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Suraj Kumar,one of the best bussiness in the town,sitting on the bench at the side of street.
a voice rang on his mind.
a girl shout "Suraj...".

Suraj close his eyes and remember her past

Suraj pov's,
i am Suraj Kumar belongs to a lower middle class family, living with his parents kamal and aruna
and younger sister sanjana in Railway Colony in delhi.i was perceived as a good for nothing person as i skips classes, fails in exams, and gets involved in fights.
Baba se labhi mere bante nahi the jab dekho woh mujhe datt the rwhte the.kitne baar main ghar chorke jane lava tha magar haar baar ma aur kiren ne roka par kabhi unhone nahi kiya.
mere life changes hui jab a well lived family moves into the same building. Trivedi family, family mein jada interest nahi tha magar unke bade beti chakor mein interest tha.
magar pehla impresion he kharab parah uss ne mujhe tab dekha jab mein building ke bahar bake ladko ke saath maara mari kar raha tha.
woh loh ache paise wale the magar due loss in business
kya kya nahi karta tha usse inpress karne ke liye woh Nahi pate woh mere behan sanjana ko para the the tuition. Although he tries to woo her, magar chakor always treats him with disdain. aur ek din maine jake uske college me samne usse i love you bola.
and she slap me on my face infront of all.
Chakor toh mujhse nafrat karte the magar ek raat yesa hua ke usske choti behan imli ko koi raat the pe cher raha tha.they was about to rape her. main time pe aayke usse bacha aur
and that day was my day,
main imli ko ghar chora aur imli ne chakor se mere bohat taref ki


Chakor realizes that im not such a useless fellow.
she come to me.
Chakor: Suraj. thank you mere behan ki izaat bache hain tumne.
Suraj:ek ladki ke liye uske izzat kya hote hain hum jante hai.
i left but chakor keep stare me.she start. noticing me.
and one day.
she was back to her home when she see me and baba fighting.
Kamal:iss baar bhi ye ladka pass nahi hua char saal se sirf 12th ke exam pass nahi kar paa raha hai.
koi kam kya nahi nahi hai nikama hai.
saara din bajar awaragarde karta rehta hai.
I see her hearing all this and left from there.
at terrace,
Suraj and vivan my friend sitting there.suraj come there.

Suraj:haan haan aagaye tum tumbhi suna lo hume aur.
Suraj talk to vivan what is special in me.

Vivian tells her that he can dismantle and assemble a motorcycle within minutes.
Chakor:kal isse mere college mein le aana wahan se kahe jana hai.
she takes me to a Hero Honda dealer and asks them to give him a job. He is promised a job if he can assemble a bike. Initially, the lethargic suraj is disinterested and gives up the task. Chakor takes him to the corner and slaps him before revealing that she has fallen in love with him.
She then tells him that they can only be together if he gets a proper job and gets his life straightened out.suraj then demonstrates his skill in motorcycle assembly, securing a job with the dealer.


Later at night,.
Suraj get his first salary and give it to his mother who get happy but father taunt him that he don't get educated.later he overhears his father telling his mother how proud he is of their son since getting a job with such a prestigious company is not easy. Only then does suraj realize his father's love for him and weeps in joy.


One night,.
Sukor sitting on terrace while hugging each other talking about their future that time.their romance get discovered by her mother and she refuses to permit their marriage even as suraj's father tries to persuade her otherwise. Chakor's family is heavily indebted to another family that has been supporting them since chakor's father suffered losses in his business. Chakor's parents want chakor to marry the son of the family, Anurag that has helped them.
Chakor parents take her to that groom farmhouse without knowing that suraj.he soon discovered that by imli suraj come out of farmhouse


Chakor escapes there by imli and meets suraj.they stay in a lodge of where Vivian works.
Chakor reveals that she has made the biggest decision of her life by deciding to make love to him, as he should not regret falling in love with her when she marries anurag her parents chose.suraj don't know that.
He is happy that now he and chakor will remain together,he don't know her plan.
Chakor can't leave her parents and she have to marry Anurag.
Suraj in happiness get close to thapki and get intimate with her.


The next morning ,
Chakor tell suraj about her desione.
Suraj get angry if she think him so low.
he wants chakor to live with him, chakor is also sad but she can't do anything.and try to make him feel that she is not a good girl.tell
Him that he also want to be physica with her.
But Suraj understand and not giving her this topic to attention.chakor start fakingly argue with him.
They continue arguing as they exit the hotel.
While crossing the road,
Chakor cross the road while suraj is her behind.chakor Don't notice and get knocked down by a truck as a helpless suraj watches.suraj also run to her but suraj is also hit by a speeding vehicle.
Chakor dies on the spot.
At hospital,
Suraj gain the his conscious see his friends and family there asked about chakor.but they silent he then see chakor parents crying loudly out of room.he went to imli and asked her about chakor.
Imli bring him in mortoge.and make him see chalo death body.
Suraj is in shocked.
Suraj try to commit suicide but never success.and he imagined chakor telling him that she is always with him and can't go away from him.
Asked her to bring so successful that her parents must regards why they don't give nod to their relationship.
Flash back ends.
Driver come to him.
Driver:sir Ghar se phone aaya tha.
Suraj take the call.its Aditi.
Imli:kya suraj aap abhi tak Nahi Aaye ho.
Ma Papa ke anniversary hai Aapke liye abhi tak Nahi cake cut Kiya
Suraj:araha hoon.
Imli: thank you Suraj kis me socha that ke do ke Jane ke baad aap Apne parivaar ke Saath Saath humara BHI Dyan doge.
Ma Papa kya kayal rakha choto ko abroad ko bhega parne ko.
Mere Shaadi Vivian se karwai
Suraj:tum logo ke liya Nahi Apne chakor ke liye Kiya.
Aayta hoon Ghar.
Suraj see the road and then sit on car.
Car leaves the place.and chakor seen have a sad smile on her face seeing her Suraj.


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