FF : dil da mamla - precap 4 sc.22 pg 32 - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
nice update.please cont soon.......i m waiting 4 more ar scenes in armann's house
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow devo vry nce prt now she'll stay in armaan house wowbt whts d ridz pro why she alwys behavd lke ths 2 armaan ek to seedhe baat karo uper se attitude dikhao god......thnks fr d pm lvd it yaar cont soon...........
yachna 😊 😊
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precap : ridz walks away disgusted of armaan's behaviour...

now -Scene # 12 -

....but armaan pulls her down the staircase....

ridz : armaan kya kar rahe ho ?
armaan puts his hand o'er her mouth : no basket !
ridz : armaan plz haath chodo !
armaan : nahi riddhima
ridz is unable to do anything : armaan....
armaan : naa basket ! ab tumhe meri baat sun ni hi padegi - aakhir tumhe mere ghar par jo rehna hai.....
ridz : arm...
armaan : (again he puts his hand ) kya kaha maine....ab mujhe ek baar toh tumhaari khaatirdaari karne ko milegi
ridz : tum itne mazaakiya kab se ban gaye ?
armaan : main hamesha se hi mazaakiya hoon....tumhe kaise nahi pata - atul , anjie , sapna - sab hum dono ke baare me hi toh khusur pusur karte rehte hain....
ridz : thank god ! pehli baar tumne kuch akal waali baat kahi
armaan : toh kya main akalmand nahi ?
ridz : kuch waisa hi samajh lo....haa,haa,haa...

Ridz does a thumbs down n runs away from there n most importantly her anger has cooled down bcoz of armaan's 'mazaakiya harkat'....

armaan to himself : OYE HOYE.....

Meanwhile in another part of the world , another love story has already reached the marriage level....

boy : its been a long time....we'll have to meet armaan
girl : yea , armaan
boy : yes i still remember him - he used to b always surrounded by girls....
girl : yea hiw can i forget im ? i too fell for his charm...
boy : but i overtook him though
girl : yes somehow i lykd u better than him
boy : i still wonder how i got married to u....
girl : opposites attract...
boy : yea now ive remembered - he's got another gurlfrnd
girl : yea ? sounds interesting 😊 😊
boy : u don't hv to worry sweetheart ! we'll meet him soon...

BACK to the actual scene , outside sanjeevani , ridz is waiting for armaan to arrive wid his car -

Armaan arrives wid his carn helps ridz to get in -

ridz : thanx armaan !
armaan : plz basket ! feel free
ridz : i can't thank u enough for all that u have done for us
armaan : plz riddhima....not for dr shashank but 4 u n only u...
ridz blushes.....armaan drives on.....

ridz is very tired n sleepy n has already slept.....armaan is still driving.....due to rough roads , howevr hard on tries , he will nt b able to drive smoothly.....so bcoz of a sought of rash driving ( but v know that armaan wud never do that purposely ) , ridz' head fell on armaan's shoulder....armaan smiles to himself

ridz bcums disturbed n she realises wat she was upto n doesn't know wat to do ......meanwhile armaan's favourite song is playing -

KYUN KHOYA KHOYA CHAND KI FIRAAK KE TALAASH MEIN UDAAS HAI DIL....
KYUN APNE AANKHON SE KHAFA KHAFA ZARA ZARA SA NARAAZ HAI DIL....
YEH MANZILEIN TOH KHUD HI LE GAYE....
YEH FASLE TOH KHUD HI DE GAYE.... KYUN KHOYA KHOYA CHAND KI FIRAAK KE TALAASH MEIN UDAAS HAI DIL.....
(song contd.)

ridz : armaan.....
armaan : riddima.....

Armaan's house approaches but another disappointment - ridz has hurt her leg very badly....so ridz is forced to b carried inside by armaan.....

armaan takes her inside n leaves her in one of the rooms ( nt armaan's room ) -

ridz : thanx armaan !
armaan : plz riddhima !
ridz : no armaan
armaan : nahi basket ! now that u r LIVING wid me for a few days u hv to obey me - i say no formalities....by formalities i mean - no 'thanyou's ', etc...
ridz : she is on the verge of laughter - ji huzur...
armaan : thats better !
ridz : r u trying to dominate me ?
armaan : u r supposed to b knowing me now - ive had gurlfrndz...so i shud hv bin dominating naa ?
ridz : ARMAAN....
armaan : ok now plz no the famous 'ridz ka gussa'
ridz cannot hold her laughter : oh...ok who will not listen to you ?
armaan : oh so u agree ? u'll listen to me ? wow thts really an achievement ! riddhima gupta armaan mallik ki baat sun rahi hai !
ridz : armaan plz! m tired !
armaan : ok jokes apart ! i am sure that u'll b comfortable in my house ! i u need anything plz don't hesitate to knock at my door....ok goodnight ! sleep tight !
ridz : goodnight armaan..... 😳 😳


hope u all lykd it ! will post next part soon ! 😊

Precap : sapna's birthday party .....will reveal the 'boy n girl' characters......


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Posted: 17 years ago
nice update and who is the boy and the girl i just hope they do not create probs between them..please cont soon and yah thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
as i hv mentioned - da boy n gal r married so they'll not create any probs between AR - so b assured....
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow devo again amazng prt yaar nd lng nd intrestng 1wow now ridz is lvng wth armaan i am sooo happy yaar nd whoz ths grl nd boy may be rahol nd muskaan..........luv u soo mch yaar u to tooo good ho ji.........cont soon
yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
oh!!!!! cho cho cho seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttt prt yaar
yaaa ridz n armi stayin 2gedre great 😆
cant wait 2 read more yaar
cont super sooooooooooooooooooooooonnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey!!

gr8 parts!!!!!

do cont. soon!! luv ur ff!!!!


Marisha 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey yaar i want more comments to continue my ff .....plz do reply guyz.... 😭
shalika thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part please cont karo na please 😭

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