FF:PyarHogaTohKuchIsTara:UPDTDpg49ENDNG!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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My other FF

FF:by rainshine

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/852488/ff-by-rainshine-11-pg-51-ending

Brief Updates

Pg1:Part1:The four girls:Kanya, Janki, Tina, Prachi....
Dhruv
The talk about senoirs party and dresses!!

Pg2:Part2:The party and their pretty dresses(CHECK THEM OUT!)
Two guyz enter..who is it?and why are they asking bout Kanya?

Pg3:Part3:Sameer likes Tina?!...............Ranbir and Jay enter😳

Pg4:Part4:Party ends
Ranbir pours water on kanya and pretends he did it and then
accidently falls on top of her

Pg5:Part5:Prachi and Kanya go to the boys condo and pour cold water on
Jay and Ranbir.....Ranbir runs after her and catches her...they stare
Next scence in the cafe...Kanya is eating spagetti when she finds
COCKROACHS in there(Fake).....grabs ranbirs hand and takes
him outside😳

Pg6:Part6:Kanya and Ranbir play volleyball.......kanya wins....
Kanya has to make ranbir do something...she asks him to kiss her?

Pg7:Part7:Ranbir kisses with his eyes closed and then sees he has kiss
a skunk and gets mad and trys scaring kanya by saying
he hasnt finished his dare...and they are running when suddenly
they look into eachothers eyes feel the warmth and make out!😳

Pg9:Part8:Ranbir and Kanya said their srys and became friends....Ranbir
gave kanya a pen which was one of those shocking pens and
she was shocked!😆Soon college was finishing with only
10 more days! They were at the pool and Kanya and Prachi
wouldnt come in the water and so ranbir and jay got them
but for that scence you have to read it cuz i cant just explain
it in a few words! PLZ READ!😊

Pg11:Part9: READ IT PLZ.......😳

Pg13:Part10:UPDATED!

Pg15:Part11:uPdAtEd!

Pg17:Part12:Food Fight .......😆

Pg19:Part13:movie and after!

Pg22:Part14:Ranbir Loves Kanya!

Pg26:Part15:Ranbir propses Kanya😳

Pg29:Part16:daydream😆

Pg31:Part17:cute!!!and funny!!!😆

Pg34:Part18:they leave for home!!!On the bus.............

Pg38:Part 19

Pg44:part20

Pg45:part 21

Pg50:ENDING!!

CHARACTERS!

Kanya---22 yrs old, stylish and pretty, finishing her last year of college in designing and will soon start herself, and has JUST moved BACK to Delhi

Ranbir---23 yrs old, strong and foolish but supportive at times, finishing her last year of business management and will soon take over his dad. Is attracted to modern but simple girls!

Janki:22 yrs old, Kanya's best childhood friend, really pretty, queit, helpful and very simple, but NOT alwayz in salwar kamez!.....majoring in arts!

Sammer:23 yrs old, very naughty but shy at times....helpful and cute!

Prachi-22 yrs old, very athletic, pretty but always has sports clothes on.... Going for police...

Jay- 22 yrs old, sporty, supportive, ignores and hates Prachi cause of her annoyingness...but has known her forever!

Tina-23 yrs old, very modern, also sportive...and going for the medical side

Dhruv-23 yrs old, very supportive, really outgoing, Ranbir's best friend, more like brothers! Looks tough but really is soft from the heart....caring!

KANYA's Mom

KANYA's Dad

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok looks interesting... so i'm goin to say continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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extremely intresting mix of characters... please do continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow a lot of characters! plzz start the story soon! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey hun continue soon...all my fav characters 😉 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 1

RING! RING!
Riya:hello?
Kanya:Janki?
Janki:omg TUM?!...kesi ho?
Kanya:mein tik hun....ab yeh bata tu kesi hai?
Janki:mein tik hun...aur han mom aur dad bhi....so
Kanya:im so tired...by the way im in Delhi
Janki:WWHHAATT??!!
Kanya:chill.....mein abhi aayi hun...
Janki:aur tu mujhe ab bata rahi hai?
Kanya:kya karti surprise dene wali thi...lekin phir socha phone karke bata deti hun
Janki:aacha ab bata kaha re rahi hai....mein aati hun...
------------------Kanya's house-----------------
Janki comes in and the servant asks her to sit and that Kanya will be here soon....shes waiting when Kanya's mom shows up....
KM:are janki tum?
janki:aunty---(gets up and takes blessings)
KM:khush raho....(kisses her on the forehead)....tujhe yahan dekh ke bohot acha laga...
Kanya tiptoes behind Janki.....(Kanya has capris and a t-shirt on)....and screams in her ear...."JANKI!!!!!!"
Janki jumps "AHH!!"
then goes after Kanya who already has a head start...
Kanya is jumping from one couch to the other....as Janki runs after her
Then Kanya's Mom gets in the middle
KM:Bas...bohot ho gaya!
Janki and Kanya stop and catch their breath from running so much then...
J+K:AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
THey both run and hug eachother like sisters!
K:I havent seen you forever
J:12 yrs!
KM:acha tum log bate karo mein abhi aayi
J:ok....bye aunty
K:bye mom!
Kanya takes her to the kitchen where she grabs an apple for herself and offers another of Janki but she says NO THANZ
J:aacha ab yeh bata itni aachanak yahaan aana kese hua?
K:woh...(takes a bite of her apple)...meri sab se kareb cousin ki shaadi hai...aur kal uski engagment thi!
J:really?....wow!...so tell me, how was it?
K:*sigh* I wasnt there for half the time
J:what?..what do you mean?
K:this bloody A*****e thought it was funny to give me the wrong directions
J:what why would you ask someone--
K: it wasnt just someone he owned a black mercedes and looked wealthy...he stopped with another monkey looking guy with him...and they showed no sign of lying except they kept on looking at eachother...and i found out why when i reached the point they told me to...and asked people around and they said i came the wrong way...
J:matlab woh-
K:agar woh mujhe phir kabhi mila i swear mein use nahi chodu gi...aur jab mein pochi toh sab mujhse baat nahi kar rahe the...i felt really bad!....
J:oh....acha ab kuch aur bate karte hai....vaise bhi tum ehsi muu latka ki kadi achi nahi lagti.....tu bilkul nahi badli
k:(starightens her face)...woh toh hai ...mein hun hi ehsi....vaise tu bhi nahi badli...like look you are still wearing salwar kamez(the same in the photo)....par tu chinta mat kar mein ab tumari hi college mei jane wali hun
J:kool....aur woh toh mein mandir gayi thi
K:aacha...prasad kaha hai...
J:woh..(she reaches for her side but doesnt find her purse)....mera purse...
(then she remembers)....
K:kya hua?
Janki says she'll say it on the way there and pulls kanya with her...
,,,,,ON THE WAY,,,,,,
J:tumara phone aya..maine utaya.....aur phir mein itni khush thi ki tum yahan ayi ho...ke mein mera bag waha chodke aygayi
K:oh.....
They arrive at the mandir and Janki and Kanya start looking around....
When someone comes behind Janki
"Looking for this?"
Kanya and Janki both turned around....
Janki:Dhruv?.....oh.....thank you.......lekin tumhe kese pata yeh meri hai
Dhruv directed her attention to the side of the bag....where she had stiched her name in bold letter"JANKI"
Janki:oh...chuckles....thanz again
Janki then realizes Kanya beside her....
J:oh...sry...dhruv yeh hai kanya aur kanya this is dhruv
Dhruv:hey!
Kanya:hi
They both shake hands
J:Kanya abhi abhi Delhi shift hui hai...aur woh humari hi college mein padne aane wali hai
D:really?...kool...
J:okay then....i guess we'll leave now...bye
D:bye
------------------ON THE WAY BACK--------------------
K:so....woh kya naam hai uska dhruv...han....woh wahan kya kar raha tha?
J:actually woh har guru var mandir ata hai
K:acha kyun?...tumse milne...
J:kya matlab..
K:nothing...
J:woh sirf ek dost hai......vaise bhi he already has a girlfriend
K:aur agar nahi hoti toh?
J:kanya......you are so annoying!
K:i know get used to it ab mein tumare saat tumari dorm mein rehne wali hun...
J:i know....oh that reminds me of prachi and tina
K:prachi and tina?
J:yea they used to live in your neighborhood....and oh you probably dont remember.......dont worry ill see........
-----------2 weeks later...AT KANYAS HOUSE------------
J:kanya?....kaha ho tum?
Kanya came out of her room with a bag
J:ready?
K:yep!
kanya bids her family goodbye and leaves with Janki to their college on the train..........they reach the college
K:wow! its really dark...
J:dont worry...once you get the streets and roads you'll be fine
K:hope so...
--------AT THE DORM ROOM---------
Janki opens the door
and gets hugged and surprised by two girls
one in a skirt and top(just like in the photo)...and the other in track pants and a tank top with her hair up
J:guys..this is Kanya!..
T+P:Kanya? omg!
T:we have heard a lot about you
P:we used to live in your neighorhood
T:anywayz guyz get ready for tomorrow!
J:why?
P:SENIORS PARTY!
K:seniors party?
T:see, in our freshman year i had a bet on with janki that i would organize a seniors party......but she said i would pobably forget by then.....but i didnt
P:and now janki has to follow Tina's orders
T:not only mine all 3 of us!
K:me too
T:yea!..youre part of us now!
Kanya smiled and Janki sighed
J:okay like what are you guys gonna make me do?
K:Oh......i have an idea........Janki will wear a dress
T:marvellous(puting her hands together)
J:okay par prachi aur kanya ko bhi ek dress pehen naa hoga
P:hum sab dress pehen ne ge tik hai?
T:dont worry main hun naa
P:iska hi toh dar hai
Tina slaps prachi lightly
...........so the night goes by as the 4 girls share jokes and talk getting to know eachother closely.............
And so the night is dark and they go to sleep late....
in the living room on the couch and swing....

Precap:there is a knock on the door kanya gets it!

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really cute start! cant wait till more guys enter 😉 ..plzz continue soon! i love ur ff's! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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reallyy cutte... you must continue!
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PART 2

Soon its morning.....Janki wakes up and calls everyone to get up...and heads to the kitchen to make coffee for everyone
Kanya sees her and so she follows to help out and heads to the kitchen as she puts her hair up in a bun with her bangs out....
(they live in an apartment...with 2 rooms...kitchen...living room and of course when you gotta go ...bathrooms...)
Soon Tina and Prachi get up and start helping out.....
They are all on the breakfast table when the bell rang
K:ill get it(since she was the closest to the door)
She opens the door and finds a guy in jeans and shirt w/ sripes of blue and green
J:are sameer tum?
S:hey janu..(he hugs janki)
J:janki not janu
S:yea yea wat ever!
J:come on in
They go to the table and sit down
T:hey sameer
P:yo....sami!(knuckle bump)
S:gosh i havent seen you guyz forever.......so howz life?
J:oh sameer...yeh hai Kanya....
S:kanya?..your kanya..the one you-
J:yeh
K:hi(lets a hand out)
S:hey kanya(give her a hug)........heard alot bout you....dont be shy k now you're a part of us
K:thanz
S:no thank you's now tell me guyz....are you guyz ready for tonight
P:totally
T:that reminds me ........remember we have to go shopping
K:right!
S:should i leave?
J:no...no...we are going at the afternoon....coffee
Janki handed him some coffee.....
Kanya looked around and found prachi dialing in a number
she didnt say anything but then the house phone started ringing...
Janki looked at the caller id and found it was prachi...she looked over at prachi and kanya saw prachi wink at her and it seemed as janki understood what she meant.....
J:Oh hi dhruv....kese ho?
K:(thinking)DHruV?
J:han han...tina hai naa............lo tina(janki handed her the phone and she played along.....and took the phone and walked into a room)
Kanya looked at Janki with a questioned face...
Janki just looked away looking at sameer who apparently looked like he was in deep thought
P:kya hua sami?
S:kuch nahi...mein chalta hun
J:are coffe toh pi lo
S:mujhe saruri kaam hai........bye....bye kanya
Kanya was knocked out of her thoughts
K:bye.......see ya tonight!
Sammer headed out and Janki and Prachi cracked up....
They both proceeded to tina when kanya caught janki's hand
K:yeh sab kya hai?
J:woh......okay look tina likes sammer-
K:what?! lekin-
J:listen to me.......so tina like sameer and something happened i dont know she wouldnt say but then she and dhruv started showing everyone they were going out........but one day i heard her and dhruv talking that it was all fake...so from then me and prachi are also helping trying to get sameer and tina together...
K:ohhhhhhhh!!...so thats what....so dhruv is free for you right?
Janki slaps kanya lightly on the shoulder
J:chale
They go inside and find prachi and tina laughing....
T:kanya...woh actuaally-
K:janki ne sab bata diya..........and let me tell you i have ideas..but for now to cheer all our moods...eventhough we are already happy.....lets go to the mall!
J:yea come on guyz!
--------------------AT THE MALL----------------------
They all go to buy dresses for tonight......
Kanya buys the best tturquoise colored dress for Janki
K:this will really look nice on you...
Janki trys it and everyone just stares at her preetiness in that dress


T:wow kanya great choice!
P:kya baat hai janki....wow!
t:i got a dress for myself its black....see

K:OH this light pink will look great on Prachi
P:no no...mein ehsa-
K:come on for ME!
P:sighs....fine

T:wow prachi.........gorgeous!
K:hey guyz.....how would this look on me?
Kanya came out with the dress on............they all stared in amuzement


J:agar tum ehse party mein jao gi toh sare ladke tumare piche line laga de ge...kyun?
P:bikul......kya lagti hai......mindblowing!
T:really kanya really cute
K:thanz
SO they bought their dresses and shoes and jewlry...kanya wore what was in that website...check it out
--------------------EVENING about 6------------------Everyone got ready and were about to leave when there was a knock on the door...
Kanya opened it
K:dhruv?
D:hey kanya.........wow you look really cute....
K:thanz same to you.....
Dhruv was wearing the shirt in his pic
Dhruv walked inside to find prachi, janki and tina
D:wow guyz.....you all look hot!
Kanya walked over next to him and pushed his jaw up so his mouth would close... and they laughed ......
D:acha ab chale...........i came to pick u all up...
They all leave and arrive at the party....
K:wow tina did you all this decorations?
T:yep with the help of prachi....cuz you and janki made it a bit late
K:well......sorry!
T:no sorrys! i was just kidding
K:mein bhi
They laugh and enjoy the time together....
-----------AFTER AN HOUR-------------------
Two guyz enter in the party....
while all four girls and Dhruv and Sameer are talking with other
In stepped two guyz in jeans and silk shirts with blazers........
Dhruv and Sameer went over and started talking with them
Suddenly one of them saw kanya and said:hey sameer...who is that?(pointing at her)

Precap:

K:he is the one that gave me the wrong directions

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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itttttt soundsss awesomeeee 😳 😳
wen is rannu gunna enter? 😳
tht dress tht u choose for kanya is toooo PRETTY..
do cont. soon 😃

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