Bepannah : If I was writer of the show (Not a Spoof) / Updated

-Zoya-yash and pooja-aditya filled episodes with constant alluding to something being wrong.
-then after a week or so (or at the end of the first week), the accident occurs. On the day of the accident aditya and zoya meet as already shown in the show (the first episode where they run after one another.
-Zoya does not believe yash could have possibly had an affair as she had received a text from him with an address where he had decided they would celebrate their anniversary. It would be later revealed that a second murder had been planned i.e. Zoya's since the murderer would have been under the illusion that yash had told his wife about the threats he had received.
-the murderer would not have been aware of the ema and would have assumed that it was pooja who was the wife but when he picked up yash's fone after the murder, he realizes he got the wrong lady and sends that text then.

-none of the hooda or siddiqui family members committed the murder since I would have written to be complex families with their own issues but not the sort who would cause their children pain. Waseem would have tried to give yash money to get him to leave zoya after he finds out about the affair. But would not have killed him.

-Zoya and aditya reach the site if the murder. The rest occurs as in the show.

-But now zoya is the prime target.
-zoya tries to leave for Yash's funeral but the police stop her at the airport saying someone had tipped them off about a possible attempt on her life.
-that anonymous someone would in fact be the killer who wants zoya to stay in mussoorie so that he can kill her.

-unfortunately for the murderer, aditya refuses to leave with his family and stay back in mussoorie

-someone attacks zoya at her place but she manages to run out and straight into aditya who is for once sober. Aditya realizes that zoya is wounded and tries to take her to the hospital.
-he manages to get her there but while zoya is unconscious, she dreams about the time when yash had told her that if he was ever not there with her, she was to open a certain safe and mail the contents to the mentioned address.
-zoya still believes yash was innocent and aditya is convinced that his wife betrayed him. This leads to a falling out between them when zoya wakes up since she wants to go back to her and yash's home. Aditya does not realize it's because she wants to open the safe as soon as possible. He leaves her in the hospital. But decides to keep walking around her house just in case something happens again. He feels she is now his responsibility since they are both going through the same grief and betrayal.
-zoya goes back to her house but armed with a taser. Before she gets there, she gets a call from her father who had received a call from the hospital about his daughter. He tells her to stay away from the house and wait for him but she refuses and says she has to do something important since it was the last thing yash had asked of her. She opens the safe and is about to leave with the contents when she hears the door close behind her and someon laughs

Any longer and this will become a fan fiction 😆 but this is the main outline. It keeps the thriller factor and the romance too.

Exactly location shoots gives more TRP and if leads in good clothes are shown in such locations for extended track TRPs deffo rise.

Problem is BP writers wasted time in Fake Marriage PooSh pure love Arshad and Rajveer tracks instead of focusing on mystery thrill aspect.

Thanks! :) glad you liked it. Yours was pretty cool too. To be honest I think the CVs did not realize that on a bigger channel, they could afford to take take time with the tracks. That they did not have to fast forward things. And when trps started decreasing, the channel interfered which is never a good thing since only the makers of the show itself can remain true to the story itself.
Also I can't help but feel the show might have fared better if zoya had been shown to be religiously ambiguous. She could have been someone who read up on all religions. So many muslims stopped watching the show because of the way the whole marriage and post marriage tracks were handled with regard to zoya being a muslim. I think keeping her religion ambiguous might have been the better way to go. Being a muslim, there are things I have disagreed with but I'm not saying this to start an argument. I also realize it's just a show (I don't contribute to TRP since im a Pakistani) Just mentioning something that may have caused a decreased TRP. Along with late start and poor handling of the time slot by the channel

Yeah that's precisely what I said in my comment (the one with my idea for the story had I been the writer) I would have enjoyed more mussoorie but maybe it was too expensive?

Anyways now we cant to anything. Lets hope that if by chance there is possiblity of Season 2 then Cvs do consider points mentioned.