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WAQT

Waqt kisikeleye ruktha nahi, gam ya kushi ho...waqt chalta

rahata hai...

She is standing at the gates ...seeing it for the last time ,..the

changing name board from the Handa Haveli to Khurana

Mansion...she tried every possible way to stop this auction

n and save this haveli..but no she was not able to stop this...she

left the place before the security guard could make any

possible action...

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Geet beta where were you, I was searching for you...I am here only papa..

Come here...she went and sat near the bed ...

When did you start telling lies to your papa...

Papa..

Look into my eyes and tell me...


Papa I tried a lot , but could not save it ...she went into his

arms and poured out her heart ...


Papa you are having fever...it is not good , did you take that

medicine ...her hand went on the side drawer . she gave the

last medicine which is left in the strip...how can she forgot

she has to buy the medicines, and arrange the money for the

e next session of treatment ...babaji ...muje itna majboot

banadena ki ye asoon ki bhoond bhi nahi ana chahiye.

Geet, yash had come ...you were not there ..

She immediately tried to call him...but the balance in the

phone was taunting her...she tried to suppress the tears

coming from her eyes..

Geet ...geet...

Where are you lost ..hearing yash's voice ..kuch nahi yash..just

thinking about you..see..think about the devil..devil had come..

Geet...how could you compare your friend to a devil...

Sorry...how could I compare you to that devil..bechare devil

will feel so bad.

Seeing their conversation mohinder ...too felt happy , seeing

her smile after so many days.

Geet I have done your work... i found a job for you...but..


What happened ..yash is there any prob...

Geet ...I know , this job is under qualification for you...

It is okay yash..i just need that..you know how much I needed

a job at present , and even for treatment I needed

immediately you know that, but geet will you able to do this ...

this is governess job ...the family just returned from states,

and settled here, you have to take care of the kids...

Yash it is okay...I just need one job...nowadays it is difficult to

get a job even with qualification, And even I did not complete

my studies .

And you helped me a lot ,you stood for me , when everyone left me,

It is truly said that ..we can know the truly said...when we are

in need, then we can know the real nature of the people...

Geet ...why you are feeling sad, see everything will be okay,...

see my friend brother suggested this job...you are best for

this...you are very good at handling kids, tomorrow you have to

be in this address...see I heard the Maan singh Khurana is

very strict on time...make sure you are on time..you have take

care of the his nephews ..

Khurana ...geet was just thinking about the name

What happened geet what you are thinking...vo kuch nahi...just

thinking where I heard this name..

It is not possible they just returned from states expanding

their business,


Ha make sure you are there on time. Why you will not there

for me..no geet I am going out of station. Some emergency had

come, so this is the office address. They will take interview.

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Kisa ye waqt hai...is waqt ne is ghar se door kardiya..ab vahi

waqt ne phir se is ghar ke samne ne khada kardiya hai...

When she went to office they redirected to this address. Now

she remembered where she saw the Khurana name, yes it is

the same name she saw in the name plate ...

At one second her heart beats started to beat fast, gathering

all her lost energy she knocked her fav bell...which is her fav

she laughed at her thinking ..not only this bell..there are so

many things in his house which are her favorite her child ho

od days she has spent here...each thing she remembered her

mother has decorated this house. She is ...yes it is unique

one...it is just like temple bell.

pari beta...she came out her thoughts with her kaka voice..

Nakul was so much happy seeing her pari before him..geet is

just like a pari to him...

Kaka you have not left the house. But what is this stupid

question...when they themselves told them to stay here...when

kaka wants come along with them...she was afraid to take the

responsibility of his. When they themselves do not have the

proper shelter .

Pari beta tum idhar..sab kuch teekh haina..papaji teekh hai na..

Sab kuch teekh hai...vo idhar kuch interview hai...

Pari tum job karuagi...why kaka...situation are not same

before...waqt ne sab kuch badal diya hai kaka...nakul could

d see her pain in her eyes their talks came to break with

interruption of a female voice.


Nakul who is there ...

Geet saw a elegant lady coming from the stairs ,you are

geet ..my brother -in-law told that you will be coming

here..please take your seat.though she is not a foreigner she

is just looking like that her accent is more like that ...looking

like she is carrying ...hai iam nainatara..she called her

kids ..introducing them Kabir ,karan..they are in 5 th

grade..now I am not able to concentrate on them because

of my health issues. So want governess for them, who can

take care just like me.

Sure .., iam not be take care like you, but will try my level best

to come to your expectations .

Their talks came to break with nakul bringing her fav vanilla

milk shake..

It is good you brought nakul..i forgot to ask her ...by the way

how you know she likes this...

He could not able to answer this simple question. How could he

tell...she was once princess of the house...she was apple of

everyone brought up just like a princess... how does this

times changes every thing , that was the time when she was

living in this palace just like a princess, now with the time

change, she is working here ...

Madam brought milk for the kids, thought she too will drink.

At request of geet he kept quiet about her identity.

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one second geet felt very happy coming back like this to this

house...at least she is able to stay in the house, and connect

the memories of her mother.

Geet simple and sober nature instantly loved by everyone...

especially Savitri devi who is grand mother of the dev and

maan..

geet i saw you somewhere. But not able to relate...geet laughed

at her words. After so many days I am feeling very happy. Yes

what more I can ask..i could able to start treatment for

papa..the only thing which is troubling here is maan singh

Khurana...yes from the day one he is after me..do not know

how he got doubt in my behavior. But in my knowledge, I never

did anything which may make suspicious. ha I forgot I know

that day i could not hold myself and went into room now his

room he was just coming from the washroom.

He smiled at me and started coming towards me..at one second

I was lost in his smile,

Pari beta ..hearing nakul voice I came to my sense..o god kaka

how could he call with this name ...she immediately pushed

him and rushed outside...

Pari...how could nakul call geet like that..does he knows

before ..from that day on wards I started notice her

behavior ..

Nakul kaka how could you call with this name..you know that

they will get doubt and I do not want to know papa about all

these things , he will get upset...which is not good for his health..

Sorry beta from the next time I will make sure .. but maan

doubts increased with the next incident.

Di..di..hearing Kabir and karan voice I rushed to their room..

What happened why you are shouting like this..

Di ..they have given one school project there a exhibition in

the school , and our teacher has given the concept of

different types of houses..we have to present different

models of houses...

Why you are so worried by that I am there, and I will..now do


not make like these faces..di sach me you are going to help

us..ha baba ..now but now this finish this milk..with out any

fuss they finished.

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Maan was surprised seeing the live models of different

houses and the material used and instruments used for

making them. These are used by architect students .and when

he came to know that geet did all this..shaq yakken me

badalchuki hai ...ki geet kuch chupa rahi hai..

Now at any cost he wants to know about this geet..

Geet was in helpless position when Savitri devi requested to

organize birthday party for kids...even she could not deny

naintara who has requested her lot ,

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Party was going in full swing...what happned kaka..are you not

well..kuch nahi beta..just old age..kaka you wait .. I will see th

e preparations...going into the hall. Oh iam sorry ...but she was

rooted seeing him before her...

Rahul ...oh god what can I do now even I cannot run from here...

So Miss Geetanjali handa. handa princess..how come I am

surprised...you are here...wearing like these normal clothes...

are .you are working here ..if you would have married me, you

would have not have seen days..see now once the princess

of this haveli..now working here like a servant .

Geet stood rooted ,her head down, eyes filled with tears

threated to fall ..she closed her eyes ..as if not face this

situation. Want to go far away from this place.

Seeing the chaos maan reached there...he was shocked hearing

geet past, his hands automatically raised to take that tear

drop into his hands...his other hand went around her , as if

giving her support...

Mr. Rahul...how dare you come into my party and Insult our

family members...

Family member...oh ya I understand ...nice geet you catched a

big fish to retain your haveli...before he could continue his

talks, he cheeks echoed with the sound ..

Even maan was surprised when savitri devi slapped rahul...

How dare you touch Rahul...old women..

Hearing against his grandmother even maan raised his hands

against rahul.maan beta ..why you are wasting your energy on

these people see

Mr.Rahul..till now you are talking so much about geet

character, do you know about your family background...till now

you are taunting about geet background...you know she is truly

princess , and was brought up just like a princess their

forefather are kings to this region. May be they lost their

wealth ..but still you cannot stand against her you know who

are you.. and what your parents are...they are normal worker

s working in her haveli.. I still remembered that day she was

just small girl ...may be she do not remember all these..when

your parents requested money to start business, geet

grandfather has given the money ...you know what ..till now

whom you are insulting the same girl has given the money to

your parent s because she was considered as lucky charm...

Hearing all these things .rahul was rooted in his place..he just

simply left the place..

Dadima how you know all these things ..and till now why you

did not tell us..

Maan beta even I did not recognize her..when Rahul called with

the geentajali handa I started recollecting the name..your

grandfather and her grandfather were close friends...even he

helped us in starting our business. He did not take money

which he had given at that time. Maan beta every time you

aks who is this geetnajali handa who hold 25 percent shares

in our company ..she is same geet .when your grandfather

wants to return the money they did not take so the same

money we have invested back in the company as her

share..your father started expanding business in the

states...after that we lost contact with that family. After

coming here I tried to enquire about them but could not ab

le to find them..even I did not know that this the same haveli

once they owned it ...

Geet beta. Hearing dadima voice she came out of the trance...

Sorry beta for all these...

Nahi dadima ..please ise math kahiyi..is me apki kya galiti

hai..ye to mera waqt hi kharab hai, isme apka kya kassor...

dadima I want to leave now..bahut raat ho chuka hai..papa will

be waiting for me..

Geet just wait one min..seeing her going maan could not hold

himself..he rushed towards the door..

He kneeled down before her.. taking her hand geet I know

this is not time and place ..but I could not hold myself see

ing you going like this... First time I saw you..i fallen in love

you.. ...I just want my spend rest of life with you, wants to

start the day with you, and night in your arms. Winking at

her...will you please marry me.

Dadima is it true what iam seeing..ha dev beta..finally your

brother has fallen in love..

The man who runs away hearing the word love..does not believe

in this word..now proposing that too before everyone ...

Ha dev beta ..this is called love ...and what more I can

ask..when your brother has found his true love..

Geet just lost in his smile. What more she can ask..what she

fascinated about is coming true. His prince charming

proposing like this...she felt as if time has stopped at one

second.lekin ye waqt hai..gam ye kushi ho waqt chalta rahta hai... ..

THIS IS NOT JUST END OF THE STORY JUST

BEGINNING OF THEIR LOVE FILLED ROMANTIC JOURNEY ...

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HAI GIRLS COULD NOT HOLD POSTING THIS OS WROTE LONG BACK
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lovely n amazing story
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Congrats on the OS!!

superb fab OS! well written!

Liked how Maan proposed!

awesome end!
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Nice story.. short sweet and emotional. Although I would have liked if Maan was shown to be attracted to Geet right from the beginning..
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on the OS!!


superb fab OS! well written!

Liked how Maan proposed!

awesome end!

Thank you dear
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Nice story.. short sweet and emotional. Although I would have liked if Maan was shown to be attracted to Geet right from the beginning.. [/QU
I know we would like to read lot of mannet romance but it us Short story so cannot add more
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sahi mein...waqt sab kuch hai...wohi bigadta hai...wohi sabadta hai...chalo geet ki babaji ne maan ko la diye uske zindagi mein...

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Originally posted by: love2_soma

sahi mein...waqt sab kuch hai...wohi bigadta hai...wohi sabadta hai...chalo geet ki babaji ne maan ko la diye uske zindagi mein...

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