khan images

<h3><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">Brij Handa-Brother of Geet and high god too and expert in medicine too.</font></h3>

Prashant Chawla

<h3><font color="#0000ff" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Tej Handa-big brother of Geet and Brij.He's the crown prince of fox tribe.</font></h3><h3><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">Naintara Rathod-Rival of Geet who always wanted what Geet wanted.</font></h3><h3><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">Sameera Shroff-She's the first wife of Maanveer but never got an opportunity to be his wife dutifully.Maan hates her and he marries her due to his grandfather's pressure.</font></h3>

Abhinav Shukla

<h3><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">Dev Shukla-Cassanova loves Geet truly but circumstances make him to marry Naintara who despises Geet.</font></h3>

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PART 01

Vindhya mountains which has been dense with forests and animals was the habitat of the disciples of Yash Sindhia,high god of war.Vindhya mountains had 15 disciples who were learning the war art from Yash.But right now he was doing penance to gain knowledge..to invent a unique artefact which will be more powerful for a person who gains out of hard work.After doing penance for 100 years,he was successful gaining an artefact...god had smiled upon him to present this artefact...this was the purity dagger which can be mastered by a pure heart.That dagger need to choose its owner as it was slipping from his disciples hands when he tried to present it.

On that time a thought crept in Yash's mind,Am I going to get another disciple?

Meanwhile a beautiful girl screamed out loud for her brother when she was chased by her father.

She screamed,I want to go to Vindhya mountains no matter what happens!

Her father Mohinder Handa snarled,Geet,I have fixed an alliance for you.Its the second prince of celestial tribe!Just go and meet him for once!

Geet screamed stubbornly,I don't want to marry him..right now I have my goal...and that is I want to learn war art?

Mohinder sat there keeping his hand on his head feeling defeated as he know that his daughter is so stubborn like him.

Rano spoke gently,You need to think of your daughter's wishes or else if you act against her then she flees and we won't be able to find her..remember when you dint let her go to that trip to kashi at her 10th year then she fled so angry.

Mohinder continued worriedly,She fled to Himalayan mountains and freeze to death!

Rano sighed when Mohinder spoke,But from whom I ask the tutelage for Geet!

On that time someone spoke from behind,Yash sindhia from Vindhya mountains!

Both spun around to see smiling Manchanda.

Mohinder sighed and spoke,Ok,but I heard that Yash teaches only boys...howcome my Geet can be joined there?

Manchanda said,That won't be a problem..since our Geet acts like a boy..its better we disguise her and make her present in front of Yash as a boy!

Geet glared at him and asked,Do I act like boys?

Manchanda smiled looking at her anger,Yup,since your wishes are like boys then you act like boys!Come on let me enroll you there as he's a good friend of mine!

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 6 years ago
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congrats for new story
very much interesting
geet want to learn war fight
her father's friend helping her to enroll in school
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wow a new story from you!

congrats! thanks for sharing!

Awesome prologue!

seems like Geet went to with her teacher to see Maan who is unwell!

they helped Maan!
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terrific character sketch! oh no Maan is married?? but he hates his wife!
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Part 1

lovely update! well written!

Geet adamant on going to Vindhya mountains! can understand Mohinder's refusal! but Rano was right!

so Manchada suggests that they portray Geet as a boy as Yash only teaches boys!

update soon


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please update Heavenly Love, VD1 and 2, COL, Sweet Surrender, Shaitan...
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PART 02
In Vindhya mountains,Yash's disciples were trying to catch that dagger while he sat in meditation to get to know who will be his future disciple.When he closed his eyes and started to concentrate then his x-ray vision started like a pattern started to form which turned into a girl with hazel brown eyes long white nose and pink lips..the look of her can say that how much she was mischievous..then the vision turned her into a boy wearing moustache...Yash felt shocked concentrating on the vision while his face showed the shocking expression.
But when he saw further then he saw a wizard...a king who was the ruler of ghost tribe...he was doing some weird magic and shouted,After defeating Yash Sindhia am going to rule the three worlds...no one going to match me unless the person who wants to defeat me...the one who want to vanquish me never took birth in this world...am immortal always!
Immediately Yash opened his eyes shocked.He thought,Howcome I got this vision?Am getting that vision from quite a time!I know that ghost king want to defeat me and want to rule this world because apart from all the clan I have the powers to resist him.But what is the connection between this vision to that girl whom I saw in that vision...is there any connection?
Yash closed his eyes to concentrate once again but he can't able to concentrate and he opened his eyes breathing heavily.There was a pitcher of water beside him which downed immediately under the throat and felt calm.He once again closed his eyes but he felt the knock at the door.
The person spoke,Sir,a student has come to see you to get enrolled for war arts!
Yash thought,May be that girl who I saw!and he spoke,Tell him to wait for some time!
That person spoke,Yes sir!
Yash came outside and walked towards the great hall.
Meanwhile Manchanda walked with Geet while Geet asked,Godfather,are you going to meet me the great..the high god of war Yash Sindhia?
Manchanda spoke,Yup!Immediately he changed her to a boy.Geet felt something change and saw a moustache under her nose and sneezed as the hair of moustache tickled the tip of her nose.Geet asked angrily,Why am I wearing a boy's dress and this torture?Pointing towards her moustache
Manchanda hid his smile looking at the cute eyes of Geet as she was looking like a comedy piece and spoke,Yash teaches only boys not girls so if you want to learn war art from him then you need to wear this dress and that torture!
Geet asked,Don't I get caught?
Manchanda spoke still walking,May be or May be not!
Geet asked out of breath,What that supposed to mean?
Manchanda turned stopping and spoke,May be Yash can catch you but other disciples won't!
Geet asked,That will be good as I don't want to tell lies to my teacher...what will be my name?
Manchanda said,Geetansh!
Yash came outside and saw a young boy standing while he saw Manchanda walking towards him with a girl dressed in boy costume with a bushy moustache.Immediately he felt his powerful dagger fly faster past his students and turned around the boy and stopped in the midair in front of Geet.Manchanda eye gestured to Geet to take it but Geet was already very curious so she went forward but the dagger ran forward slipping from her hand.When she ran behind it then she saw that it going to hurt a bird which was flying above it.Geet jumped immediately and held the handle when the dagger came to her silently.Yash saw this astonished and his inner eye looked at her appearance.She was indeed beautiful.
Yash thought,Do I need to teach woman too?Then he thought,But this dagger has chosen her,so she'll be a special person which fate has connected to me!
Manchanda eye gestured to her to speak while Yash was lost in his thoughts.
Geet folded her hands and spoke,Sir,I wish to receive tutelage from you in war art!Am Geetansh from fox tribe!
Geet gave the dagger back to Yash when Manchanda eye gestured to give the dagger back.Yash took it.When these incidents were going on...on that time the boy who waited the audience of Yash came forward and requested,I also wish to receive tutelage in war art from high god Yash!
Yash asked,What is your name?
That boy spoke,Prateek Arora!
Yash spoke,I have already 15 disciples if you two get enrolled then it will be 17...who will be the junior here?
Geet thought,I don't want to be the junior here!
Yash asked,What do you think Manchanda?
Geet thought,Manchanda say the number as 16!
Manchanda looked towards her but spoke,Yash,mine is quite irresponsible and unreliable so make him as junior!
Geet spoke angrily,Then I wont get enrolled!
Yash's first disciple asked her,You were very eager to get enrolled then why are you denying it?
Geet pouted,Am the one who's youngest in my family so I don't want to become junior here!
Yash smiled at her pouting face but immediately threw the dagger towards her which she took it without any difficulty while other students asked,Sir,you gave it just like that,why?
Yash answered,Because it chose her,so I gave it to him!Geet said,Then it is ok then!She folded her hands.
Yash said,Prateek,you will be 16th disciple and Geetansh will be 17th disciple!
Manchanda went away while Geet was settled down in her quarters.Yash once again sat to meditation seeking some answers when he felt that something dark is swooping around his mountain.He felt uneasy and came outside and went to the highest peak of his mountain and smelt the air.He felt some sinister and he felt the hairs of his back neck stand.He swallowed and sat there doing meditation when he saw the ghost lord celebrating that no one can't defeat him unless and his concentration broke once again.Yash gulped down his saliva and came back to his students quarters.Everyone were asleep when he slipped inside Geet's room.He saw that Geet was sleeping.Yash looked that her palm was open and was sleeping it was her left palm.Yash held her left palm softly and felt the palm softer than cotton.Yash immediately felt calm holding it.He closed his eyes holding her left palm.He immediately saw numerous visions like some twin of him coming to her and kissing her and most important was why was her birth happened.When he opened his eyes then he was smiling.Yash who never smiled in his lifetime smiled.He saw Geet stirring so he vanished into thin air.Geet opened her eyes and saw around her as if she felt someone here.She saw no one so drifted to sleep immediately.
Yash came to his quarters and smiled and spoke,It is near Virendra Bhatia!
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 6 years ago
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Congrats on new story great update so geet is helping manchanda cure a patient who I am guessing is maan who is quite powerful even in his weak state for whom geet waited for so long and even her fav teacher helps him as well very interesting cs

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