OS - The Confession

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It was evening already , Sun was setting far away into the horizon as Karn walked towards an unknown destination. He just walked almost lost in his own thoughts.. The letter he just read out loud in front of everyone had pierced his heart into pieces.. After reading it and taking along that black lotus he went out of the sabha and head into that aimless direction as if he wanted to sought comfort for his burning heart.. All those words .. did they really come from Princess ? Did she think so low of him? He just wanted to see her smile and happy but in return of his gesture he didn't see this coming.. May be his mother was right about the palace people.. May be he was wrong all this while .. He has seen worst of insults and have managed to brush aside those .. but this was giving a steep pain in his heart..
From the time he had seen Princess in his room when she first came for that ratn , he was astounded by her beauty and there was something about that face which made his heart skip a beat.. He could sense that softness and kindness of that soul.. Could he be so wrong all along..?

But why was it hurting so much..? As if someone had punched his heart and taken out and broken that into pieces... A lone tear came in those eyes.. It never came before.. even when he was insulted for his birth into countless situations before... Why now?

Had he fallen in love with princess before she had crushed his heart so badly..? Why it hurt this time more... He was still not angry with her... more with himself.. perhaps .. as he took out that black lotus a gentle smile came on those lips with pain reflecting in his eyes ..May be this was the end before it could even start.. those feelings shall remain hidden forever in his heart.. He still wished her all happiness.. She was his first but indeed forbidden love..


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Haven't yet watched the episode , the letter is that bad?
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zephyr_57

Haven't yet watched the episode , the letter is that bad?



Ya it was very bad.. imagine even dushy felt bad for karn
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: riti4u

It was evening already , Sun was setting far away into the horizon as Karn walked towards an unknown destination. He just walked almost lost in his own thoughts.. The letter he just read out loud in front of everyone had pierced his heart into pieces.. After reading it and taking along that black lotus he went out of the sabha and head into that aimless direction as if he wanted to sought comfort for his burning heart.. All those words .. did they really come from Princess ? Did she think so low of him? He just wanted to see her smile and happy but in return of his gesture he didn't see this coming.. May be his mother was right about the palace people.. May be he was wrong all this while .. He has seen worst of insults and have managed to brush aside those .. but this was giving a steep pain in his heart..

From the time he had seen Princess in his room when she first came for that ratn , he was astounded by her beauty and there was something about that face which made his heart skip a beat.. He could sense that softness and kindness of that soul.. Could he be so wrong all along..?

But why was it hurting so much..? As if someone had punched his heart and taken out and broken that into pieces... A lone tear came in those eyes.. It never came before.. even when he was insulted for his birth into countless situations before... Why now?

Had he fallen in love with princess before she had crushed his heart so badly..? Why it hurt this time more... He was still not angry with her... more with himself.. perhaps .. as he took out that black lotus a gentle smile came on those lips with pain reflecting in his eyes ..May be this was the end before it could even start.. those feelings shall remain hidden forever in his heart.. He still wished her all happiness.. She was his first but indeed forbidden love..



Nicely done DIDI..
A Nice OS on Karn feeling..

The serial does not show Karn feeling on message.They only showed that Karn is very angry..I think this the first time in this serial where not only Karn's eyes but his also voice shows his feelings
Edited by Karnfan999 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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@vinay- yes Ashim was good there..I felt his pain ..it was subtle not loud but very painful..thanks for commenting.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: riti4u

@vinay- yes Ashim was good there..I felt his pain ..it was subtle not loud but very painful..thanks for commenting.


No problem didi ..😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautifully written, Karnamaate.😊 A handful of heartfelt emotions. Sorry for the late comment. IF was not allowing me to...pata nahin if yeh Durvi ka asar hai...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

Beautifully written, Karnamaate. 😊 A handful of heartfelt emotions. Sorry for the late comment. IF was not allowing me to...pata nahin if yeh Durvi ka asar hai...


Thank you Jamy🤗 and Durvi ki toh😡

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