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Haven't caught up on the last week yet but when I look back, I feel the story characters (I know it's going fantastic and very strong at all times), are kind of cameo-ish.
1) Bobby - is nowhere to be found after strong appearances in first two weeks
2) Mickey - after being projected so strongly (starring opposite Mini), he too has vanished after two or three shots.
3) Preet - Chalo I'll let go of this one but still, shouldn't she be shown more frequently, perhaps giving inside information of the Khurana mohalla?
4) Pinku & family - again, their track lasted a week. Just vanished after it.
So, now this sums up to what will be the role of Hanumaan Singh now that he has got two weeks of enough screen space.
Babes and Mini are again relocating, so how will he be included in the storyline still?
At all costs, I want him to continue and not go missing with introduction of another character. And CVs should keep in mind such instances, where they are introducing people and then vanishing them after a week.
There should be continuity in characters and plot.
PS : The plot is very very good. I love it very much, it's almost perfect and without loopholes, but it would've been better if CVs had planned the side characters as well and not just use them temporarily for the storyline as and when required.
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