Guddan

AKSHAN OS Tere Kareeeb last part updated 25 November - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
When are you going To Continue!!!!!!😭
Beech mein latkaya mat karooo
Damn i'm waiting eagerly! 
Jab main scene aaya toh you stopped it..
Continue quickly kayaπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome start
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Its very good...first silence then it breaks
Guddan do her "izzhar e mohabbat" 
Only aj uncle bache hn
Please tried to be write more lengthy
I want to read more and more
Bcoz DIL MANGE MORE😎
Continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Kaya very beautiful update
Love the conversation 
Coffee or tea time with your better half is the best
Please write soon 
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Posted: 5 years ago

Chapter -2


When she collided with his chest. They shared an intense eyelock.then guddan breaks the silence n started" aapko lagta hai ki har faisle me Dil hi hona galat h to thik h haa main hu galat. Ha main Karti hu Apne pati se pyaar to kya galat hai isme. Ha takleef Hoti h mujhe jab koi apko dhokha Dene k bare me sochta BHI h to. Aap to hamesha hi dimaag se chalte hai na to thik h aap chaliye Apne dimaag se aaj k baad apko mere peeche aane ki MERI Chinta Karne ki ya MERI fikar Karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai.bahut pareshan ho liye aap bus ab or Nahi."


She broke her mangalsutra n put it on his hand. N said" aaj abhi or isi waqt se Agni ko Sakshi man k Aapne Jo  vachan mujhe diye the main un sabhi apko azaad Karti hu aaj k baad apko MERI ye shakal Kabhi Nahi dekhni padegi. Jaiye Mr. Akshat Jindal sorry AJ aaj se aap azaad Hain."


Akshat looked her for a moment n then said " ho Gaya bol liya ab main bolunga or tumko sunnna padega. Ha main Nahi karta tumse pyaar janti ho kyon, kyonki aaj tak jis se b pyaar Kiya hai use kho Diya h Maine mere papa, MERI khushiyan MERI antara Sab Kuch. Bahut pyaar karta tha main antara se usne MERI Zindagi me aakar mujhe or nikhara or sanwara. Magar us k Jane k baad MERI Zindagi hi badal gayi. Har cheez mujhe jhoothi or khokhli lagne lagi. Magar phir tum aayi MERI Zindagi me. Ek toofan  tumhe Yaad hai tumne dhanteras par maa se Kaha tha na ki toofan Ka Kam Hota hai Sab Kuch bikher dena. Sach Kaha tha tumne Sab Kuch bikher Diya tumne mere aas pass b or mere andar bhi tumne bikher Di dher sari khushiyan muskurahatein hasi Zindagi apnapan or bikher Diya dher Sara pyaar MERI Zindagi me mujh me. Maine antara se bahut pyaar Kiya Uske pyaar ne mujhe pyaar Karna sikhaya tab jab hamara Sathi b hamse pyaar karta ho. Lekin beshart pyaar jisme na Kuch pane ki ummeed ho na hi khone ki wo pyaar Karna Maine tumse seekha hai. Ye jaante hue b tum mujhse pyaar Karti Rahi ki main tumhe Kabhi pyaar Nahi Kar paunga. Haa ye sach h ki main tumhe Kabhi antara ki jagah Nahi de sakta kyon ki antara mere pahla pyaar hai MERI pahli biwi thi wo magar mere isss Dil me Jo jagaah Apne liye tumne Khud banai hai us jagah ka kya???. Ha main har cheez me dimaag se chalte hu har plan mein sirf dimaag use karta hai.dil ki counting ki hi nahi. Main Nahi janta tha ki koi aisa BHI Hoga Jo is akdu sadu khadoos gussail short tempered arrogant khoosath torturing Akshat se BHI pyaar Kar lega. Guddan aaj abhi main yahan tumse ye kahta hu ki Agni ko sakshi mankar Jo vachan Maine tumhe diye the  apni akhiri saans tak har USS vachan ko nibhaunga." Saying this he tied the mangalsutra in her neck n said " I Love You"


N they both lost in each others arms as the found the true love of their life.


N they lived happily ever after.


So guyspls tell me how was it I will be back after my exams n will write another os. N continue the FF.

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Posted: 5 years ago
Wonderful ending πŸ‘
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Posted: 5 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Wonderful ending  πŸ‘


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Posted: 5 years ago
Hey Dear, it's one of the most beautiful confessions I have ever come across ...
Keep up the good work ...πŸ€—

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Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful ending 
Love it
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Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful ending
Loved Akshat heartfelt confession for Guddan