FF : dil da mamla - precap 4 sc.22 pg 32

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hey guyz....dis is my 1st FF ....so plzzzz comment.....

Scene # 1

At ridz home...

ridz: utho di ,jogging ke liye nahi jaana kya?

anji:nahi ridz...mujhe aaj jogging karne ka man nahi...plzz tum chali jao naa..sorry!

ridz:theek hai di aap phir kabhi aa jaana

Ridz is on her way jogging.....suddenly she stops, looking at armaan(background music).Both of dem look into each others eyes...

armaan: hi basket! tum yahan kaise?

ridz:jaise tumhe pata hi nahin ki main yahan har din jogging karne aati hoon......

armaan:ok bye!! meet u in sanjeevani...

Ridz jus makes a facial expression n leaves...

In locker room-atuj n sapna already there...ridz enters ....armman following.....

ridz:hi atul , hi sapna

armaan: hi all ...nice dress basket!!

ridz: umm...thanx!!...aaj hi layi hoon...

Pager rings 4 atul n sapna.....

sapna:dr.keerti se pager hai...c u all later

atul:mujhe bhi jaana hoga varna gabbar mujhe jaan se mar dalegi.....

ridz:main bhi jaati hoon...mere patients mera intezaar kar rahe honge

she leaves ....armaan is just standing there admiring her beauty...

plz do tell me if u liked dis ...shud i continue?

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devilofkindness thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wat guyz...9 views n only 1 reply 😭
dont b soo lazy
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ofcourse u shud continue wid dis rocking ff ..
btw , ur siggy just rocks .. armaan luks really hot ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey yar plzz do cont...i luv readin ffs
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg..neeru..lovely yaar..do contd!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey neeru dooooooooooooo!!contd it
your sweet little sis


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Posted: 17 years ago
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i lyked it!!!!!!! 1st prt is really nce! gd sart contd soon! will be w8in for d nxt prt! 😛
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hey guyz m back!

scene#1(contd.)

In da general ward-

ridz:ab tum kaise ho,sumit?
sumit:main ab thoda better feel kar raha hoon...jab bhi aap mere samne hoti ho , mujhe apne saare dard yaad hi nahi rahte....
ridz:koi pareshaani ho to mujhe bula lena..mujhe aur bhi patients ko attend karna hai
Armaan is very jaelous of sumit...
armaan:basket tum mere saath thodi der ke liye aa sakti ho?
ridz:haan , kyun nahi

Scene # 2

In da corridor-

armman:usse kya zaroorat thi waise tumse baat karne ki?
ridz:use kise aur kya baat?
armaan:sumit , tumhara patient aur kaun?
ridz:main uski doctor hoon armaan...aur kyunki main ek doctor hoon meri farz banta hai ki main uska haal chaal poochoon...
armaan:aur main?tumhe toh meri koi fikar hai hi nahi... 😭 😭
ridz:armaan...tum kya kehe rahe ho? hosh mein ho ki nahi???
armaan:tum jaanti ho ki main kehena chahta hoon...par tum ho ki samajhna nahi chahti...

...n den ridz slips dow da staircase n armaan holds her by da waist....dey both look into each others eyes...(background music)...ridz blushes...armaan lifts her n takes her down da staircase...

ridz:yeh tum kya kar rahe ho,armaan?
armaan :jo mujhe theek lagta hai wahi...

den he comes so close 2 her dat he can feel her breath....

ridz:armaan....
armaan:ab tum kuch nahi bologi..(keeping his hand on her lips)..den he takes her hands n keeps 1 on his waist n da other 1 on his shoulder ....dey cum sooo close 2 each other dat ridz can feel his heart thumpin in passion.....
jus den sapna enters da staircase.dey both were almost gonna kiss.....
sapna:oops! sorry....armaan..ridz tum dono yahaan?
armaan:nahi...woh kya hai naa....
ridz:offo! armaan tum toh kuch bol hi nahi paate...woh actually sapna, armaan ko pair mein mocchh aa gaya hai isliye main davayi lene ke liye aayi thi...tab armaan mere peeche peeche aa gaya...
sapna:ok then...kya tum mere saath aa sakti ho??mujhe tumse kuch reports clarify karne the...
armaan:arrey! 😡 😡 😭 yeh sapna ko bhi abhi hi basket se kuch kaam tha...

hey...m waitin 4 ur replies...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey. good part. i really liked it. please update soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
that was a really good part plz update the next part
😊 swansea 😊

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