*Chura Liya hi Tumne Jo Dil ko* Mehrya OS- Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Mishtilove

Anu di.

i love the song

thank you misti😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: KashishJ

OmG OmG OmG 😳 . Loved it Anu

Super sonic Mehrya😃

Love at first sight. Kiss in second. Proposal and then marriage in third & fourth.

Nailed it Anu. Where is MehRya baby???

Thanks for the pm




🤣
Thank you so much Kash glad you liked it
Ha bahuth fat hi mehrya😆
Baby tum imagine karlo🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Omg...iss Baar love ,kiss Nd decision to marry at first sight...wow Anu Di..kya baat hai.. 👏⭐️😳
This update was actually a mood lifter for me...
Desperateness ki dukaan SK.😆.and sharmaanewali Mehak...😉
Lovely combo Haan...
Oh god...how on earth a hubby would ask his wife whether she's a thief?..only SK can..🤣
Loved their intense moments Di...☺️
Thanks a lot for this sweet story Nd PM Di...❤️🤗
Do write more for us...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: dwriter

Omg...iss Baar love ,kiss Nd decision to marry at first sight...wow Anu Di..kya baat hai.. 👏⭐️😳

This update was actually a mood lifter for me...
Desperateness ki dukaan SK.😆.and sharmaanewali Mehak...😉
Lovely combo Haan...
Oh god...how on earth a hubby would ask his wife whether she's a thief?..only SK can..🤣
Loved their intense moments Di...☺️
Thanks a lot for this sweet story Nd PM Di...❤️🤗
Do write more for us...

🤣 bas sk hi pooch saktha hi aysi bathe😆
Noutanki Jo hi
Glad you liked it 😛
Thanks for reading shinu🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
Okay so Shaurya who was not at all willing to attend his own beat briend rajiv's marriage ...somehow managed to show up to the ceremonies and then fell in love in his first sight with mehak ...god he was quick to trap her in his love ...😆
And that was quick ...nice attempt Anu...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Thabassum19

Okay so Shaurya who was not at all willing to attend his own beat briend rajiv's marriage ...somehow managed to show up to the ceremonies and then fell in love in his first sight with mehak ...god he was quick to trap her in his love ... 😆

And that was quick ...nice attempt Anu...

hlo boss hru dear 😛
Thanks for reading glad you liked it😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Haseena2020


hello Anu, thank you for the update.
Well its a good plot, but you could have slow down a bit, by maybe make Rajiv get married first then slowly Shaurya approach for the sister. not like a hungry lion looking for his prey and attack immediately. Overall is lovely. You are typing from mobile so mistakes here and there I understand, the rest I alredy dm you... You are one naughty Panda and you can write too so I do expect you to write more... 😆😆😆

hmm I know dear but it's a single shot so made it go fast
Thanks for reading Haseena 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Unres my comment on update page
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: friendlyghost08

Res... 😃

Unres...sorry for late fb
Thats a sweet os ..pehli nazar me pyar ...then jhaat kiss phat shaadi...😛
Enjoyed reading it ..thanks for the pm
Keep writing dear

yah sab fatafat 😆
Glad you liked this small effort
Thank you so much Lima for reading

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