Chance... Mauhaan MS (Part 2 updated)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Mauli wanted a clean start, a new challenge that would take her away from the painful memories and the city where she learned hope, love, trust and betrayal.. After saying her goodbyes to mumma and dida and promising to be in touch, she set out for Mayurbhanj, one of the maoist affected districts of Odisha where MMR was high but gynics were afraid to get posted there.. But she was determined to do something for all those suffering women without fearing anyone.. She left her comfortable job at Mumbai and shifted to the government hospital there..
Mauli started seeing patients at her home for free after her hours at the hospital.. She wasn't worried about being overworked, doing something for those poor women who couldn't afford good healthcare gave her peace.. Lately she had started travelling to such villages where roads were not good in weekends.. She did there free checkup and adviced them about cleanliness and lifestyle.. The roads were so bad that sometimes she had to use her own scootie for going there.. Her social works earned her name and fame in the remote areas..

One such evening, she was returning on her scootie alone when she was attacked by the maoists.. They kidnapped her and demanded release of their comrade.. She was starved and tied for days.. She refused to eat anything fearing they may poison her.. Weaknesss took her willpower even to keep her eyes open... She could hear gunshots being fired and a very commanding voice asking her captors to surrender.. She didn't remember anything else before she became completely unconscious..

She woke in a hospital bed.. The doctor explained her that she was just weak and would be released in two days.. She talked to her family and mamma asking them not to worry.. They wanted to fly down and kept on asking her to return.. After assuring them that she would think about it, she cut the call..

There was a soft knock on her door.. A young man with flowers entered.. He wished her well and introduced himself as Ishaan Dixit, the SP of the district.. She recognised his voice as the one negotiating with her kidnappers.. They talked for sometime about the condition in the district.. He asked her whether she was thinking of going back and hoped the incident won't force her to do so.. He promised her police protection the next time she went to far places and asked her to personally contact him if she ever needed any help.. His eyes showed the admiration he had for her work and something else she couldn't place easily.. He invited her for a function at a school if she still decided to stay in the place..

"Dusro ka khayal rakhte rakhte, apna khayal rakhna bhulna nahi chahiye" were his parting words before he left..

Mauli thought for sometime and decided to stay back.. She was going to give the place and herself another chance.. She had to skip the scootie rides though.. She looked at the flowers and hoped for a better tomorrow..



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful!!! Love it. Please continue...
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This is very well written jiggy...continue soon...
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This is so beautiful . Plzz Continue Soon 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Glad you all liked it.. Had planned just an OS.. But will definitely take the story forward soon..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 2

By the time the evening for the party dawned, Mauli had made up her mind to go the party.. She couldn't hide with her miseries throughout her life.. She was going to meet new people, make new friends and enjoy her life to the fullest.. Nothing could stop her.. Niether her cheating soon-to-be ex-husband or the outlaws who kidnapped her.. She was goin to see new dreams and fulfill it herself..

She went to the party and was confused what to do.. She knew no one here except him, the dashing SP.. Just when she was thinking to go back, she heard her name and saw him coming towards her.. Well the man was going to be the death of her.. If he looked handsome in his uniform, he looked absolutely yummy in suits.. She had to stop admiring him in her head..😆


"Miss Mauli, thank you so much you came here.. The kids here would be so impressed with you.."
He requested her to follow him to the stage and that was how Mauli found herself seating on the stage with him and others with nearly 400 pairs of curious eyes looking at her.. She was just happy looking at the kids and sad at the same time.. If Kunal hadn't done this to her, after some years her child would have been going to school..

She was lost in her memories when he spoke and thankfully stopped her from thinking about those things again..
"You know these kids come from very poor families.. Earlier teachers didn't want to stay in these unsafe conditions and teach them but thankfully after so much persuasion we have been able to establish a proper school for them.. But still they lack in many aspects.. We conduct weekend classes for them sometimes to bridge the gap.. If you are free, you could join us anytime.."

"I would love to.." Mauli didn't need time to think..

"I knew you would do it when I heard about you for the first time.." That genuine smile on his face made her feel like a million bucks..

The event started.. They were given bouquets.. They were called one after another to give speeches.. She was mesmerized when he started to speak, his vision, his passion to do something appealed to her.. He had great plans for the area, it was like he had been dreaming and planning about this for years.. There was a spark in his eyes when he directly questioned the kids and they answered..

When she was called, she felt nervous for sometime but one look at his encouraging face, she decided she could do it.. She wasn't going to disappoint anyone.. She spoke about her journey, how medical field gives many opportunities and many other things.. That night she slept with satisfaction...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautifully written

Keep it up.

"Dusro ka khayal rakhte rakhte, apna khayal rakhna bhulna nahi chahiye" ⭐️
Edited by Sabyata - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sabyata

Beautifully written

Keep it up.

"Dusro ka khayal rakhte rakhte, apna khayal rakhna bhulna nahi chahiye" ⭐️


I copied Ishaan's dailogue..😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jiggy7


I copied Ishaan's dailogue..😆



👍🏼 it worked well

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